fictions is fun, till it's unrealistic. and that's what this is. big -girl- idealism at its best. and i'm not anorexic, i eat. but, cmon.Reviewer: ecila Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 10 2011 01:36 am
Awesome chapter. I love Lei and Micah together. I think Daddy Riley is obsessing over Lei as a substitute for her mom. His intentions are evil. I hope that another side of Micah, a true alpha beast, comes out and handle Riley if he tries/does hurt Lei. Riley needs to be taken out sooner than later.Reviewer: zetacrave Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 05 2011 03:08 pm
Fantastic Update, look forward to more from you when you have the time.
Love it when Teddy Lee gets all emotional and forgets to speak proper...it's too hawt.
Love the commitment that Lei and Micah have made to each other and hope that they are able to truly stay committed when they're apart.
HATE Ronald, dude is a sick sick freak and I hope he gets nowhere near Lei.Reviewer: Nu Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 30 2011 09:37 pm
Just beautiful. Micah and Lei are the end-game. Jessica needs to wake up and smell the coffee. She doesn't have a chance. I am just wondering, is Micah going to go to college? If so, can it be Virginia Commonwealth? Will Lei ever sing and shock the world or least Micah's. Lei needs some space to grow but not too much. I love this story. Micah and Lei are freaks and loving it.
No, Micah is going to NY to work and Lei is going to college. Believe me, NY and Richmond aren't that far apart. Nothing will keep him from his Lorilei! More to come soon!Reviewer: zetacrave Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 21 2011 01:58 am
The dress is beautiful.. Ms. Sara Lee got style.. Lei and Micah look so good together.. Micah, is definitely coming in to his own.. Straight up Alpha Male..
Loving this story..Reviewer: ReneeK Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 20 2011 04:34 am
Hilarious update!!!!!! Some older gals are not "old", you demonstrated that wonderfully. Good to hear you are working on an update for the other story. I appreciate your love for writing and your muse for being ever present. LOLReviewer: Luv2Read Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 17 2011 02:58 am
I was getting I little anxinous there. Glad u put a new chapter and I can't wait for more. Ur an amazing author. And I knew I spelled a word wrong. Lol.Reviewer: Joanna Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 16 2011 03:42 am
I feel like I'm reading more about Sabrina and Teddy than Lorei and Micah. I thought that Micah and Lei were the main characters. I want some Lorei and Micah time. Its taking forever.
It's coming. I had to get to the senior year. My muse is hard to control at times! LOLReviewer: A fan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 14 2011 04:36 am
I have enjoyed this story immensely(probably misspelled). I hope Micah and Lei senior prom is memorable in a good way and they both go off to a nice college together. However, it would be nice to see how Micah would react if another guy comes sniffing around his girl. Go Teddy Lee!
Your wish is my command! Another guy is coming up in the senior year. LOL More is coming soon!Reviewer: zetacrave Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 13 2011 01:59 am
One of my favorite stories so far, I get soooo excited everytime I see an update. Can't wait for the next update, I love all the characters and their stories. Sooo Please update soon.
P.S. I've read all your other stories and they are amazing as well, your a great writer, keep doing what your doing.
Thanks so much for your review. I know I've strayed away from Lei and Micah a bit, because my muse was really in an erotic zone and those kids weren't ready for that so I had to difuse it through Teddy Lee and Sabrina. Ah, but the senior year is here and they're both 18 consenting adults...so more of Micah and Lei is on the way!Reviewer: Joanna Signed [Report This]
Date: October 10 2011 09:21 pm
All I can say is go Teddy love a man who is a man. So happy D Micah & so proud he's stayed grounded even after b n away from Lei not pickin the ficklness over Lei strong N his Luv & conviction
Thanks for the review. MOre is coming...Reviewer: kvgurl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 07 2011 08:56 pm
Glad to hear that the muse is on fire I hope it stays that way too.
Yes, the muse is on fire. I tried to write a little bit of the other story last night, but my muse was fighting me all the way so I gave up. Now I have all this stuff in my head, but I'm at work so we'll have to see if I can get another chapter out today or not. But more is coming...Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]
Date: October 07 2011 01:55 am
First off I want 2 thank U this story really is wonderful & adequetley named things R startin 2 look good w/ Sabrina &Ted now that they've gotten 2 no 1 another better & some of the unpleasantries out the way can't wait 2 C what next w/these 2 + Micah oh Micah Mr.man is growin up has his mind set & made up gave Lei a ring so that every1 could no she's his then when she doubted had 2 put her N her place cave man style & make her tell him outloud b/c he doesn3 care about his transfermation as long as she likes it plus he luv her 4 her & all her curves & his reaction proves that. so prom is comin up can't wait 2 C what's next keep it comin
Thanks! Micah is serious about his Lei! She made him mad doubting his love. More is coming!Reviewer: kvgurl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 07 2011 12:34 am
Micah want Lei 2 B his first everything + the girl he's goin 2 marry they R all growing up & tween teenagers Joe Bob & candi R doin great. now Terry shows up after the few years his brothers b n married 2 find he's attracted 2 Sabrina & they have b n goin threw similar things w/dead spouses can't wait till nez
More is coming! thanks for the review!Reviewer: kvgurl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 05 2011 10:10 pm
I really like this story. Joe Bob seems like a simple man with a lot of love in his heart for his wife and stepdaughter. I am glad that Micah was able to have the surgery to remove the novus on his face. How lucky for him that Lei has an aunt that could find people to help him. As for Jessica, what a mean child she is. I can't for someone to kick her uppity behind. ThanksReviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]
Date: October 03 2011 06:22 pm
I don't know how you do it, Brenda...but girl, you've done it again...I'm loving this new story already...such a sweet little love story developing...I like the protector and the protected growing up together and realizing they are falling in love type of stories...and that's what I'm hoping happening between Lei and Micah...I'm already in love with Joe Bob...such a sweet, gently simple loving soul...loved that Lei sees him as her 'Papa'...what a sweet sentiment...I can't wait for the real drama to begin...and if I know anything about your writing style...it will be quite the journey...looking forward to a continuation of this story and your other one...you continue to impress me...Reviewer: attheritz Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01 2011 04:11 am
This just brightened up my day. I am really loving this so far hope you continue..Reviewer: Unthinkable Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 30 2011 03:17 pm