I love these two so much. I see their connection is growing by leaps and bounds. Are they going to make love now? Devyn seems so innocent. I hope they define what they are to each other soon. Are they just dating or are they going to be in an exclusive relationship? Honestly, I can't wait to read about his parents' reaction.
Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed
[Report This]Date: August 07 2012 12:23 am
Nice update, they are finally getting together. Please, pretty please update soon.
Reviewer: luv2read Signed [Report This]Date: August 06 2012 09:34 pm
Great update but that was sooooooo cruel to leave the ending like that!
Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 06 2012 08:16 pm
Love it! Thanks for the update and glad that they are moving forward!
Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]Date: August 06 2012 07:27 pm
now, why would you do that to us!? ending the chapter like that smh
i love this story and im so excited that Devyn has FINALLY come to terms with her attraction to Jason. now they can take this thing to the next level (as long as Dev doesnt freak out and get cold feet as usual).
i really enjoy the way you capture the intense chemistry they have without making it overly dramatic and cliche. KWA, thank you for sharing your talent :)
Reviewer: apathetic_smileyface Signed [Report This]Date: August 06 2012 07:02 pm
Glad to see they are finally accepting each other - love this story! Please update again soon - please!!!
Reviewer: katie Signed [Report This]Date: August 06 2012 04:11 pm
What ever happened to chap. 15??? Hello ....is anyone out there....
Reviewer: LadyeT Signed [Report This]Date: July 27 2012 07:08 am
What ever happened to chap. 15??? Hello ....is anyone out there....
Reviewer: LadyeT Signed [Report This]Date: July 27 2012 07:08 am
Can't wait for Jason and Devyn's date.
Reviewer: valis202 Signed [Report This]Date: June 26 2012 12:13 am
Erin is finally going to get what's coming to her!
Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 25 2012 05:49 pm
Ooooo busteddddddddd!!!
Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed [Report This]Date: June 25 2012 05:16 pm
Ending too soon:)
Reviewer: nightseer Signed [Report This]Date: June 25 2012 05:02 pm
This story is readable in it simple style/plot. It doesn't make you think alot because, you kinda know what will happen next, so it makes for easy reading. Unless the writer has a twist up her sleeves, for example Devyn stop acting like an overwrought teenage who can't life and start acting like a grown woman with self-confident. Anyway next chapter please.
Author's Response:
lol....Thx for the review....and she does have some growing up to do; but we all know ppl like that, don't we?
Reviewer: skriver Signed [Report This]Date: June 25 2012 01:34 pm
Glad you updated and I can't tell you how glad I am that this misunderstanding did not drag on longer. Looking forward to see where you take this.
Reviewer: Dee Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 04 2012 06:50 am
Great chapter!!
Reviewer: Sandra Anonymous
[Report This]Date: June 04 2012 12:54 am
Finally Jason told Devyn that he is not the one engaged to the ho Erin. Devyn is going to keep on denying her feelings and continue to push Jason away. Why is she so afraid to love? Jason is like a pit bull on pork chop he is not going to let her get way. Thanks for the update, please don't make us wait as long for the next one.
Author's Response:
Pit bull on a pork chop....lol! Yeah, sorry for such a long delay in updating....I injured my arm and could not type; I tried to force myself to heel sooner but the pain was just unbearable. Next update will be quicker; thank for reading:-)
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: June 04 2012 12:08 am
Great update but it was so short
Author's Response:
I meant...heal...smh @ myself
Reviewer: nightseer Signed [Report This]Date: June 03 2012 10:21 pm
Good update .
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 03 2012 08:29 pm
Finally! Beautiful update as always
Reviewer: LuKohana Signed [Report This]Date: June 03 2012 06:29 pm
YES! Now those two can finally try to clear up this mess of miscommunication! At least, I hope they can. I feel like Devyn is going to ignore all of Jason's attempmts to explain, or somthing is going to happen where neither can get their point across and Devyn still wont know that Erin is Chris' fiance, not Jason's.
Great chapter, i Love this story, you are an excellent writer.
Thanks for sharing, cant wait for the next one :)
Reviewer: apathetic_smileyface Signed [Report This]Date: May 01 2012 01:08 am
Aw poor Devin...so conflicted...I hope he figures out soon what she meant and then tell her. That also means that she should go ahead and tell him what Erin was up to...but honestly I hate that she got herself into this...if only she could have met Jason another way. I'm happy that they kissed...that kiss was very powerful.
Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed [Report This]Date: April 30 2012 02:01 am
Boy is Devyn going to feel even more like a bigger fool when she finds out Jason is not with Erin. Hopefully Jason will chase her so he can clear up her assumption.
Reviewer: Ttee72 Signed [Report This]Date: April 29 2012 11:10 pm
Devyn is so stupid, if you would have really talked to Jason you would know that he is not the one marrying that ho. I love that dress!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 29 2012 11:03 pm
Loving this story. Love the characters especially Devyn and Jason of course. Can't wait for your update. Wonderful story.
Reviewer: Karen Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 18 2012 01:31 am
This is heating up quite nicely
Reviewer: Sandra Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 17 2012 10:58 pm