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Title: Chapter 8. Will you marry me...?

Love the backstory on her relatio ship with Ethan. Can't wait for more Julian and Vi action!



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Thank you

 Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 26 2012 10:58 am
Title: Chapter 8. Will you marry me...?

So what happen with Ethan? Is Vi hiding from him? And what's with Vi relationship with her father. Vi seems so distant with the .males inher life.



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she that way...

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 26 2012 08:45 am
Title: Chapter 7. Doesn't she know...?

Thanks for a great update.  I was surprised the way that Julian unraveled because Vi left.  As for Vi so it seems that Julian will know her ex.  Is Luca her chld that lives with Ethan?  Is she a woman running from an abusive relationship?  Thanks



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there iis a reason for everything...

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 24 2012 04:03 pm
Title: Chapter 7. Doesn't she know...?

Wow!  It seems as though they both are suffering.  Julian has finally met the love of his life. Vi is afraid of love for whatever reason.  I can't wait for the update and for them to reconnect!



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thanks

 Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 24 2012 11:42 am
Title: Chapter 7. Doesn't she know...?

Diarylover, you've got mad skills (( laughing)). You've got me feining for more. Vi has the playa hooked. I can't wait for Julian to find his lady.

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Thank you! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 24 2012 11:16 am
Title: Chapter 7. Doesn't she know...?

Who are Ethan and Luca?



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people in her life...

 Reviewer: Megan Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 24 2012 08:49 am
Title: Chapter 7. Doesn't she know...?

Aww so sad to see Vi left Julian :( I can't wait til he finds her 



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it's going to be a long while 

 Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 24 2012 07:25 am
Title: Chapter 6.You changed everything for me part II

This was hot!  I look forward to more!



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Thanks

 Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23 2012 08:39 pm
Title: Chapter 6.You changed everything for me part II

Thanks for a great update.  They are explosive together.  They didn't know each other before?  



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no they didn't

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 23 2012 02:12 pm
Title: Chapter 5.You changed everything for me part I

Thanks for a great update.  I was LOL that she fainted. Damn Vi or damn Julian...



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yes lol

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 23 2012 02:11 pm
Title: Chapter 4. I'll never leave you

Thanks for a great update.  

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Date: March 23 2012 02:10 pm
Title: Chapter 6.You changed everything for me part II

Did I mis something? I don't think they use condoms.

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no you didn't.

 Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23 2012 12:48 pm
Title: Chapter 6.You changed everything for me part II

Fantastic update.

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Thanks so much

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 23 2012 12:40 pm
Title: Chapter 5.You changed everything for me part I

There is about to be some hot, butt-naked sex!!!  I wonder can I have a Julian of my very own?  I would take very good of him, wink, wink, nudge, nudge!!!  lol



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I wouldn't mind either!

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Date: March 23 2012 01:34 am
Title: Chapter 5.You changed everything for me part I

Wow....

 Reviewer: keikei2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 22 2012 12:28 pm
Title: Chapter 5.You changed everything for me part I

Loves it!! Moreeee please!!!

 Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 22 2012 10:46 am
Title: Chapter 5.You changed everything for me part I

I am just catching up to this story. Its awesome. Vi and Julian are so hot together. Pleas update and put us out of our misery.

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 22 2012 09:07 am
Title: Chapter 3.Why do you care?

I am glad that you are back, I pray that you heal completely!!!  Sorry to hear about your accident!!!  Julian, has it bad already I had forgotten how quickly he had fallen.    I am on pens and needles waiting to read more!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 17 2012 02:06 am
Title: Chapter 3.Why do you care?

Thanks for the update.  I wonder who the stranger is and why she wanted to come to his home. 

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 16 2012 10:28 am
Title: Chapter 2. Don't leave me...

Very interesting.  Why would he take some stranger to his home because she demanded it? Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 16 2012 10:25 am
Title: Chapter 1. Take me home

Are they playing some type of game? Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 16 2012 10:21 am
Title: 1.The Cast

Good cast pictures.  Thanks



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Thank you

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 16 2012 10:13 am
Title: 1.The Cast

The pic of Luca adorable. Whose kid is he? Is he going to be Julian and his mystery lady?

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Luca is her baby.

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 16 2012 07:56 am
Title: Chapter 3.Why do you care?

I love this story. Please update soon.

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 16 2012 07:52 am
Title: Chapter 2. Don't leave me...

I have missed this story!!!  I still love Julian!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 18 2011 04:10 am


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