I love this story so far... I can not wait for an update.. Please update soon!!
Reviewer: Peaches58 Signed [Report This]Date: September 17 2013 01:18 am
Great chapter and I'm glad you updated. Wlliam Westmore messed up and I'm glad his wife seems angry with him. Hopefully Devyn hears Jason out sooner than later because even she should remember how they acted towards each other in the beginning and not be surprised that Jason did what he did.
I think Christopher is stronger than Erin and her evil mother think he is. Can't wait to see them tumble all the way down.
Reviewer: Tootall Signed [Report This]Date: September 05 2013 01:45 pm
Wow well I expected this from one of the parents, but it feels harsher than I imagined. My heart goes out for Devyn, being judged for the mistakes of her father.
Reviewer: HumorMe Signed [Report This]Date: September 04 2013 01:32 am
Wow well I expected this from one of the parents, but it feels harsher than I imagined. My heart goes out for Devyn, being judged for the mistakes of her father.
Reviewer: HumorMe Signed [Report This]Date: September 03 2013 06:20 pm
If I could say that this was a surprising turn of events, then I would be lying. I knew that his preliminary investigation of Devyn would come back and bite him in the a**. I honestly didn't think he needed to investigate her in the first place just because he saw her business card fall out of Erin's purse. It was just business but then again Devyn thought she was protecting Erin from the big bad fiance...Devyn will forgive him though, lol. Her lying for a woman she didn't know made him suspicious so I do get his reasons.
Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed [Report This]Date: September 03 2013 06:06 am
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I hate when someone has a person investigated especially when they become involved. I am a naturally private person, so I would probably be pissed, but if I were rich, I hate to say this and sound like a total hypocrite, I would probably want to know about the person I wanted to get personal with. But it's such a breach of privacy, but better safe than sorry. But back to Devon's side, I would be hurt and pissed. Jason has some splanning to do, lol!
Reviewer: WOW! Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 03 2013 03:33 am
damn...
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]Date: September 03 2013 01:31 am
please don't wait too long to update - I'm biting my nails on the edge of my seat!
Reviewer: bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 02 2013 09:13 pm
O'My this is so!so! Good, please don't take to long
for the next chapter...WOW :-)
Reviewer: CAColeman Signed [Report This]Date: September 02 2013 08:45 am
Oh lord have mercy look what you did William...well at least that's out there. Let's see where it goes and what happens and how long Devyn is going to be embarrased/hurt for. I'm sure it will work out, but in the mean time William needs to relax after this. I understand he's looking out for his son, but I hope he does not continue to tamper beyond this point or else it's me and William and only one of us is coming out alive LOL
Also I can't wait for when those two conniving mitches are taken down. I can't keep up with their schemes too much man. At some point something has got to give
Thanks for the update!!
Reviewer: thincakes Signed [Report This]Date: September 02 2013 06:05 am
Oh boy not good not good at all. I hope Devyn forgiven and know he loves her. That father is a dick and I can't stand that hoe mom that chick need to go away.. Thank for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: September 02 2013 12:38 am
William is an asshole and I really wanted Jason to knock the snot out of his father. When are they goung to tell Christopher the truth about that ho Erin? I want Erin's family to lose everything.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: September 01 2013 11:18 pm
i missed this story, can u like not let Devyn and Jason suffer too much. :))
Reviewer: dounome Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 01 2013 10:03 pm
Have really really missed this story. Thank you so much for the update, really sweet couple.
Reviewer: Amaya Signed [Report This]Date: July 07 2013 11:57 am
Cute couple, I like how she is strong but yet can compromise. excellent job thank you
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]Date: July 07 2013 08:31 am
Thanks for the update. I enjoy this story and was happy to see it. Erin's mother really is evil. I hope Shawn helps with her downfall that hopefully hapens. lol Looking forward to Devyn meeting Jason's parents.
Reviewer: Tootall Signed [Report This]Date: July 06 2013 09:27 am
Chapter 13. No sex, not even a kiss and I'm still very interested in the story. Very good work thus far. Thanks!!!
Reviewer: readwonderfully Signed [Report This]Date: July 06 2013 07:59 am
What a fantastic chapter, it was worth the wait.
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: July 06 2013 04:59 am
Devyn is a better one than me not to let Janice know that showing up at a grown woman's door unannounced is unacceptable. Devyn is a responsible business owner who pays her own bills, and not a teenager in college who needs a pop in to keep her on the straight and narrow. If you're going to use a parent's privilege to visit unannounced, then showing up early in the morning, like you're being nosy and inconsiederate, is not to be tolerated. Whomever she's sleeping with is none of her mother's business, and certainly not a reason to ask whether she's "lost [her] mind." This discussion was especially inappropriate in front of Jason, a man she had just met. That's what happens when you don't call me for two weeks? The phone works both ways and, the last time we checked, she had her number. I respect my mother, but respect is a two way street. Once you're both women, she needs to respect you, too.
As for Shawn, I hope he mans up and releases whatever evidence he has. Madeline had the nerve to threaten him and his family in his home, with no thought of repurcussions or consequences. Well, if I were him, I would bring the pain straight to the opposing family, just to shut that b---- up.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 06 2013 01:16 am
Thank you. Please update soon.
Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]Date: July 05 2013 11:04 pm
Madeline is a crazy *B*. My goodness. I hope everything backfires in her facexanx that she and her conniving daughter get their comeuppance. As tot Jason and Devyn glad that they are moving forward and that Jason met Devyn's mom. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: July 05 2013 07:38 pm
Welcome back. Now I thought devyn mother was going to throw holy water on jason and say get away you devil man but glad she didn't lol. I can't wait to see how the family dinner will go and feel so badly for Chris everyone is keeping secrets from him. Thank for the update
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: July 05 2013 06:34 pm
Oh my, my, my goodness. I love this story. Please update again soon. Really, really soon. Pretty please.
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Reviewer: Arabelle Signed [Report This]Date: July 05 2013 03:28 pm
Thank you for the update!
Reviewer: pearlcat Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 05 2013 03:07 pm
Madeline is cray cray no wonder Eric. Is so special. I hope that Jason is prepared for the evil trying to marry into his family for money. Thank you for this update!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 05 2013 03:03 pm