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Title: Chapter 3

love it

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 16 2012 07:26 pm
Title: Chapter 11

I felt Jason's pain...good writing. I love this story but especially these two characters so much. 

 Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 16 2012 01:33 am
Title: Chapter 11

Loved it!

 Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 15 2012 09:40 pm
Title: Chapter 11

Nice update. I really like these two . I can't wait until they get together. :)

 Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2012 09:01 pm
Title: Chapter 11

It is a shame that it alcohol to make Jason appear more human, but unfortunately it was lost on Devyn.  I have missed this story and I am so glad to see it's return.   When is the truth going to come out about that ho that Christopher is going to be marrying?  Forgive me as I forgot the characters name.  When are they both going to admit their attraction to each other?  I want Christopher to find true love and I want Devyn and Jason to have an HEA!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2012 08:36 pm
Title: Chapter 10

More,more, more please. This was short.when is the next installment? I am not below bribing ;)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review......I will be updating over the weekend. Thank you for reading. Be blessed:-)

 Reviewer: greencrescent Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 16 2012 01:39 am
Title: Chapter 10

So many misunderstandings...can't wait until Devyn comes clean about Erin's deceit.  Funny how Devyn thinks Erin is Jason's fiance, and has no idea that she's really Christopher's...can't wait until she finds out!

Can't wait until they meet at the art show...maybe Erin will be there and some of the mystery will be solved...hmmmm....

Look forward to the next update!

 Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 15 2012 02:43 pm
Title: Chapter 10

Erin is such a ho, I really wish that Devyn would tell Jason what she saw.  Why is she so scared?  That doesn't deserved to be married into that family and Devyn can ;put a stop to that farce.  Christopher deserves to marry someone who really sloves him and it ain't Erin!! Great Update!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14 2012 08:43 pm
Title: Chapter 10

Good update . I can't wait to see Chris play matchmaker for Jason and Devyn. : )

 Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14 2012 08:09 pm
Title: Cast Pics

Really looking forward to the next chapter. I just want everything to come out lol. Cannot wait for the update

 Reviewer: Kay Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14 2012 07:46 pm
Title: Chapter 10

Another great chapter ....leaving me wanting more!

 Reviewer: vmck Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 14 2012 01:01 pm
Title: Chapter 9

Super update . Can't wait for more .

 Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 05 2012 08:56 pm
Title: Chapter 9

Always glad to see an update of this story.  I liked the way you move both characters along with their conversations in this chapter.  It was interesting to see more of the inner workings of Jason.

 Reviewer: Dee Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 03 2012 05:28 pm
Title: Chapter 9

Please don't stop the updates!! Devyn's story is only getting better, and now you have added Kori's mystery into the mix!

 Reviewer: Sandra Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 03 2012 08:52 am
Title: Chapter 9

Damn, a serious Alpha man!!

 Reviewer: KrisS Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 03 2012 12:48 am
Title: Chapter 9

Well, damn go on and get YOUR woman Jason! Make her face those feelings head on Jason!  I love when a man knows what he wants and goes after it. Good chapter...THANKS for the update.

 Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 02 2012 05:14 pm
Title: Chapter 9

Sounds like things are about to heat up!! Can't wait....
I love this story and it miss it after I don't see it for a while. Please update again soon!!!!

 Reviewer: vmck Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 02 2012 01:06 pm
Title: Chapter 8

Have to say I am loving this story, Im really liking what you are doing with Devyn and Jason, how you are taking your time to develop their relationship, and you still have Devyn thinking he is married, I feel like they just want to kiss when ever they are around each other lol. Im really looking forward to more of their interactions.

I also feel bad for Christopher, he is a good guy and he will definately be hurt by all of this. Funny enough I could actually see him and Devyn together if Jason wasnt in the picture lol they do seem to have a lot in common but hopefully they will become good friends.

 Reviewer: Kay Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 06 2012 09:23 pm
Title: Chapter 8

Very good!! Keep up the good work!

 Reviewer: Sandra Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 05 2012 06:54 am
Title: Cast Pics

Devyn likes Jason but she doesn't realize it is why I think that is one of the reasons why she will not tell him anything about Erin. Along with Jason being rich is another reason why she won't say anything. She need to just tell Jason and be done with him. She need to listen to her mother and stop being prejudice towards those with money.

 Reviewer: Ttee72 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 05 2012 04:40 am
Title: Chapter 8

Gosh I'm loving this too much...I wonder how long they are going to dance around whatever they're feeling?  I can't wait until they smas...ahem *clash* (again). LOL.  I loved Christopher in both chapters..it's a shame that he's being cheated on...

 Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 05 2012 04:05 am
Title: Cast Pics

This was such a teaser chapter. lol

I'm liking this story and really feeling the chemistry between Devyn and Jason. Can't wait til the next update and hopefully longer chapter. lol

 

 Reviewer: SassyKia Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 04 2012 09:59 pm
Title: Chapter 8

Nice update.  The last 2 chapters were great at moving the story along.  I like how you introduced Christopher and Devyne.  They are very similar to each other.  The last 2 chapters have quite a few editing errors that made reading a little difficult.  Thanks for sharing.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and the heads up...I spell checked this several times but I guess I didn't catch everything...just made some edits.

 

 Reviewer: Dee Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 04 2012 04:16 pm
Title: Chapter 6

argh! so short!

I don't get why she refuses to tell him. Why should she stick up for erin who she knows is cheating? This is all rather cloudy to me.

 Reviewer: cuppacoffee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 08 2012 09:35 pm
Title: Chapter 6

Yeah Jason keep saying you want Devyn out of your head, lol.  Aw, he saw the sketch but didn't seem to think much about why she was drawing him.  



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review:-) Note: He did notice how she captured every single detail of his face;-)

 Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2012 04:16 am


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