Reviews For Victim of the Fall
Title: Surrender

Oh this was so intense,it's so deep for me cause I can relate to Dana on so many levels that it's almost scary and maybe hopeful.I was truly disliking Andrew early in the story but the more insight you gave into his character and relationship,I can now understand his actions and way of thinking about Dana and Ingrid.Dana and Andrew have a lot of baggage to deal with...

Reviewer: cocoablue Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 12 2012 10:36 pm

Title: Surrender

Excellent



Author''s Response:

Thank you Bain! And I accidentally deleted one of your reviews when I was meant to respond, sorry about that!

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2011 02:45 am

Title: Surrender

Great chapter, as always.  Nice to read Andrew''s POV.



Author''s Response:

Thank you DiamondLady! :D

Reviewer: DiamondLady28 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2011 02:21 am

Title: Surrender

oh so ingrid is stepping out with this thomas dude, ok so no more sympathy for her. on you go andrew, just don''t do dana wrong.



Author''s Response:

lol! thank you grumpirah!

', '2011-06-04 00:19:34', 10, '1', 'ST'), (77496, 1882, 12580, 'baha_malo', 408, 'Loved the update but Andrew needs to do what''s best for him and not try to please Benjamin or Ingrid. Regardless of how long he''s been with Ingrid if she doesn''t make him happy or causes too much distress with her mood swings, he needs to get the heck OUT whether he forms a bond with Dana or not!!! He needs not to get caught up in the comfort zone and be afraid to leave her .

Author''s Response:

I agree with you, it is the right thing to do. Thank you Baha!



Author''s Response:

I agree with you, it is the right thing to do. Thank you Baha!

Reviewer: grumpirah Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 04 2011 07:58 am

Title: Surrender

smh. i don''t know if i trust Ben, but we shall see. damn good chapter. love the link with Phillip; makes this all the more intriguing. Andrew is seriously stuck between a rock and a hard place. you make his plight so incredibly human and plausible. i feel for the guy and all characters, really. i know what it''s like to deal with bi-polar disorder in a very personal sense, so i really feel for Ingrid, but that chick needs help. more help than what Andrew can offer, to be honest. well done, as per usual. can''t wait for the next update.



Author''s Response:

Thank you so much mouse :D I always look forward to your reviews, they make my day! The thing with Phillip is a background story I am working on at the moment, I am tempted to stary posting now but I''m forcing myself to wait until this story is finished. Again, thank you for all your support!



Author''s Response:

Thank you so much mouse :D I always look forward to your reviews, they make my day! The thing with Phillip is a background story I am working on at the moment, I am tempted to stary posting now but I''m forcing myself to wait until this story is finished. Again, thank you for all your support!

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 04 2011 05:34 am

Title: Surrender

Why is Andrew still with Ingrid? Is it guilt?  Why can''t admit how he feels about Dana?  He is in complete denial, and his so-called friends are aholes!!!  I love this story!!



Author''s Response:

lol you always tell it how it is and i love that! thank you gayles!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04 2011 02:16 am



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