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Title: Chapter 10

Yayyyyy! They're married, great chapter!!!

Reviewer: annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 05 2011 03:28 am

Title: Chapter 10

They are married and happy witch is good. That Rev is such a hater he need to know she grown and she loves him.  I like how Max father let Selem sons know he consider them his grand children nice.Thank for the update



Author's Response:

The good Reverend was skeptical because he was friends with her husband.  He needs to let go of the past.  Selma has moved on.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2011 03:24 am

Title: Chapter 9

Stanley come to cause trouble, why can't they let these two be happy.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 24 2011 11:27 pm

Title: Chapter 8

Glad Russell and Maxie had a good talk, and Rus is an almost new man.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 24 2011 11:12 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Kelly is a bad girl now! How ironic that his son is dating the girl he had a crush on daughter.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 24 2011 11:01 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Maxie was determined to have his fance live with him.  I was LOL at her response and that of her children.  As for her brother in law he seems like a dirty dog.  Thanks for a great update.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 24 2011 10:39 am

Title: Chapter 6

Russell is a mess, there is no pleasing him.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 23 2011 10:21 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Selma has more drama with that no good brothr in law. She better watch her back. He seems very conniving. Great chapter.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 23 2011 08:19 pm

Title: Chapter 9

I like Maxie, but he needs to get a grip. Waiting outside the mall was not a smart thing to do, but he overacting by forcing her to move like that. The woman ain't a child and you can be a alpha male and still show your woman some respect. Thats all i'm saying. I hope Selma know what she signing up for but I guess its too late now. Brother in law is trouble for real.



Author's Response:

LOL Maxie is just overprotective.  Now that Stanley has reared his ugly head, Selma is glad that she did makethe move.  More is coming soon...

Reviewer: Lil Bit Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 23 2011 04:38 am

Title: Chapter 1

I'm loving it...

Thank you for sharing your talent of story telling.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]
Date: November 23 2011 02:18 am

Title: Chapter 9

Why is it that there is always some lazy arse family in the background trying to drag you down and believing that you owe them something?  Stanley needs to get up and find a job instead of freeloading off his family.  I blame his brother, if he hadn't indulged him, then Selma wouldn't have to put up with this.  Anyway I'm sure Maxie will put him on the strainght and narrow real soon, or maybe Selma's sons will see their uncle for what he really is, a total loser.



Author's Response:

You are so right.  Selma is glad that she moved so that she doesn't have to deal with Stanley.  More is coming soon!

Reviewer: Jules Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 22 2011 07:12 pm

Title: Chapter 9

I didn't realize I didn't review the last couple chapters. So sorry. So glad Kelly laid it on Russell and Russell stopped being a jealous prick. Haha, Maxi laid it on Selma, loved it! Go Maxi! Go Maxi! And  that damn Stanely is trouble. I think Maxi is going to have to kick his ass. Loved this updates. As always wonderful. Thanks for updating so often. You make me smile everytime I see an update.



Author's Response:

Russell has a new attitude!  LOL.  

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 22 2011 04:27 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Staney's a pig. I know he is going to cause trouble for Maxie and Selma.



Author's Response:

Oink!  You got that right!

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 22 2011 02:38 pm

Title: Chapter 9

well well well!!!! alpha male maxie is handling his business aint he?!?!?! i love it!!!! thanks for the wonderful update brenda!!! sooo glad hes continuing to bond with the boys as well!



Author's Response:

that baby is bringing out the Alpha in Mr. Maxie.  More is coming...

Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 22 2011 12:49 pm

Title: Chapter 9

MOOCHING ASS, good for nothing! He made my skin crawl.

Author's Response:

LOL.  Stanley is a piece of work.  That's for sure!

Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 22 2011 11:53 am

Title: Chapter 9

There is always some trifling ass negro in the works and Stanley Bloomfield is high on the trifling list.  He is going to make Maxie beat him like a runaway slave or as he said like he stole something messing with HIS WOMAN.

I love the Alpha in Maxie it is strong and Selma has made it stronger now that they are together and what not. He got one issues settled on his family side now he has to deal with this leech who deserves nothing if that was the case his no good brother Stephen would have left him something in the end so even his brother knew he was no good but left his mess at Selma's doorstep for her to clean-up cause he was selfish that way.

Selma is happy now and engaged to a man that really loves, honors and respects her but her dead husband is till trying to bring her down from the grave well damn. I also believe that the only reason he married her was because she wasn't giving up the goods until that ring was on her finger and he felt that he could still be no good after marrying her as he did then filling his sons head and heart with doubt after being caught by him.

I am truly loving this story but then what can I say i haven't read a story of yours that I haven't enjoyed.

Thank you for the update and as you know greedy me wants more more more.

Happy writing!



Author's Response:

Maxie has taken charge of things since he's found out that he's going to be a daddy.  Selma will just have to accept his bossy ways.  More to come soon!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 22 2011 08:31 am

Title: Chapter 9

Great chapter! Stanley sounds like a lousy character but Maxie is able to handle him, hopefully he leaves town soon!

Reviewer: annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 22 2011 06:30 am

Title: Chapter 9

another wonderful chapter but as always a beautiful tended lawn get dog crap in it every once in awhile and looks like selma lawn has gotten some in the form of trilfling disgusting stanley but damn if maxie didnt handle his ass cant wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hey Hershey:  We all have those relatives we'd rather not see in our family.  Selma is no exception.  More is coming!

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 22 2011 06:00 am

Title: Chapter 9

Oh lawd,  I smell trouble!!

Stanley isn't entitled to anything. Whatever scheme he's cooking up in his pea brain will land him in jail or hurt. Idiot!

My man Maxie has a bit of a short fuse, eh? I love how he has won over Selma's boys. They'll be a force to fear when Stanley pulls whatever dumb move he's planning.

Brenda, I absolutely love this story and the characters. I look forward to your updates.

Keep on writing!!! I promise to review more!!! :)



Author's Response:

Maxie is going to watch out for his own.  Stanley was lucky that he didn't get his neck snapped!  More is coming...

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 22 2011 05:37 am

Title: Chapter 9

Great update, Maxie is all man,first moving Selma in with him without asking her (with I thought was so manly and romantic) and then putting that Stanley fool in his place.I love that their was more of Jennifer in this update I hope she's able to find a really good man,and I love how she is always looking out for Selma.This update left me wanted more:),great job as always looking forward for the next update.



Author's Response:

Maxie is in control.  Selma better recognize!

Reviewer: meko1975 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 22 2011 05:08 am

Title: Chapter 9

Stanley is going to have to die and I mean soon!!!  Selma don't owe you a damn thing Stanley, and she should have let Maxie choke him.  There is nothing wrong with a little violence.  Some people need to be forced into an understanding and Stanley is once of those people.  I want to see Maxie beat Stanley and beat him good.



Author's Response:

Uh-oh PM...

I'm going to have to keep my eye on you.  "nothing wrong with a little violence"  indeed!  LOL

See, now you've given Maxie permission to snap Stanley's neck...

 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 22 2011 04:52 am

Title: Chapter 9

Oh crap I so don't like that brother in law he spells trouble big time and god help those who gt in his way. thank for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 22 2011 04:41 am

Title: Chapter 9

Stanley sure would have moved in on Selma if it wasn't for Maxie being in her life now! Hopefully, Maxie will be able to choke him real good soon!



Author's Response:

Maxies hands are itching to get around stanley's neck.  

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 22 2011 04:20 am

Title: Chapter 9

i hate moochers! and self-entitled family members! bugs the mess out of me.



Author's Response:

Stanley just wants a small piece of the pie....

Not!  

More is coming!

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 22 2011 03:13 am

Title: Chapter 8

This was my favorite chapter.  Two awesome breakthroughs.  It's amazing what we allow people to do to our self esteem.  

Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 20 2011 06:25 am



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