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My interest has been piqued, so please continue with this story!

 Reviewer: Sandra Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 03 2012 06:59 am
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Supreb. please update.

 Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 03 2012 03:41 am
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this is really good. Thanks.

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Date: March 03 2012 03:27 am
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brillant.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 03 2012 03:21 am
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You said you love this challenge, well I love your writing, you always manage to get a great pairing, there is not too much tiring words and long description but there is so much chemestry between your characters in each of your story it's kind of amazing. Really love this one ! Keep on the good writing

 Reviewer: Nynymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 03 2012 03:01 am
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I want more, this first chapter was SMOKING, lol!

 Reviewer: oHH Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 03 2012 02:26 am
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I am loving Brady and Penny,  Brady is hot I want to help heal his heart!!!  More please!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 03 2012 02:23 am
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i was really excited about this particular challenge~you did us proud.  can't wait for more.

 

i've added all of your stories to my favorites, so thank you for sharing & please keep writing!

 Reviewer: idriveavitz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 03 2012 01:59 am
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I loved this first chapter. Brady needs to get back on the horse when it comes to dating and Penelope is just the woman to do it. I hope she shows him that not all woman think about themselves when it comes to loving someone. Looking forward to the next chapter.

 Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 03 2012 01:54 am
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Hi, it's great, so far. I admit I was a little confused when you called him by his last name in the second part of the chapter. I had to read it and the next two paragraphs a couple of times over, to make sure I got it right. But other than that, it was great. No real noticeable grammatical errors. Keep up the good work. I can't wait for the next chapters, and how the story develops.

 Reviewer: This Girl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 03 2012 12:46 am
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Okay, I am really gonna like this story!

 Reviewer: KrisS Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 03 2012 12:31 am


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