This was not how I expected this story to end! Wow...it was hot!!!! You have such a wonderful talent and your work is always flawless. Thanks for sharing and I hope this is more from these two.
Reviewer: vmck Signed [Report This]Date: March 09 2012 01:00 pm
'...expected the worst.'
and ' "Make up your mind, Mr Halpern"
other than that, great job. looking forward to more. Yum.
Reviewer: cuppacoffee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 09 2012 12:10 pm
Sex is always nice but your writing is superior when we glimpse Bear's thoughts and become perplexed over his initial internal struggle. That's where you really rope me in and *then* I'm dying for him to get somethin' somethin'!
If you do choose to write about them again, I wonder how and where it will go--ain't no way she's living in his racist town. And yet, I don't see Bear in the city. But then again, we know so little about him so maybe he could live in her world.
Or better yet--they both move to his cousin, Deputy Halpern's, district.
Reviewer: islandlass Signed [Report This]Date: March 09 2012 07:24 am
tell me thats not the end we need the people want more lol
Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 09 2012 04:00 am
Scribe, this was one of your best. I'm lovin me some Bear!!!!! Please bring this couple back soon and let me know if he's a gifted student.....
Reviewer: LadyeT Signed [Report This]Date: March 09 2012 02:49 am
OMG! You really are inspiring (as I seriously consider putting pen to paper...argh I mean fingers to keyboard...for the first time). What an amazing tale. Thank you and I really hope to see these two again in the near future.
Reviewer: RoyalKiss Signed [Report This]Date: March 09 2012 12:47 am
Sorry that this is ending, it has alot of potential. Hopefully we'll see them soon.
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 08 2012 11:39 pm
Scribe, this was so so good. You knocked this one out of the ball park! I so loved this story and it was truly an inspiration! Sorry to see it end, but hey, all good things must come to an end, right? Look foward to hearing more from Bear and Mari in the future!
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: March 08 2012 09:15 pm
Great story about opposites attract. Fun reading about Mari teaching a virgin Bear.
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: March 08 2012 09:06 pm
I should NOT have read this while taking a break at work. HOLY MOTHER OF ALL THATS BLESSED!! Whew. I'm pretty sure I'll be getting no work done.
Reviewer: Minerva Vesta Signed [Report This]Date: March 08 2012 09:04 pm
Mari you made Bear forsake his vow to remaun virgin until marriage. Maru you are such a ho, but I hope Bear changes your heart!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: March 08 2012 08:35 pm
New and Eager student indeed. Great story . Wonderful ending ... for now . :)
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 08 2012 08:32 pm
Hats off to your epicness!!
Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed [Report This]Date: March 08 2012 08:16 pm
OMG! I hope he takes her up on his invitation....
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: March 08 2012 11:04 am
All right you can't leave us hanging
Reviewer: foxyprime Signed [Report This]Date: March 08 2012 07:44 am
Totally loving this story all day . So hot and steamy . Can't wait to see what Bear does next . :)
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 08 2012 06:03 am
oh sweet jesus please continue please damn
Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 08 2012 05:48 am
I love this story. I'm so stupid, I can't bring myself to read the last two paragraphs verbatum because I would be hella embarrassed beyond belief. I just skimmed them really fast because I was embarrassed and it wasn't even me. I would probably have a heart attack, if I were in Mari's situation. It's not really that deep, I know, but I am just shame-faced like that, lol. I cannot wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: Anna Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 08 2012 05:38 am
I know that I haven't left a review for one of your masterpieces in a long minute. So I'm just gonna say this....Ummm, Miss Scribe Don't you think that you might need to hurry with that next update....uh-huh...yep I think that you need to...
Reviewer: Elizablu Signed [Report This]Date: March 08 2012 03:39 am
Mari is bold, and I love. No she didn't ask Bear if he wanted a taste? That was priceless!!! Bring on the hot, butt, naked sex!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: March 08 2012 01:22 am
holy hell.
::dialing man-ho::
Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed [Report This]Date: March 08 2012 01:20 am
Interest has been piqued. I say 'yay'
Reviewer: islandlass Signed [Report This]Date: March 07 2012 11:13 pm