Dad is bad ass I'm loving it. Took the mans company and going to sell it little by little LOL. I cant' wait to that slut finds out no more of the good life for he he he. I'm glad that Chris and Jason talked and able to get back to being brothers Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed
[Report This]Date: December 08 2013 10:49 pm
She does now Jason, William proved his love for his children and then some. Madeline is cray cray but so not so crazy that she didn't know what she did was wrong. Please let William pull through! So good and action packed!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: December 08 2013 10:38 pm
Beautiful story.
Reviewer: Amaya Signed [Report This]Date: November 10 2013 10:49 pm
Can't say why I never read this story. But now that I have, I'm in love. Erin and Maddy are about to get their asses handed to them and it couldn't happen to two more deserving people. Can.not.wait.
I like that Devyn is trying to handle her issues before going back to Jason. I hope that Jason is receptive. And what of Christopher. What will he do to Erin? I hope he finds someone who will love him for himself.
Maddy is one crazy mofo. Carries a .32; she might pull it out at the luncheon when they meet with Jacqueline and start to blasting. lol
The question is Maddy more deadly than Jacqueline? My money's on Jackie. It's always the quiet ones you have to watch out for.
The showdowns are about to happen. I'm so there with popcorn at the ready.
Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 09 2013 12:01 pm
Excellent update, I understand why he looked into her background. At the time he didn't know her and was trying to find out what was going on. Devyn at core has to understand that. Why he didn't tell her well at what point does he when he was trying to get her to even date him. I feel sorry for Jason :-(
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]Date: November 06 2013 12:52 pm
Awwwww! They nned to be back together already! Lol but this time apart could prove that they are much better together than they are apart
Reviewer: Heleana503 Signed [Report This]Date: November 06 2013 03:19 am
welcome back and great update! I hated that there wasn't more.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: November 05 2013 09:43 pm
I'm glad that Jason and his father made up and going to try to build on it. Poor Christopher he so lost so many lies secrets kept from him. I hope he able to forgive his family. Now Devyn I hope she heals from the damge done by her father and find her way toJason. Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: November 05 2013 06:41 pm
Fantastic update I love your book
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: November 05 2013 05:30 pm
It is about time that William woke up. Looking forward to reading how Erin and her evil family get paid back. I hope that it's painful and last a lifetime! Is that mean? I hope that Devyn gets the closer that she needs from her father. I loved how happy he was to see Devyn it reminded me of my daddy. Thanks for this update. Christopher is finding his strength and realized that Jason had done what he had always one and that was protect him. I hope that the next update comes quicker.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 05 2013 02:18 pm
Thanks for a great update. I was glad that Devyn went to see her father. Poor Christopher. I hope that he continues to stand up for himself. I hope that William continues to reach out to his children. The moment between William and Jason was great provided that William is being sincere. As for Jason, I hope that he and Devyn get back together soon. I can't wait for the confrontation between William and the evilenes. Thanks
Reviewer: divisinred@yahoo.com Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 05 2013 02:07 pm
please update soon. I am so so anxious for more.
Reviewer: kufanatic Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 22 2013 07:36 pm
Thanks for the update. It was goood!
I think all the secrets are finally out and that's a good thing. I knew Christopher was stronger than some in his life thought. Can't wait for Erin and Madeline to get theirs, especially since the whole Westmore family will be against them.
As for Devyn and Jason, I'm glad the blowup happened so Devyn could face whatever her issues are so now she and Jason can hopefully work their issues out sooner than later.
Reviewer: Tootall Signed [Report This]Date: September 30 2013 12:06 am
Thank you, thank you, thank you for this great update...
Reviewer: CAColeman Signed [Report This]
Date: September 29 2013 05:25 pm
Thanks for a great update. Yes, finally Devyn is dealing with her insecurities. She does need to apologize to Jason, although I understand why she feels the way she does. I can't wait to read about her talk with her father. As for William, Jason and Chris....just wow, very explosive. Chris finally knows about Erin and he is starting to think for himself. Is it bad of me to say that wouldn't it be great that Chris and Devyn ended up as a couple. Both of them get no respect, it would be awesome if they ended up as a couple. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: September 29 2013 04:53 pm
Please don't make Christopher forgive her.I think Jason is right, he checked on her before they were a couple you can't blame him look at what was going on. She didn't really give him a chance. Great update.
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed
[Report This]Date: September 29 2013 03:25 pm
Curious to see how a united jacqueline and william will blow madeline and erin out of the water... Which of the Journey friends is Christopher meant for?
Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 29 2013 12:48 pm
Oh hell Family take down of Erin and Madeline! I would hate to be them right now....
What Jason said to Devyn was very true and what Christopher said to Jason had some truth to it as well
I'm glad Christopher believed his brother (I was hoping he didn't give a hard time with that) but I also hurt for him... Thouh I'm pretty sure Christopher knows how to handle his own business so I look forward to him doing his own buisness... You go Christopher
Reviewer: thincakes Signed [Report This]
Date: September 29 2013 11:43 am
This chapter was so disappointing. THAT IT WAS SO FREAKIN SHORT. However I loved that we will see a united Westmore family handle their business. Can't wait for the next installment. One request, longer chapters. I promise not to object if there is make-up sex down the road.
A
Author's Response:
LOL.....and that was one of the longer ones. I will see what I can to make the next chapter meatier for ya. Thanks for reading and for the review:-)
Reviewer: Arabelle Signed
[Report This]Date: September 29 2013 08:33 am
oooooooooooooooooooooooooooo yeah one thing never ever ever mess with a mother cubs. Once you do mother goes cra cra on you. I can't wait to they bring down Madeline and Erin. Devyon you want your man back fix your life yes he was wrong but jason right she didn't see a future with them. Thank for the update
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: September 29 2013 06:09 am
Awesome! A family didvided against itslef cannot stand. United the Westmores will fight to maintain their family unit. Jacquline is just like me,a mother hen, wanting to make sure her boys are fine.
Let me get some popcorrn, as i watch Jacquline demolish Madline and Erin!
Reviewer: Serenity Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 29 2013 05:58 am
I loved the update! I understand why Jason did a background check on Devyn, but that being said, if I where Devyn I would be pissed to the high heavens. No he did not lie to her, but what could she possibly tell him personally about her family that he does not already know? And the little bit that she was sharing, he already knew. I would feel like such a dummy, like he was secretly waiting for me to lie or something, because he already knew everything. On the other hand, I see why Jason is upset, even though he shouldn't be, Devyn was I believe waiting for the other shoe to drop and this sealed it and he called her out on it. So as much as I am still pissed and will continue to be pissed at what Jason did, coming from his perspective I can see why he would be upset. But, Devyn really does have a right to be upset.
I am super big on privacy and if that is broken into without the other person's consent, it's time to walk, in my book. I hope you do not let Devyn come to Jason first. Gosh, I know getting your background discovered by someone is not a big deal and that is awesome that some people could care less if that happened to them, but Davyn is not one of them and I cannot blame her. That's just a horrible knack that I would have a hard time getting over. Please do not make Devyn apologize, she did nothing wrong. Let her keep her space from Jason and move on without him for a while.
Reviewer: WOW!!!!!! Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 29 2013 03:58 am
Finaly Christopher knows but at the cost Jason's and his relationship. I hope that Devyn's conversation with her father helps her to overcome some of her issues and gets to apologize to Jason. I feel so bad for Christopher becasue he feels so alone. I can't wait for him to confront Erin and ask for his ring back. I want her whole family to get the payback that they deserve.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: September 29 2013 03:00 am
I am so glad you are back. Fantastic update.
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: September 29 2013 02:37 am