I really like this stroy and would love to read more of it.Reviewer: Roslyn Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 27 2012 10:39 pm
okay, i'm already hooked. Great start.Reviewer: Nu Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 14 2012 04:38 pm
I know I'm late with this review, but this was great. I hope you're inspired to revisit these characters again.Reviewer: SuperStar2577 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 27 2012 02:13 am
Will there be more? Doesn't sound like the end.
Reviewer: kimyso Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 13 2012 04:29 am
Great start to this story so far Brenda... Jazz and Derrick have great chemistry so far, and I can't wait for their second date.
I really enjoy readinhg your stories, you have a way of making each character seem so real, and it draws you right into the story.
Looking forward to more.Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 04 2012 10:50 pm
Awwww. That is so ute. Loving this story so far.Reviewer: Monique Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 04 2012 03:20 pm
This is nice shold turn this into a story. It sad how people treated someone because they don't looked like them trust me I understand Jazz and Jack. So it nice they meet each other. I hope you turn this into a story thanks for the updateReviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]
Date: March 04 2012 02:07 pm
I like itReviewer: the girl next door Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 04 2012 11:42 am