Reviews For Sick
Title: More Than You Can Chew - Pt. 1

This story is freakishly good...I am appalled and intrigued.  My reaction to Donner has me just as confused as Wren...DAMN!  Can't wait for an update

Reviewer: Mochagirl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 20 2012 07:43 am

Title: Fear Factor

OH WOW.....

Reviewer: brightnova01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 10 2012 12:30 pm

Title: More Than You Can Chew - Pt.2

okay, i think i'm ready now.

i want to make sure i get this down before i go off in YIM and the world fails to understand just how much i appreciate the hell out of you as a writer, a friend, and a spitball buddy.

to start, i think it goes without saying (too much) that i want you to continue and finish. no, strike that, i need you to go forth and finish.

this site displays amazing talent, shows women of colour kicking ass and being loved and all that good mushy shit.

but sometimes . . . just sometimes . . .

we're human; we have a dark side. several faces we have to show the world.

my poor, dear Wren is the personification of the many faces we as women of colour have to put on. don't act crazy. don't act ghetto. speak proper(ly?). sit up straight. laugh politely. drink slowly. we have to work thrice as hard as anyone to be recognized as anything other than a walking stereotype.

i know you had no intention of making this remotely political, but, sheeit, leave it to me with a bottle of CabSav and too much time and i'll have a goddamn thesis about the symbolism behind the act of rape, the violation (or liberation) it causes, etc.

okay, yeah, so i'm drifting.

what it comes down to is you've got one of helluva story, woman. you humanize what most believe are simply too fucked up too relate to. you made a devilspawn like Donner a protective Alpha in a way that no one would expect. you made Wren a victim of not a crime of external forces, but of within by allowing her to be sucked into those stereotypes and blueprints of what a woman is supposed to be. a Black woman on top of it all.

and this scene? this scene shows that she has so much more control over herself and of others than she'd ever imagined.

River is feeling it. Avery is feeling it. hell, Donner killed for her, all for her.

and don't get me started on her "friends" . . . 

brava, lady. brava.

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 09 2012 12:46 am

Title: More Than You Can Chew - Pt.2

gimme a minute.

just . . .

give me a minute.

damn.

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 09 2012 12:29 am

Title: More Than You Can Chew - Pt.2

Ok, this is my first comment on this story. It's not a review b/c frankly, I'm still trying to figure out how I feel about any of these characters. Regardless, they are intriguing and this type of story is very new for me.

I'm writing b/c I figure this chapter is going to push some people out of your fandom and beseige you with horrible private messages and rant that may discourage you again. Please don't let that happen. I really hope you see this story to the end.

Even I can admit that I have no idea how I will feel about this when you're done. Who knows? Maybe I will love it. Or I may not enjoy it when it's done. But if so, it's my issue not yours and I will never complain or bemoan.

I'm not offended by anything but I feel very challenged by this tale and really want you to continue.

You write it, I (among others) will read.

Thank you for being so willing to expose this side of your mind to us.

Reviewer: islandlass Signed [Report This]
Date: February 08 2012 11:30 pm

Title: More Than You Can Chew - Pt.2

Great and twisted chapter! I'm still trying to figure Wren out! 

Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 08 2012 10:24 am

Title: More Than You Can Chew - Pt.2

Supreb and I am left speechless.

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 08 2012 07:41 am

Title: Fear Factor

Damn you worked this chapter Scribe.  I love the psychological test of wit Donner is conducting on his lawyer. He can see right through her. (Wonder how he chose her -why he chose her? Makes ya go mmmm.)   She should've listened to that inner voice and ran but a woman like her has something to prove...whether she's stroking an oversized ego or showing the world, 'hey, I'm smarter than you are', she will lose because Brian Donner is checkmate for Attorney Leakes.

As for the accused, for some reason in this scene, he reminded me of another equally cunning, and sinister villain:  Hannibal Lecter. Both are eerie and yet mesmerizing in their demeanor. (Hope you took that as the compliment it was meant to be.)

Thank for honing your talent by sharing with us. I thoroughly enjoy analyzing a story, wondering what makes these characters tick.

Brava.

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 08 2012 06:44 am

Title: More Than You Can Chew - Pt.2

There is only one word needed : MORE !!!! : ) Loved this chapter.

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 08 2012 06:33 am

Title: More Than You Can Chew - Pt.2

Thanks for another great update Scribe. I can't get enough of this story! 

Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 08 2012 05:49 am

Title: More Than You Can Chew - Pt. 1

It's funny that the some of the previous reviews have the same idea as me. All I could think of this chapter was "deliciously creepy". This definitely gave more insight into Camille and Donner...well, what can I say other than I need more.

Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 07 2012 03:03 pm

Title: More Than You Can Chew - Pt. 1

Wow! Only word I can think of to describe this, never saw it coming that Camille would be like that! Can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 07 2012 08:34 am

Title: More Than You Can Chew - Pt. 1

WOW ... just WOW !!! Super update . I love that Mr.Donner is so on task . He sees, hears and smells everything . Kinda Creepy yet kinda Hot at the same time . Loved the update , can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 07 2012 06:17 am

Title: More Than You Can Chew - Pt. 1

so that was delicious.

utterly and completely delectable.

if Camille had been blinded by hurbis before, Donner just pried her eyes the hell open. he can read you, bitch, can read anyone he puts his mind to.

i think i have an inappropriate crush.

i can't wait to see more into Wren's psyche. and River's.

holy hell, this is amazing.

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 07 2012 05:51 am

Title: Seek And You Will Find...

Wren is such a mess, she's going to therapy but useless she wants to get better.  Let Avery go, becasue you are only hurting him Wren.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 07 2012 02:13 am

Title: Seek And You Will Find...

Supreb, I need more please.

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 07 2012 12:29 am

Title: Seek And You Will Find...

Forgot to rate...

Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 06 2012 11:03 pm

Title: Seek And You Will Find...

Great update SS! It just gets better and better.

Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 06 2012 09:08 pm

Title: Seek And You Will Find...

Great update! Can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 06 2012 06:20 pm

Title: Seek And You Will Find...

*shudder*

damn.

when i can think a little clearer, you'll get a better review.

damn.

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 06 2012 06:17 pm

Title: Seek And You Will Find...

Bloody good job .

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 06 2012 06:05 pm

Title: The Final Threads of Sanity

This is a head read but a brilliant read none the less! It speaks more of your prowess as an author! Only complaint being your chapters are short and choppy! They end before you can fully appreciate the scene! I'm intrigued and eagerly await the next installment! Bravo

Reviewer: BurntSienna Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 21 2012 08:50 pm

Title: The Final Threads of Sanity

How I love thy updates let me count the ways 

1) you draw me into the Sick world and make me want to stay

2) you have me a like a crackhead itching for updates

3) Your chapters are always so well written and I'm running out of things to say except:

I can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 21 2012 02:26 pm

Title: The Final Threads of Sanity

Why oh ,why must you leave us hanging like this !!! More, more ,more please. Can't wait to go down this crazy dark road with Wren and Bryan. I'm ready formy next update.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 21 2012 04:30 am

Title: The Final Threads of Sanity

wow, that's deep.

Reviewer: IRJunkie Signed [Report This]
Date: January 21 2012 03:24 am



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