I liked the different pics u chose for the children. My mother's complexion is fair enough for people to assume she Latino and my dad is a brown complexion... My brother, sister, and I range from three different complexions, me being the middle. Funny how DNA plays in who people favor in Black culture. We are so diversified.
Good story.Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: February 28 2015 08:15 am
Laughing at that old woman. Some people really do have a lot of nerve, BUT Brenda, lol, those babies really don't look biracial, cute as can be.Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 24 2014 01:41 am
I really liked reading your story to the end but I question the fact that Maxie seems to love his daughter, Miracle, more than his other children just because of her skin color and the fact that she looks more like him! I see it as a form of racism that should not take place when you are in an interracial marriage.
Thanks for your review. Even though life isn't fair and on paper parents should love all children equally and not have favorites, that is not always the way it happens. Now Maxie doesn't want to show favoritism and is trying his best not to, but this is just how he feels especially after the twins were born and he was being told constantly that they look nothing like him and both look just like Selma. Miracle stroked his ego a bit because he could see himself in her. However his parents pointed out to him that Maxwell acts just like him so he's holding onto that also. As long as he treats them the same and doesn't act like he favors one over the other, things will be fine, otherwise I'm sure Selma will step in and give him a piece of her mind. I'm glad that you enjoyed the story.Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 10 2014 05:35 am
i cant help but to feel a little dissappointed for maxine because she will know that her little sister is daddy's favorite and she may feel like it is because she is light skinned and that will make her insecure because from the end it is obvious that maxie does not love them all the same.Reviewer: sweetrst1 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12 2013 08:56 am
loved it brenda!!! thanks for a delightful story!!Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 21 2012 01:27 am
Wonderful.,.,. Thanks for the read.Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 21 2012 01:22 am
Ahhhh! That was a "perfect fit" Stephen is going to be a daddy I'm on the fence about that but he is a grow man and Selma did raise him good. I hope Vivian is not someone out to hurt Stephen, she seems shy and all but hey who's to say.
Terry and Renley hmmmm interesting and the babies are growing up and Maxie and Selma are happy and content.
Thank you for another wonderful story....
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Date: April 21 2012 01:13 am
Another baby, that was awesome!!! I love Maxie and Selma as a couple, they loved each other so hard and their children equally as hard. Stephen is stepping up to the plate marrying Vivian. I just hope that they really loved each other as marrying for any other reason is just plain crazy. Marriage is hard enough but starting out a marriage with a baby is even rougher. Great ending, although I do hope that you revist them in the future!!Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: April 20 2012 08:58 pm
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH *breath* AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH...Okay i'm done! That was amazing!! Loved it! They're so freaking amazing! How cool Maxine, Maxwell and Miracle all aunties and uncles before 5 awesome!Reviewer: chatty504 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 20 2012 07:12 pm
This was a great story and perfect ending. Thank you..Reviewer: Cherry Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 20 2012 03:56 pm
Yayyyyyy can't wait to read this ending!Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 20 2012 03:14 pm
My God! The filth in a Racist person just has no ending!.... that Racist White woman just had to come and tarnish even this divine event of the birth of Maxie's and Selma's babies by determination to plant the evil seed in Maxie's mind and heart that the babies are not his off-spring because they are too dark she says to be bi-racial babies. Although, are fictional characters I felt a pang of nausea at this evil from this Racist, also knowing how greatly Maxie wants children and these specific babies that he fathered, the impact her words will have on him, irregardless that they are lies. Yet, that is in fact the intent of this stranger a woman, motivated by her intense Racial hatred, especially seeing an interracial couple.
I have greatly enjoyed this story and hope so much that you continue it Brenda1257 and thank you so much for writing it!!!
Thanks so much for the review. My muse is sleeping here resently. I am currently trying to update this if the muse will just cooperate! LOL Hopefully an update will be up this week.Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: January 26 2012 07:10 am