Reviews For A Perfect Fit
Title: Epilogue: Three Years Later...

I liked the different pics u chose for the children. My mother's complexion is fair enough for people to assume she Latino and my dad is a brown complexion... My brother, sister, and I range from three different complexions, me being the middle. Funny how DNA plays in who people favor in Black culture. We are so diversified.

Good story.

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: February 28 2015 08:15 am

Title: Chapter 11

Laughing at that old woman. Some people really do have a lot of nerve, BUT Brenda, lol, those babies really don't look biracial, cute as can be.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 24 2014 01:41 am

Title: Chapter 5

That was some nasty $%it Stephen said to his mother. He needs to crawl across broken glass, naked to make amends.

Reviewer: HarperSinclaire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 27 2014 05:46 am

Title: Epilogue: Three Years Later...

i loved it

Reviewer: minxie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 11 2014 12:59 pm

Title: Epilogue: Three Years Later...

I really liked reading your story to the end but I question the fact that Maxie seems to love his daughter, Miracle, more than his other children just because of her skin color and the fact that she looks more like him! I see it as a form of racism that should not take place when you are in an interracial marriage.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review. Even though life isn't fair and on paper parents should love all children equally and not have favorites, that is not always the way it happens.  Now Maxie doesn't want to show favoritism and is trying his best not to, but this is just how he feels especially after the twins were born and he was being told constantly that they look nothing like him and both look just like Selma.  Miracle stroked his ego a bit because he could see himself in her.  However his parents pointed out to him that Maxwell acts just like him so he's holding onto that also.  As long as he treats them the same and doesn't act like he favors one over the other, things will be fine, otherwise I'm sure Selma will step in and give him a piece of her mind.  I'm glad that you enjoyed the story.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 10 2014 05:35 am

Title: Epilogue: Three Years Later...

i cant help but to feel a little dissappointed for maxine because she will know that her little sister is daddy's favorite and she may feel like it is because she is light skinned and that will make her insecure because from the end it is obvious that maxie does not love them all the same.

Reviewer: sweetrst1 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12 2013 08:56 am

Title: Epilogue: Three Years Later...

Loved,loved this story!! Thank you for sharing!!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2012 08:35 am

Title: Epilogue: Three Years Later...

The epilogue was great. A happy ending for everyone!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 23 2012 06:36 pm

Title: Epilogue: Three Years Later...

Excellent ending to a great story! Adorable kids!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2012 04:22 am

Title: Epilogue: Three Years Later...

Thanks for a great read.  Enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 21 2012 07:44 pm

Title: Epilogue: Three Years Later...

Once again Brenda you did not disappoint.  That was a wonderful story, Maxie and Selma really were perfect for each other

Reviewer: Jules Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 21 2012 06:22 pm

Title: Epilogue: Three Years Later...

Beautiful.....I love all of your stories. I especially love this story because the couple was over 40! Thank you for making the over 40 ladies feel some love too!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 21 2012 08:05 am

Title: Epilogue: Three Years Later...

loved it brenda!!! thanks for a delightful story!!

Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 21 2012 01:27 am

Title: Epilogue: Three Years Later...

Wonderful.,.,. Thanks for the read.

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 21 2012 01:22 am

Title: Epilogue: Three Years Later...

Ahhhh! That was a "perfect fit" Stephen is going to be a daddy I'm on the fence about that but he is a grow man and Selma did raise him good.  I hope Vivian is not someone out to hurt Stephen, she seems shy and all but hey who's to say.

Terry and Renley hmmmm interesting and the babies are growing up and Maxie and Selma are happy and content.

Thank you for another wonderful story....

 

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 21 2012 01:13 am

Title: Epilogue: Three Years Later...

Aww it nice they are so happy and have three sweet children together.  Liike he husband said her son will take care of his woman and baby. Thank for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 20 2012 10:33 pm

Title: Epilogue: Three Years Later...

This was great Brenda! Thanks for finishing this one. I love your body of work and it's always pleasure to see where your muse leads you...

Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 20 2012 09:56 pm

Title: Epilogue: Three Years Later...

Another baby, that was awesome!!!  I love Maxie and Selma as a couple, they loved each other so hard and their children equally as hard.  Stephen is stepping up to the plate marrying Vivian.  I just hope that they really loved each other as marrying for any other reason is just plain crazy.  Marriage is hard enough but starting out a marriage with a baby is even rougher.  Great ending, although I do hope that you revist them in the future!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 20 2012 08:58 pm

Title: Epilogue: Three Years Later...

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH *breath* AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH...Okay i'm done! That was amazing!! Loved it! They're so freaking amazing! How cool Maxine, Maxwell and Miracle all aunties and uncles before 5 awesome! 

Reviewer: chatty504 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 20 2012 07:12 pm

Title: Epilogue: Three Years Later...

Wonderful ending wow selma and max has three little ones!!!!!

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 20 2012 07:06 pm

Title: Epilogue: Three Years Later...

Wow!!! It was a great suprise ending and thank you for finishing it!!!

Reviewer: BossLady Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 20 2012 07:02 pm

Title: Epilogue: Three Years Later...

Thanks for writing such an amazing story. The pics of the children are cute.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 20 2012 04:24 pm

Title: Epilogue: Three Years Later...

This was a great story and perfect ending.  Thank you..

Reviewer: Cherry Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 20 2012 03:56 pm

Title: Epilogue: Three Years Later...

Yayyyyyy can't wait to read this ending!

Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 20 2012 03:14 pm

Title: Chapter 11

My God!  The filth in a Racist person just has no ending!.... that Racist White woman just had to come and tarnish even this divine event of the birth of Maxie's and Selma's babies by determination to plant the evil seed in Maxie's mind and heart that the babies are not his off-spring because they are too dark she says to be  bi-racial babies.  Although, are fictional characters I felt a pang of nausea at this evil from this Racist, also knowing how greatly Maxie wants children and these specific babies that he fathered, the impact her words will have on him, irregardless that they are lies.  Yet, that is in fact the intent of this stranger a woman, motivated by her intense Racial hatred, especially seeing an interracial couple.

I have greatly enjoyed this story and hope so much that you continue it Brenda1257 and thank you so much for writing it!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review.  My muse is sleeping here resently.  I am currently trying to update this if the muse will just cooperate!  LOL  Hopefully an update will be up this week.

Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 26 2012 07:10 am



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