I could have sworn I left a review a few days ago. I remember typing and everything. Oh well. I can sum up again. Please Please don't stop the story. The movie left a lot of openings for Rain's character. We know little about how he is and what he does outside of his past. The most I can tell is that he's loyal and has a fierce love when he cares about someone. And Mika is up in the air, so anything's possible for her. Anyway just wanted to say great update. I love the song you snuck in there. My favorite is But I love You, because it was my first by him. Update Soon!!!
Author's Response:
Hey Flame,
I just wanted to say thanks for the pep talk. Its a bad habit I have with existing characters - I back myself into a corner and won't let my brain loose to do anything with them. Maybe its also my frustrating week that killed my enthusiasm. I've taken your suggestions to heart and I'll see how my brain flows from then. Its reviewers like you that allows authors to carry on. Thanks a lot. I truly appreciate it! I'll try listening to that one. I hope he is not hugging another girl...LOLLL!!!
Reviewer: Flame Signed
[Report This]Date: November 09 2011 02:20 am
I loved this movie ( surprised myself with that one too!! ). I wish the movie would have been a little softer with these two...but I think I'm getting my wish with thus story. Great start....
Author's Response:
Yeah vmck I couldn't believe I loved it as well with all that blood and gore and I also wish they would have taken the flirtation between them somewhere more than they did but who knows the reason but all of us can give one particular reason hmmm. I'm getting my wish as well...LOL I pray my mind leads it to where my heart wants it to go. Thanks for sharing!
Reviewer: vmck Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 02 2011 02:17 pm
I love Ninja Assassin fanfics. Great story so far keep it coming.
Author's Response:
Hey aiwen01,
Thanks for the awesome review! Yeah I too love this sort of fanfics because they are not the same ole same ole. It stimulates my mind so to speak :-) Thanks for the awesome review!
Reviewer: aiwen01 Signed [Report This]Date: November 02 2011 02:42 am
Wow nice update. I can see things are gonna get interesting. Have I mentioned I love your writing clear and clean. Can't tell you how tired I get editing things in my head. lol UPDATE again soon!
Author's Response:
Hey Flame,
Wow we are definitely kindred souls. Whenever I go over my writing I'm always editing and this is the reason why whenever I complete a story I never read it again bc I'll drive myself crazy with I should have written this or that LOL!!! Thanks so much for the compliment and I hope I can still keep up with both our standards LOLLL. Thanks for the awesome review!
Reviewer: Flame Signed [Report This]Date: November 01 2011 05:52 am
So they're going to meet at the party!
Author's Response:
Hey jububee50,
Mika would be a dead giveaway if she attended that party. It's one of their informants that will be attending. Once again thanks for the great review!
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: October 31 2011 07:13 am
Don't do it, Mika!
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: October 31 2011 06:22 am
Yes, they will meet again at Mr. Kim's party!! I wonder how will Raizo react when he's Mika again? You have made my day writing this story!!!
Author's Response:
Hey pmgayles,
Sorry to tell you this but she won't be going to the party. One of Europol's informants is on the guest list of the party and Ryan has requested that he get some information. Don't worry they will meet in the next chapter but it won't be at the party. Thanks for the awesome review!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 31 2011 05:47 am
please i beg please to keep this story going it is hard to find a good nija assassin story and all the ones on fanfiction.net are either unfinished or complete
Author's Response:
Don't worry Tiera I'm working on it right now but the next chapter won't be out by next week bc the ending and beginning of the month are the busiest time for me at work. I usually come home both physically and mentally drained. The story will continue.
Reviewer: Tiera Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 28 2011 04:27 am
This is a VERY nice beginning. You've got me hooked. It may have been a while, but you're starting out well.
Looking forward to reading more...soon
Nyeesha
Author's Response:
Thanks so much Nyeesha,
Yeah its been a long while. A few people know that I've been going through some stuff and didn't have the will or the commitment to put type anything. Another bonus was that my country just lowered our internet cost so I said what the heck. Thanks for the awesome review!
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]Date: October 27 2011 11:41 am
I love your story. I like Mika and Raizo pairings. Please continue with another chapter
Author's Response:
Hey trina mase,
I'm glad that you love my story to this point :-) Hopefully I can hold your interest in the same way when I put out my other chapter. Thanks for the awesome review!
Reviewer: trina mase Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 27 2011 08:34 am
Interesting start.
Author's Response:
Thanks baha_malo for the awesome review! Lets just say if I didn't upload it on the chamber I might have done it next year.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: October 27 2011 07:49 am
Great start. I am looking forward to more. Please immerse yourself in this wonderful sea of writers and bring us all joy of your writing.
Author's Response:
Hey anj1874,
Thanks for the awesome review and I loved what you said at the end. Sometimes its hard to write for the chamber bc there are so many great writers and you don't want to make your readers read anything that is less than they deserve. Writing is just a hobby for me and I just want to do the best I can.
Reviewer: anj1874 Signed [Report This]Date: October 27 2011 12:30 am
Oh and by the way I did go and watch the movie....lets just say im sticking with your story...Love it update soon
Author's Response:
Alright TasteTheRainbow, LOL I get what you're saying. Again thanks for the awesome review!
Reviewer: TasteTheRainbow Signed [Report This]Date: October 26 2011 11:26 pm
Wow that was great. I love rain and wen the movie came out I was there in a flash. It's nice to have someone continue such a great story. Can't wait for next chapter.
Author's Response:
Hey Flame!
Thanks for the awesome review and I'm thrilled that you are enjoying the story so far. I hope I can continue your enjoyment in the upcoming chapters. You know when the movie first came out I didn't know who the heck the characters were but I loved karate and action movies. Noami Harris was a definite bonus for my viewing pleasure.
Reviewer: Flame Signed [Report This]Date: October 26 2011 10:53 pm
Good start....I am a fan of Ninja Assassin fanfiction and look forward to reading more
Author's Response:
Thanks kwajeraspen.
When I first saw the movie it inspired since I have been writing about interracial couples on the chamber. The movie gave you a glimpse into the romance but it seems like they were afraid to go ahead with which often is the case...sadly when it comes to blasian couples.
Reviewer: kwajeraspen Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 26 2011 12:20 pm
Love love love me some Bi Rain, one of the sexiest Korean Man Alive!!! and Naomie Harris is just all kinds of natural Beauty!!! 2yrs after this movie came out I still hadnt watch it.....call me silly, but I like reviews and when i read they didnt pair them up, let just say my money an time i would've wasted was well spent when i came across this story.....LoVe this story!!!! we need more BLASIAN COUPLES!!!!!
AWESOMETASTIC WRITING!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!
I remember reading more chaps....am I wrong?
Author's Response:
TasteTheRainbow I can't believe you haven't watched the movie but I understand when you talk about wasting your money. Maybe I still watch bc I'm expecting something now thats silly :-D. One of my favorite stories on the chamber is about a blasian couple and I always look forward when its updated. I'll try my best to update soon but you know authors sometimes a scene feels good in the beginning and then it falls flat but I'm raking my brain for alternatives. Once again thanks for the awesome review!
Reviewer: TasteTheRainbow Signed [Report This]Date: October 26 2011 07:52 am
I am a fan of this movie as well as that fine ass Bi RAIN. i Love what you have started so please continue.
Author's Response:
Thanks pmgayles,
When that movie first came out I was so thrilled and excited to see them pair black and asian together but they sort of let me down you know where :-) Since then I've watched it countless times and thought about a story to continue the saga on terms I would like. Still undecided on whether to make it a short fic or otherwise but we'll see. Thanks for such a great review!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 26 2011 07:04 am