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Title: Chapter 12. Flight or fight

Ethan is an abusive asswipe kill him please!!!



Author's Response:

you're going to be disappointed...

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2012 09:20 pm
Title: Chapter 12. Flight or fight

This is so good.  I am going to have to buy a copy.



Author's Response:

Thank you , and please do!

 Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 05 2012 12:21 pm
Title: Chapter 12. Flight or fight

I just bought my copy of this book and I can't wait to read it. Thank you, thank you.

Author's Response:

Thank you!

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2012 11:25 am
Title: Chapter 12. Flight or fight

So what is the title so I can purchase on Kindle



Author's Response:

It is the same ? The One.

check on my contact form and there is a link.

Thanks

 Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2012 06:17 am
Title: Chapter 11. Who the hell are you? Part II

I was so happy to read this update.  I had to go back and review a few chapters and I'm hooked all over again.  Please update soon!



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It's coming.

 Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 04 2012 07:12 pm
Title: 1.The Cast

Welcome back!  The PI has found her i can't wait 2 c what happens next!



Author's Response:

Thanks.

 Reviewer: skip2641 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 04 2012 12:25 am
Title: Chapter 11. Who the hell are you? Part II

Thanx for this update, I have so missed this story.



Author's Response:

You're welcome. Now you can finally get the book and have it all on kindle!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2012 09:42 pm
Title: Chapter 11. Who the hell are you? Part II

I hate cliffhangers. Please update soon.

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2012 09:37 am
Title: Chapter 7. Doesn't she know...?

I'm laughing because the player got played.

Is Ethan Vi's ex?

Is Luca her son?

Author's Response:

he did, in more ways than one!

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2012 09:23 am
Title: Chapter 5.You changed everything for me part I

I completely forgot about this story. I have to catch up on the rest of the chapters. This ia a very good read. I am so excited. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much !  you might want to get the book and do it in go...

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2012 09:14 am
Title: 1.The Cast

looking forward 2 an update!



Author's Response:

It is on! Thanks

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 27 2012 03:21 am
Title: 1.The Cast

Please update soon!



Author's Response:

I just have! Thanks

 Reviewer: Skip2641 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 11 2012 04:15 pm
Title: Chapter 10. Who the hell are you? Part I.

Great story and I can't wait for the next update.



Author's Response:

I just have updated! Thanks

 Reviewer: SoccergirlBianca Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2012 05:53 am
Title: Chapter 10. Who the hell are you? Part I.

OMG way to leave a cliffhanger!!!!!!  I am loving this read more and more.  Please don't take to long to update.  I know life does happen and you are busy so I will wait. This time could you do even more chapters at once so we can have more to tide us over until you update the next time?

 

MORE MORE MORE chapters,

Kim



Author's Response:

Just updated. Thanks

 Reviewer: kimyso Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 08 2012 11:24 pm
Title: Chapter 10. Who the hell are you? Part I.

I am so happy to see this update, I love this story and I am looking forward to adding 'The One' to my e-book collection.  To bad Vi hadn't run sooner but it just makes it more interesting.  She will win over James to her side just like she did in your first version right?

 

Have a wonderful weekend yourself!!!



Author's Response:

Well, a few changes have been made, but in the end it's all good.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 08 2012 10:31 pm
Title: Chapter 10. Who the hell are you? Part I.

Huh oh, I hope James' search for her doesn't lead Ethan to her. I really want to know what happened and where's Luc? Please update soon. As a matter of fact, I wouldn't complain if you wanted to share a little more for the weekend. ha!



Author's Response:

Just did. Thanks

 Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 08 2012 03:00 pm
Title: 1.The Cast

Please update soon!



Author's Response:

I just have! Thanks

 Reviewer: Skip2641 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21 2012 04:35 am
Title: 1.The Cast

Need an update, I'm hooked, this is a great story!



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I just have! Thanks

 Reviewer: Skip2641 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 25 2012 08:21 pm
Title: Chapter 9. Fuck them all !

Thanks for a great update.  So Ethan and Julian grew up together.  I think JUlian is going to have a fit when he finds out that Ethan's intended is no other than Vi.  Can't wait to see the fire works.



Author's Response:

yes, fireqorks ahead!

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2012 12:46 pm
Title: Chapter 8. Will you marry me...?

Thanks for a great update.  I thought that she was in lust with Julian?



Author's Response:

lust, love...so difficult to choose...

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2012 12:24 pm
Title: Chapter 9. Fuck them all !

I feel so sorry Julian, his mother is a bitch!!!  I want Vi to realize that Julian is the real deal!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2012 03:40 am
Title: Chapter 9. Fuck them all !

Wow!  Poor Julian.

 Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27 2012 12:42 pm
Title: Chapter 9. Fuck them all !

No wonder why Julian has commitment issues. His so-called mother is a devil in disguise. She rather climb the social society then be a mom. Although his dad sounds like a desent guy he was weak. Melissa seems like his only emotional support. The background on Julian was helpful in understanding why he is what he is.

Thanks for the update but dont wait to long. I really want to see things heat up between Vi and Julian.

Author's Response:

yes, he has some serious mother issues

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2012 10:04 am
Title: Chapter 8. Will you marry me...?

Love this more



Author's Response:

more you shall get 

 Reviewer: for real Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 26 2012 11:58 pm
Title: Chapter 8. Will you marry me...?

Thanks for the update.  I can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thanks

 Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26 2012 01:13 pm


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