Reviews For A Perfect Fit
Title: Chapter 8

Great update,Now that Russell is really getting on with his wife,will he cut Selma and her boys some slack.It was so sweet that Russell and Maxie was able to fix their relationship. Great job,can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: meko1975 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 20 2011 04:17 am

Title: Chapter 8

glad that the brothers made up and they can move foward. Wow his wife has him smiling like he got a happy meal lol. thank for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 20 2011 01:25 am

Title: Chapter 8

Glad to see Russell and Maxie talking and reaching an understanding. It was sweet that Maxie was so concerned over Selma. He just went about it the wrong way.
Things are certainly improving for everyone.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 20 2011 12:40 am

Title: Chapter 8

I am glad the brothers made up and will become closer.

It appears their wives will be close as well.  

Thanks for the update.

No matter how much money and power you have.  It can't make you happy.



Author's Response:

true, money can't buy happiness.  thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 19 2011 11:18 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I forgot to mention what an ahole her late husband was, he was truly selfish.  He wanted to recieve but didn't want to give dying was what he deserved!!



Author's Response:

Stephen Sr. did have issues.  thanks for the review.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: November 19 2011 07:19 pm

Title: Chapter 8

Maxie went straight caveman, he man and Selma is his woman!!!  I love it!!!  Selma the man loves and is concerned about your safety and everyone knows that malls around the holidays isn't safe.  Maxie you did that damn thing and made her eyes roll to the back of her head!!  That was hot!!  Brenda you are so awesome!!



Author's Response:

that's right.  Maxie wants to protect what's his!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 19 2011 07:18 pm

Title: Chapter 8

Wow, Stephen, Sr. was seems like a selfish man, don't know how Selma stood it for so long!  Guess that's why she's a good woman cuz I would've had to tell him about hisself!  She's probably had more orgasms with Maxie than her whole marriage to Stephen!  Glad Russell aologized but he really should work on his way with people!



Author's Response:

Alas, Russell is better in the courtroom than he is around the dinner table!  LOL.  Yes, Maxie knows how to get his woman off.  They both have their insecurities, but they will work them out together!  More to come soon

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 19 2011 05:05 pm

Title: Chapter 8

Love Maxie, he is so protective of Selma.  It just shows what the love of a good woman can do for a man, as Russell has also found out.  He should be thanking Selma and Jennifer for speaking to his wife and giving her the confidence to make the first move. How ironic is it for his son to end up with the daughter of his high school crush, just goes to show that you never know what suprises life will throw at you.  



Author's Response:

Yes, Maxie is going to keep her safe whether she likes it or not! More is coming soon!

Reviewer: Jules Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 19 2011 05:03 pm

Title: Chapter 8

thanks for the update brenda! glad the brothers got to iron some things out. so even though kelly rocked his world russ is admitting that he will always have a thing for black women huh? not surprised at all lol!!! cant wait for selma and maxie to have the oral sex talk. i want him to fully understand how badly her ex mistreated her. let the licking/healing begin for real!!! more please!!!

Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 19 2011 03:24 pm

Title: Chapter 8

lol if rus and kelly keep up their new and way more enjoyable sex life, maxie and selma's baby might not be the only midlife surprise in the family.

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 19 2011 02:45 pm

Title: Chapter 8

Whoo another wonderful update wow maxie put it on selma ass and it was hoot that man is just wonderful... Glad russel had the talk with maxie it was great!!!!!Can't wait for much more...........



Author's Response:

Hey Hershey:  Yes, Maxie is the man.  Now he has to have that talk with Selma and see what's really bothering her.  More is coming soon!

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 19 2011 02:27 pm

Title: Chapter 7

What can I say that I haven't said time and time again.

You do marvelous work Ms. B just marvelous work.

I think that Mr. Russ will no longer be so uptight and growling at everyone especially Maxie.

I an glad Kelly found friendship in Selma and Jen she needed that....cause apparently the two skinny wenches need a check in reality.

Wonderful update thank you thank you thank you

Happy writing.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 18 2011 06:01 am

Title: Chapter 6

Russ didn't have balls enough to go after the woman that he really wanted he loves Kelly but did he settle or is it just that he is not adventurous enough to spice up the bedroom

I am happy that Justin is going after what he wants now if daddy would get a clue it would be all good.

Sweet update...

Thanx

Happy writing

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 18 2011 05:14 am

Title: Chapter 7

Great update,I'm happy that Kelly found the courage and to woman up and understand the power of bring a woman now she will have Russell eating out her hands.LOL.Can't wait to fonud out what Selma have in store for Maxie I love how the story is turning out,can we have a little more of Jennifer sound like she's a  wildcat in a good way.looking forward for the next update.

Reviewer: meko1975 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 18 2011 04:16 am

Title: Chapter 5

Thank you...I am glad that Steve got that off his chest it was selfish of his father to put that on a 15yr boy to carry around.  Not all men cheat and he was a poor example of a man but the only one Steve had,

Thank you for the update.

Happy writing.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 18 2011 04:03 am

Title: Chapter 4

LOL! I know it's not funny what Selma is going thru she is scared and older and thought her life was thru with the chapter of raising babies but fate has a way of kicking you in the head like your muse Ms. B.

I was hoping something in this nature would happen and even though this is a story I believe in fate so way to go Maxie u going to be a daddy after all.  I see twins maybe triplets in your future ;) LOL!  Too bad she chickened out and left but left evidence of a pending abortion now he is going to think the worst.

Stephen is going to hit the roof but his ass will get over it.  HIS MAMA IS GROWN and past the age of consent especially from her CHILD.

Thx 4 the update.  I need more more more....greed aint I. :D

Happy writing.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 18 2011 03:25 am

Title: Chapter 3 Additional Cast

Great cast chosen

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]
Date: November 18 2011 02:44 am

Title: Chapter 2

OMGoodness! I am sorry to hear that someone tried to break into your home but happy to hear that he ran off without harming you when he found out you were there.  People are crazy now a days.

There is always got to be one or two fools in the bunch. Russ is a straight ass but we know why he is an ass cause he was interested in a black woman but allowed her to slip away out of fear and society. 

Stephen and his brothers are selfish more so Stephen now if the shoe was on the other foot they would jump to telling Selma it was his choice and he was grown.  My sons are protective but they know that I am going to do me and allow them to do them.

Maxie was hurt when she was evasive about his proposal but I can understand where she is coming from and Maxie shouldn't have allow the boys (Stephen) get to him to show the ring b4 it was time to do so.

Loving the story...Thank you muse for thumping Ms. B in the head good call :D LOL

Happy writing.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 18 2011 02:43 am

Title: Chapter 7

HA Russell's a freeeaaak, love it! 

Reviewer: got2luvmel Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 18 2011 12:26 am

Title: Chapter 1

OMG! This is wonderful, wonderful wonderful! I was lmao when Selma said at this point she would take a worm.

Thank you chica for another wonderful tale.

Happy Writing.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 17 2011 11:51 pm

Title: Chapter 7

sooo glad for kelly but russell is still a punk!!!! cant wait for some more maxie and selma lovin!! more please!!

Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 17 2011 11:13 pm

Title: Chapter 7

GO KELLY!!!! I like this take charge woman.  I was surprised that Justin is dating the daughter of the girl that  Russell was crushing on. Thanks for a great update. 

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 17 2011 10:30 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Kelly is now working her asset!!!    Russell is such a punk Melza still makes him speechless.  Somehow I had the feeling the Hope would turn out to be Melza's daughter.  Brenda you rock!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 17 2011 09:58 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Well go on Kelly! Get yours.

Reviewer: Nu Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 17 2011 09:39 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Go, Kelly! Thanks to Jen she has found what she has been missing. So has Russell. Maybe they both will be happier. What do her sisters-in-law know. Being thin isn't everything. I hope Kelly and Selma become good friends. Very enjoyable chapter!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 17 2011 09:23 pm



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