Reviews For A Perfect Fit
Title: Chapter 5

I found it so Ironic that Stephen was being such a jerk but I am glad I understand why.  I felt so bad for Maxie in the previous chspter when he found the card.  Glad everything work our for them so far.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  Things will be better now that Steve has gotten that secret off of his chest.  More to come soon!

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 14 2011 02:46 am

Title: Chapter 5

Well glad the boys decide to give maxie a chance and that they know he truly loves their mother. It sad that her husband cheated on her but hope someone tell her the truth before she hears it from someone else. thank for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 14 2011 02:06 am

Title: Chapter 5

Wow so that why stephen held so much anger and mistrust of maxie intentions toward his mother wow the secret of his father being unfaithful to his mother was a heavy burden stephen sr. put on his son i am soo happy that maxie and stephen had a talk and came to an understanding whoo such a wonderful update ohh i am  over the moon that selma is keeping the baby and is getting married whooo hoo she deserves the happiness and so does wonderful maxie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 14 2011 01:51 am

Title: Chapter 4

I'm really loving your muse right now.  This is shaping up to be one of my favorites.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 13 2011 11:30 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Mrs Brenda you don't be playing when you write,LOL.Now how will I pick my favorite when you keep writting hits like this.I'm so loving this story,can't wait for the next update.



Author's Response:

The next chapter will be coming up shortly.  *sob*  I want to get back to my other stories!!! 

*Muse slaps brain again and demands that I keep writing*

Reviewer: meko1975 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 13 2011 09:57 pm

Title: Chapter 1

What to say what to say? Pitch-perfect, real and riviting: you are a masterful storyteller. Looking forward to much more (maybe you're just not a one-shot kinda of gurl :) )

Author's Response:

Shhh!  Don't say that around my muse!  She already thinks she's running things! *Muse nods in agreement to your statement.*

Reviewer: nodrivel99 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 13 2011 09:49 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Poor Maxie, now he's going to be stressing out after finding that card.  That Renley chick is a pain and needs to be schooled on proper customer service.

 

Thanks for the new chapter.



Author's Response:

Maxie is stressing out and he's going to confront Selma.  More to come soon!

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 13 2011 08:24 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Oh, oh...now Maxie knows that Selma is pregnant and thinking about having an abortion.  I am sure that he is going to be so upset.  As for Ren, what a piece of work she is .  She does need to be nicer to people with her racist and elitist attitude.  I thought that  Terry going to meet with Maxie was very mature.  Thanks for a great update.



Author's Response:

Yes, Terry is going to be the bridge builder here.  As for Miss Renley, she's a piece of work for sure!  More to come soon!

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 13 2011 02:31 pm

Title: Chapter 4

i love this story!!! selma reminds me of a friend of mine who had children later in life. she was 38 with her son and 45 with her daughter. if she thought maxie has been wonderful to her up to now just wait until shes got a baby bump!!!! <swoon>........ this is just one more thing for big brother to be green with envy over lol!!!!! more please!!!!!



Author's Response:

LOL  I got the feeling that Stephen is NOT going tobe happy about all this.... More is coming...

Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 13 2011 01:51 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Babies!!!!! yayaya! ahhh can't wait... i actually love this story :D



Author's Response:

LOL  Yes, there is a baby coming....uh did you say babies???? *snicker*  Mindreader!!!!

Reviewer: chatty504 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 13 2011 01:02 pm

Title: Chapter 4

I am so enjoying this story, I hope Selma does not get rid of the baby, as Maxie would be deverstated.  Selma's sons need to wake up, their mother is only 44 for Christsake, and they think her life is over.  Didn't anyone ever tell them that life begins at 40.  Her husband may have died, but that doesn't mean that she should die with him.



Author's Response:

Selma just feels trapped right now.  She'snot going todo anything hasty. Thanks for the review

Reviewer: Jules Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 13 2011 12:20 pm

Title: Chapter 4

This story just keeps getting better.  I hope that Selma doesn't make any hasty choices that could likely derail their budding relationship. Unless abortion becomes medically necessary, I just don't see him supporting that decision.  I'm glad to see that Terry is more level-headed in how he is choosing to deal with his mother's new companion. Judging by his opinion of Renley's physical attributes, I take it that he is more open-minded when it comes to opposites attracting. I just hope he doesn't develop an attraction to her, but something tells me that their paths may cross again.  Unlike his big brother he seems to understand that his mother has needs.  Now, perhaps Stephen is naturally selfish, but I wonder if he is still grieving the loss of his father. Maybe he had an attitude problem long before Maxie entered the picture, or maybe he really could use some grief counseling. Whatever the case may be, I hope he doesn't try to give his mother an ultimatum. If he does, I hopes she send his narrow behind outside to pick out his own switch!



Author's Response:

Selma is just overwhelmed right now.  She's worried about a pregnancy at her age, how her son's will respond and whether or not she should marry Maxie.  She has a lot on her plate, but she'll figure it out.  Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Neighbor Lady Signed [Report This]
Date: November 13 2011 05:39 am

Title: Chapter 4

Selma needs to put Stephen in his place!   Can't wait for Maxie to ask Selma about that card!  See, now you really have to continue!



Author's Response:

*Muse continues with 'I told you so' antics*  Yeah, alright I'm continuing this against my better judgment!  More to come soon!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 13 2011 05:39 am

Title: Chapter 4

oh noooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please dont let this break them up!!!!!!!!!!!!! PPPLLLLEEEEEAAAASSSSSEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!! you cant stop there brenda!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

No breakup is planned!  More is coming...

Reviewer: brownskingurl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 13 2011 04:50 am

Title: Chapter 4

well dang, their situation just got more problematic.  and it doesnt help that maxie had to find the business card to the abortion clinic.



Author's Response:

a confrontation with an angry Maxie is coming up!

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 13 2011 04:33 am

Title: Chapter 4

Oh snap cat is out of the bag. Wonder what going to happen next? thank for the update



Author's Response:

Well it's not going to be pretty....More is coming soon!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 13 2011 04:19 am

Title: Chapter 4

OMG, she should have told him. I'm glad oen of the sons had the common sense to talk to him man to man.



Author's Response:

Selma got a bit overwhelmed especially when Maxie told her that Terry had been by.  More is coming...

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 13 2011 03:45 am

Title: Chapter 4

Woooow! Never saw that coming, can not believe Selmais pregant! Hope she does keep it and that Maxie does not overreact after looking at the card from Dr. Chance. MORE PLEASE!!!



Author's Response:

Selma can't believe it either!  LOL  More is coming...

Reviewer: annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 13 2011 03:32 am

Title: Chapter 4

I'm not liking Selma at the moment. She is being selfish and a coward. She should tell Maxie that she is pregnant with his child and decide together what she is going to do. Also Maxie need to talk with his racist secretary or whatever that blond woman is. This is not the way to treat your guest. He needs to warn her or kick her out of his office.



Author's Response:

Don't be too hard on Selma.  She has a lot on her plate all at once.  Maxie and his marriage proposal, the reaction of her sons, the pregnancy, the fact that she's older and the complications that come with pregnacy at her age.  She'll get it together...and Maxie will help her sort things out.  More is coming soon.

Reviewer: Anon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 13 2011 03:21 am

Title: Chapter 4

oh snap i know maxie is about to blow his top after seeing the abortion  info this is not going to be pretty for selma whoo i love this story sooooo much oh and p.s. have maxie fire that trick ren she is useless!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

I have a feeling that Maxie is going to cancel that next appointment....  

LOL Renley!  You can't get good help these days it seems!

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 13 2011 02:58 am

Title: Chapter 4

When he confronts Selma that conversation is not going to go well.  Selma theman deserves to know that you are pregnant with his baby.  You are being selfish, loving you shouldn't keep him from being a father.  Now that you are pregnant you might as well carry that baby to term and marry the man.  Brenda this is so awesome, I am so glad that she got pregnant.  God don't like ugly Selma, and your attitude about having more children was ugly. God showed and Brenda showed you!!  LOL



Author's Response:

Selma is scared and not thinking straight.  More is coming!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: November 13 2011 02:56 am

Title: Chapter 3 Additional Cast

good pics of the cast.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 12 2011 05:46 am

Title: Chapter 2

Wow these too have alot to over come. Both of their familes are crazy and rude lol and then the fact he wants kids but she  doesn't want any more.  I hope things work out for them other wise they going to miss out on each other big time. I love how she slap her son reminds me when my mom slaps me lol thank for the update

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 12 2011 05:46 am

Title: Chapter 2

Oh wow, Russell is a total douche. He's so jealous of his brother's woman and his sucess. Hopefully he'll be man enough to apologize later. As for Selma's sons if I was their mama and they talked to me like that, my foot would be so far up their assses they wouldn't crap right for weeks. What the heck do they expect their mom to do with the rest of her life. They're being ridiculous. But its very realistic how kids sometimes act when a parent is remarrying. Hope they'll see sense soon. Brenda you are really spoiling us. Loved the update!!!!

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 12 2011 05:45 am

Title: Chapter 3 Additional Cast

Thanks for the additional cast pictures.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 12 2011 04:14 am



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