I love this rewrite! I love me some Brady and Pen. I love their HEAT! I love this story
Reviewer: SafeHaven Signed
[Report This]Date: April 05 2016 12:11 pm
Brady and Pen's chemistry just POPS off the screen! I love them together. Her mom genes are going to get her in some serious trouble. I like that they have thier strengths and although they are sexually attracted to each other Brady needs a woman as forward as Pen. He needs that push, confidence builder. I think that once he gets started there will be no stopping him. Harvey is not going to play well. Excellent love this
Reviewer: SafeHaven Signed [Report This]Date: April 05 2016 11:58 am
Oh I remember this and you are rewriting it! I am excited to read as always I love the beginning
Reviewer: SafeHaven Signed [Report This]Date: April 05 2016 11:40 am
Where exactly is penelope from when she mentions that she is from half way across the world?
Author's Response:
Sorry I meant to say half way across this country not world. I will change it. She is from the western US
Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed [Report This]Date: April 05 2016 04:56 am
Thank you for another great update.
Reviewer: tcarey Signed [Report This]Date: April 05 2016 02:28 am
Harvey is delusional. You're a FRIEND, you idiot. And not a real one at that. He is making ginormous mistake underestimating Brady. What a dope.
Glad Brady is clear about what he wants with Pen.
Enjoying this story.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: April 04 2016 11:14 pm
Really love the update...please update soon
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: April 04 2016 11:10 pm
Harvey is an AS$$$$. He is that kind of man that if he can't have her noone can have her. BRady has shut you don't so many times that you look stupid. Even your own friends make you look stupid at dinner especially Clint(LOL) so what does Harvey do....LIE and sayd that he thinks Brady is blessed. What an ASS$$$$!
I LOVE me some Brady! What a good man. He does not want Pen to give him anything untilhe is sure that she wants him. I love me that man and PEn love her that man too! These two together OH LAWD!! LOL. girl they are SOMKIN HOTT! LOVE THIS STORY! What an AWESOME JOB!
Reviewer: Water Signed [Report This]Date: April 04 2016 09:46 pm
the conversation between Pen and her momma OMG I was laughing. The Sands genes are LETHAL! Its not like other men have walked itno the bank before itis just that Brady had some connection with her and they both know it. She is dangerous and flirty as HELL! Brady needs that and OH MAN what will happen with this Harvey Gordon. He sounds entitled to me. Hate him already for even thinking of messing with HOTT ASS BRADY!!!!
Reviewer: Water Signed [Report This]Date: April 04 2016 09:34 pm
Harvey, Penny does want you and she has never given any indication that she did. Why are you so dilusional? It really doesn't as you don't stand a chance, Harvey step back before you get hurt. Brady hurt the man! Will I leran like her father Max this time around or will I hate him even more?
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 04 2016 09:25 pm
I am so into this it aint even funny. love the beginning
Reviewer: Water Signed [Report This]Date: April 04 2016 09:22 pm
Brady, Brady, Brady this man is so freaking HOTT. He and Pan together is like mount St Helen. You made me tear, up, laugh and want to take a cold shower all in one chapter. Honey please Harvey is that kind of guy that would go get the ex girlfriend to fight his battle because he is a coward like Brady said. Pen that girl is so BAD! I LOVE HER!!!! LOL. Brady and Pen forever!
P.S I keep hitting the next button but nothing happens(shrugs)
Reviewer: OrangePeelings Signed [Report This]Date: April 04 2016 09:21 pm
I am in love with this story. I love Pen and Brady they got MAD chemistry. She is exactly what he needs. He needs to know that he can attract a woman because I don't think that he would do it on his own. Brady is HOTTNESS and Pen is ON FIRE! LOL love love love this story
Reviewer: OrangePeelings Signed [Report This]Date: April 04 2016 09:01 pm
Ahhh yeah! I love this already but I am going to read the rest
Reviewer: OrangePeelings Signed [Report This]Date: April 04 2016 08:46 pm
Girl... I love this story! It seem to me Harvey is the weakest link ( man ). I love myself some Brady and Pen and Clint is a hoot!!. I just have to give a round of applause to Penny for saying " I have faith in God and trust in his words, Strength is in me. " BEAUTIFUL!!! Thanks for this update.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: April 04 2016 08:46 pm
I am so glad that you back with this story...fantastic
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed
[Report This]Date: April 04 2016 07:46 pm
Girl... Brady is hott! I like Penny! Girl sometimes you have to tell your man what you like and he have to tell you what he likes. I'm all for them getting together, just because he lost a leg and foot doesn't make him any less of a man. GO BRADY!!
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: April 04 2016 06:45 pm
Girl... Not sexual healing, I love this story and Brady, Pep would be just what the doctor order. I'm thinking things are about to heat up.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: April 04 2016 06:21 pm
I love this story!!!
Reviewer: Pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 04 2016 01:50 pm
I love the chemistry between Penny and Brady! I can't wait for more chapters!!!!
Reviewer: Janez91 Signed [Report This]Date: April 04 2016 04:42 am
Mom's genes are working REAL fast. I'm surprised that Mom didn't ask if Pen was on BC. But then again, Mom probably wants grandbabies, STAT.
I like Brady. I like Pen. But there are so many who want to conspire against them. However, Brady has a family in his team that has his back COMPLETELY.
I'm enjoying this tale immensely. Well done, Chica.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: April 04 2016 12:53 am
I love this version better than the first version. I hope Will becomes a good guy as the story continues. Already I don't like Harvey, I hope Penelope see him for what he is.
Reviewer: tcarey Signed [Report This]Date: April 03 2016 08:36 pm