too funny :)

Ginger got what she deserves. What goes around comes back around ten fold. I dont feel sorry for her at all. Francis is next along with her punk brother who hides behind his badge.

You are a tease. You got us all excited with Mal and Coco's bedroom scene. Can't wait for the real thing for the two freaks.....LOL

GREAT UPDATE!

Author's Response:

So glad that you love the update! I just had to do a little where are they now ? segment on the couple you love to hate: Ginger & Benny.

Great update...so Francis is still going to try and fight.  Her brother is that police officer who hates CoCo, because she is his sister.  There father will kill anyone who hurts her.  

Does CoCo know who her father really is?  So many secrets and drama... Yeah

What a masterpiece

Lmao. Calise was so wrong! Mal and CoCo were hot though. They SO want each other. They need to stop denying it.

Oooh. Durbin is ALB's brother and Jethro is their father. CoCo's father is Jethro. They are related!! Then why was Durbin checking her out in the other story. That's nasty!!!!! Daren deserved that ass whooping he got. Durbin is plotting and CoCo and Mal better be on the lookout.

HA HA!! Ginger got served with divorce papers. I'm glad Benny at least feel some remorse for what he's done. That means he's growing. Ginger is just a horrible person.

UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks for the great update... Oh ALB's really makes me ILL she acted like she did NOTHING wrong in what happened at the B&B.. and Darren got BEATDOWN b/c he that PUNK HIT CoCo... Francis has ISSUES, and she is taking it out on the WRONG people, she needs to have it out with her FATHER, he is the one that broke up his marriage, it was HIS DECISION.

All I have to say about Ginger is that KARMA is a BITCH, and she got you GOOD... and it seems that Benn6y has learned from his MISTAKES.

Mal and CoCo are still HOT... and if Callie hadn't come in, they would have broken the bed... I can't WAIT for that to happen.

Oh BTW whoever called Durbin better call the hospital b/c Mal is going to have him in there next to Darren.

Feel Better, and update when you can.

Thank the heavens that ALB and her cohorts got the beating of their life. Where did they come from anyway? I'm glad that Calise and Linette handled them. I know Coco is not finished with ALB yet. She keeps trying to provoke Coco. A hoe will never understand when to stop.

Darren has gone too far. He must be out his damn mind PUNCHING Coco. Not even a hit or a slap, but a punch straight to her face?! He couldn't reserve that shit for his slut of a wife?! I agree wholeheartedly with what Coco said. He must be his wife's bitch, because for the life of me, I don't understand why he is in denial and can't understand that his wife is playing him.

I am so happy that Mal charged him and beat him bad. It's so sexy to see a guy all angry and frustrated fighting for the woman he cares about. I know he is already proving himself a worthy man for Coco. Mal is just itching to kill Darren. Darren may want to rethink coming anywhere near the family or going to any family reunions from now on. Its him and his wife only now. I lol'ed when Coco was like she missed him beating Darren up.

I agree with another reviewer. Mal's shower scene was niiicceee. Too bad he had to waste that. Let's see how the morning after goes. Coco may be cool with what happened, but may sing a different tune when she wakes up to Mal right there beside her. But I believe he is slowly bringing down her defences.  

Update soon. <3

P.S. Everytime I look at the story's banner, I think Mal is looking straight at me. He has such nice eyes, lol.

Yeah....I caught that too! She's a blood sister as well! Mary has to know; nothing gets by her! It might crush CoCo though to think her mother caused them any kind of pain, much less that type.

Darren...I cant believe this fool actually hit CoCo at all, much less like that! He punched her in the face! What's this fools deal?! He needs to check himself when it comes to that ho' he married. Its not like everyone in town doesn't know, and evey man that wants it hasn't had her. This is common knowledge so what is he trippin' for. Doesn't he find it strange that his wife seems to have a particular hard-on for CoCo, and that she's trippin' especially hard now that she sees Mal is wanting her. She's all up in CoCo's face these days about this or the other.

Mal..yeah...he fought beside our girl...hehe. Had her back all the way!

Nice!

omg that punk delusional bitch darren punched coco oh my damn i was in rage i was soo freaking happy that mal beat that ass so bad that the sorry dog shit had to get taken to the hospital loving this story soooo much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

hi,

Love your stories, but you've got to sort out your grammar - your tenses are all over the place.

Otherwise keep up the good work!

The minute that bitch uncle of hers hit CoCo, I was like, Mal is gonna beat your ass. And there was Mal, and I was screaming, kill the summbitch. I have not enjoyed a scene so much as Mal beating the hell outta this fool. My question is, why is this prick allowed to family functions with that diseased wife of his? He knows what he's got on his arm but he insists on downgrading CoCo. The question is why? It can't be just because that ho-wife of his has told him tales of Cayenne? Is he that dim? Mal needs to beat that ass EVERYTIME he sees this fool.

Mal had me all dreamy-eyed at him sticking up for his CoCobean. There's nothing like a man going full-on protective mode for the love of his life. And that's what Havanna is. I must say while Mal was in the shower, washing and "fixin" himself, my first thought was, all that tasty goodness going down the drain. *ducks head at such thoughts*

Chica, I can only say this was a masterfully done chapter.

Yesss, my fav couple's story is here.

Sasha is one sheisty ass heifer. Poor Samuel, although he is slightly crazy, I can't even blame him. To be on the top of the world and have everything going right for you to end up where he is now is really heartbreaking. And for his wife to just stand there while everything is happening and not saying anything is just spiteful. She got them to where they are right now. She better run cause when he gets up he is on a mission. He is gonna come after all of them. Coco's crazy ass would probably handle him all by herself.

Now we all know that no matter how hard Coco promises to do right, drama just seems to follow her and she gets caught with her fist in someone's face . . . literally. Aunt Loose Booty got to feel the effects and I'm sure its not over by a long shot. There is more to come. So basically, she is jealous of Coco (cause she has Mal whipped) and carries deep-seated hatred and resentment for Cayenne for breaking up her parent's marriage. She has found a 'scapegoat' in Coco and is lashing out at her. She seriously needs to inhale, exhale and woo-sah her way out of life itself.

Do I see a Sebastian and Linette coupling? The cast pics seem to hint so. Btw, the cast pics look fab. Such gorgeous people. Can't wait for the next chapter. <3

Great start, it seems that Aunt Loosey Booty doesn't learn does she, and now we know that besides the fact that she is jealous of CoCo b/c she had Mal, but she blames her for Cayenne sleeping with her father and destroying her parents marriage, is she smoking the CRACK that Whitney does, she deserved that PUNCH that she got.

Oh and as for Sasha, whats DONE in the DARK will come to LIGHT, but her husband seems like he is unstable.

Hurry with more.