Title: Cast Pics

Nice cast pics

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]
Date: January 30 2013 09:58 pm

Title: Chapter 23

I must go back and review the rest of the chapters for this story. Your development was slow but nicely done. I like that. Now I think your story will move a bit faster but I hope you don't loose the details in your characters and how they fell. I am looking forward to the war between Madeline and Jason. I think she is underestimating Jason's mother. While she seems to be more caring about society, I think she may just prove them wrong when she knows that Madeline is after Jason. She seems to have a soft spot for him. Also I think William is going to show his nasty side to protect Jason, but that will depend on how they accept Devlyn and that is where Christopher will come in. He loves his brother and knows that Jason made the ultimate sacrifice for him and he will not let anything get in the way of his happiness. Very nice job with the story so far. My only wish is for you to do consistent updates. Your audience is hooked at a very good point. Keep the momentum going. Good luck writing and thank you for a wonderful update. Have a wonderful day/week.

 

Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 21 2013 04:06 pm

Title: Chapter 23

I do not like Madeline's character at all! Hopefully she does not do something that will break up Jason and Devyn. Can't wait to read more!!

Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 21 2013 01:02 am

Title: Chapter 23

I really don't know what to think of these character anymore. Besides that, I feel like sometimes, we just like to create more problems for our self. Like Jason for instance. Why can't he be honest with his brother and open his mouth to tell him the truth about Erin. He is suppose to be his brother, they suppose to be close. So why not be honest????????????????? I seriously don't understand it. And even if Lilian came to interrupt them, he could have still told Christian after. And why does it seem like a lots of  people are against Jason and Devyn? And Lilian is seriously pathetic.After all these years it should have been a hint. The man doesn't want you. Find someone else and move on with your life. These type of woman I cannot feel sorry for. They do this to themselves.  Persisting on being with a man who clearly does not want them. ughhhh.

Reviewer: Ms.stars Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 20 2013 07:48 pm

Title: Chapter 23

Nice update. Has set the groundworks perfectly for the fireworks that will no doubt occur in the next update.

Please don't keep us waiting to long for it. LOL

 

Reviewer: valis202 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 20 2013 07:13 pm

Title: Chapter 23

Glad you are feeling better. Great update! Look forward to the next update.

Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: January 20 2013 06:31 pm

Title: Chapter 23

First let me say that I am glad that you feeling better! I want Erin and her whole family to go down. I hope that the conversation she just had with *ason help her to withstand the coming storm.  That is confident. In Jason's love to tell him Erin and her evil. Mom confront her. Wonderful!

 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 20 2013 05:02 pm

Title: Chapter 23

Good update. Ready for the truth to come out . That Erin and her mother are a mess . Can't wait to read more .

Reviewer: stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 20 2013 04:09 pm

Title: Cast Pics

why do they have to have so many people against them all at once--they have enough to deal with as it is-- I think this is the wrong way to go



Author's Response:

Thx for the review.....it is that there are numerous people against them; it really is one focused energy. It's like any war or adversity that is face...people take sides but the main enemy to anyone is not others; it is themself.....I hope you will continue to read and understand the purpose for all of this at the conclusion of this tale. 

Reviewer: meg Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 20 2013 03:20 pm

Title: Chapter 23

please do not hurt erin more than she has been but make her a fighter.  Let beat these two women at their on game.  Please!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 20 2013 02:22 pm

Title: Cast Pics

Thank you for the update...So in love with this story.

Reviewer: Casmia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2013 08:29 pm

Title: Chapter 22

I am in love with this story. You're a great writer.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing; I am very appreciative:-)

Reviewer: lonieg Signed [Report This]
Date: December 22 2012 12:07 pm

Title: Chapter 22

Great update. Love the story.

Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: December 22 2012 02:10 am

Title: Chapter 22

I cannot stand Erin! Glad Jason confronted her but I know she is going to cause problems for him and Devyn! Great update, can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 22 2012 01:59 am

Title: Chapter 22

Oh Jesus, now the crazy crank is going to go after Devyn. Damn it, Westmore, you didn't think this all the way through!

Reviewer: Leo the Yardie Chick Signed [Report This]
Date: December 21 2012 04:57 pm

Title: Chapter 22

Erin, you are about to mess with the person forcing Jason to go in for the kill! I can't wait because we know that Devyn isn't strong enough yet to weather the impeding storm. Erin makes mmy teeth itch, I want her whole family to loose whatever they have left. Jasin that yoy are prepare for the hurricane of furry that is Erin because she's heading towards Devyn. Fabulous as always!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 21 2012 01:56 pm

Title: Chapter 21

love it...

Reviewer: Lindy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 13 2012 04:01 pm

Title: Cast Pics

While waiting on an update of another story, I decided to check out your story and I'm glad I did .  I really like it.  I got to admit for a minute, I wished that Erin would catch a break, because it seems she's starting to care for Christopher, then she turned into a Shedevil when she confronted Devyn...... I can't wait to see how Jason handles her... Now, another writer has me stuck in 'The Chamber' waiting for update...Guys,  stop doing this to me...lol



Author's Response:

Thank for deciding to read...I promise to try to not make you wait too long for an update and hope that when this is completed, you will read Books 2 & 3 of this series when I begin to post them:-)

Reviewer: VeMo Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 13 2012 01:30 am

Title: Chapter 21

I'm glad Devyn stayed and gave Jason a chance! Great update, cat wait to read more!!

Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 11 2012 11:32 pm

Title: Chapter 21

That was a fantastic update.  I cannot wait until Erin gets what is coming to her but as you hinted in the chapter, she is going to fight.  I have a feeling things will get worse but then happily ever after?

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 10 2012 06:56 pm

Title: Chapter 15

I LOVE it! The growing relationship between these two seem to grow naturally. Nothing is forced, rushed....but natural, as it should be. Their attaction is too....its like its slowing sneaking up on them...not that they have been fighting it knowingly. I dont know hot to explain it....but Im loving it.

Reviewer: amlaamar Signed [Report This]
Date: December 10 2012 08:20 am

Title: Chapter 21

Why did Devyn listen to anything that ho Erin said? Devyn you are twice the woman that Erin will ever hope to be or ever will be. Erin the ho has messed with the wrong girlfriend, Jason is about to get in that ass! Good times are approaching!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 10 2012 02:44 am

Title: Chapter 2

organism??.....I just had to point that out. I had a good chuckle though.

Loving your story...keep it up!



Author's Response:

Found and corrected.....lol! I guess my spell checker didn't pick it up. thank for reading:-)

Reviewer: amlaamar Signed [Report This]
Date: December 10 2012 02:11 am

Title: Chapter 21

Love it. Get Erin! I want Jason to bring that B down! Great update!

Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: December 10 2012 12:34 am

Title: Cast Pics

Excellent update - I LOVE this story - my favorite on the board. Please update again soon.

Reviewer: katie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 10 2012 12:06 am



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