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Title: Chapter 15 An Obsession Called Inga

Thank you for the update. I really like the stor and cannot wait to see how the wedding is. Look forward to the end! Which I am sure will be happy! Please do a story on Jared and Lucinda!

 Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: September 04 2012 03:57 am
Title: Chapter 15 An Obsession Called Inga

Brenda, you are a goddess!!  Thank for this update.  Charlie has got it bad and Inga is fit to be tied.  Inga let go some, Charlie loves you he gave you the goodies and asked you to marry him.  Charlie is a good egg!!  Jared is a trip, don't you want your momma to be happy?  So good!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2012 03:34 am
Title: Chapter 15 An Obsession Called Inga

Mom is a grown ass womn, and fifty is not to old to still be dating. Charlie, what is she going to do about him? He's addicted! lol

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2012 03:27 am
Title: Chapter 14 Blame it on the Rain

In the last chapter LU said, “I’m on birth control now” Lucinda reasoned. “You don’t have to use a condom.”

In this chapter she thougt, She wasn’t on any birth control yet and a baby was the last thing she needed.

 

You go Ms. Valerie get your grove on.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Sometimes I forget what I wrote.  LOL .  I'm working on an update, but my muse is stubborn!

 Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 02 2012 03:45 pm
Title: Chapter 12 Facing Reality

Ms Valerie needs someone to make her happy I hope she accepts Mr. Jones :)

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Date: August 02 2012 02:43 am
Title: Chapter 11 Growing Pains

Good job boys :D That girl was a H.A.M.

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Date: August 02 2012 01:39 am
Title: Chapter 10 Moment of Truth

LOL Charlie SR meet Karma...she is a bi+ch!

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Date: August 02 2012 01:20 am
Title: Chapter 9 New Experiences

Loved it!

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Date: August 02 2012 01:04 am
Title: Chapter 7 Confessions and Repercussions

What an emotional chapter.........Jared has finally seen the errors of his way. I am so glad he has Lu and that she is standing her ground. Thank you for not making her a desperate female longing for attention.

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Date: August 01 2012 03:02 pm
Title: Chapter 2 Change of Plans

What a tear jerking chapter...I felt like I was having this convo with my mother. She favors 1 of 7 and see nothing wrong with that.

I am like Charlie. Once upon a time, I forgot how to live my life and sacrificed for my family relatives. 

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Date: July 28 2012 07:27 pm
Title: Chapter 1 Getting to Know You

"Charlie lost his teen years"

So many parents make the mistake of letting their teenagers take on adult responsibility that some of them rebel and end up doing "adult" activities: sex, drugs, clubbing, dealing, etc. It's not a teenagers fault and s/he should not be put in adult situations.

You rarely see teenagers like Charlie who made something of himself while SACRIFICING his youth.

 Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 28 2012 06:10 pm
Title: Chapter 1 Getting to Know You

Where do you get the inspiratation for your stories? The topics are so relatable and realistic that I can't help but get into them.

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Date: July 28 2012 06:05 pm
Title: Chapter 14 Blame it on the Rain

I was so looking forward to this update,and once again you did your thing!!!!!! I'm loving all the the couples right now but I think my favorite couple will be Valerie and Fred for the simple fact that she really had a chance at real love.Our little Charlie has turn out to be ''THAT MAN'' he don't be playing around in the bedroom LOL.You would never knew he  was a late bloomer how he's always after Inga and she suppose to the more experiment one.Love how Jared is with Lucinda,she really bring out his best.Can't wait for the next update.

 Reviewer: meko1975 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 30 2012 05:51 am
Title: Chapter 14 Blame it on the Rain

Nice chapter! I'm  glad Valerie is going out on a date. Her children are enjoying themselves why not her.

 Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 30 2012 05:13 am
Title: Chapter 14 Blame it on the Rain

Loved the update! I hope you update again soon!

 Reviewer: Pris67 Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 28 2012 05:53 pm
Title: Chapter 14 Blame it on the Rain

Yeah Fred! He finally asked Val out she needs to get a social life and be with a good man.

Jared love him some Lu and no condom maybe it's not her time of the month where she can get pregnant.

Charlie don't hold back no punches either Inga can hang though like he said I remember a time when she was begging for some affection (wink)

Thank you for the update,....

Happy writing

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 27 2012 09:44 am
Title: Chapter 14 Blame it on the Rain

Loved the update! Glad Valerie has some distraction. At least Fred can show her that her life isn't over.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 27 2012 06:45 am
Title: Chapter 14 Blame it on the Rain

Sooo happy to see this update!!!!! I sure hope Mama gets her groove back!!!!

 Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 27 2012 05:31 am
Title: Chapter 14 Blame it on the Rain

thanks for the lovely update!! somebodys gonna end up pregnant pretty soon!! more please!!

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Date: June 27 2012 04:35 am
Title: Chapter 14 Blame it on the Rain

Brenda!!  Why oh why do you have me singing..."Blame it on the rain, it was falling, falling.  Blame in on the stars, they shine at night. I admit it! I was so in love with milli vanilli!!!  

Please excuse all errors in above review.  Visualizing the wonderful things Charlie and Jared were doing in this chapter has me a little 'twitchy.'

 

 

 Reviewer: RoyalKiss Signed [Report This]
Date: June 27 2012 02:54 am
Title: Chapter 14 Blame it on the Rain

Well, I'm with Charlie; Inga was wanting all his attention and she definitely wanted to make sure she got to that before any other woman did. Well, she got it...lol! NO whining!!

Charlie doesn't care about what Val does like that. He was just reminding her she, in fact, was the parent, and not him. Now that they have an understanding, its all good. 

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 27 2012 02:35 am
Title: Chapter 14 Blame it on the Rain

Yay!!  Go Valerie and Fred!  I hope Jared helps Lucinda to gain some confidence in herself.  

 Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 27 2012 02:23 am
Title: Chapter 14 Blame it on the Rain

I am glad that mom is finally moving on with her life.  I like Fred he seems like a nice man.  Poor Inga, Charlie is about to wear her out.  I like Lu and she seems to be good for the former jackass.  At least he is very respectful of Lu.  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 27 2012 02:07 am
Title: Chapter 14 Blame it on the Rain

Thank you for the update.  I love this story!

 Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: June 27 2012 02:00 am
Title: Chapter 14 Blame it on the Rain

Yay, Val going to get some.

As for Charlie and Jared they've put their stamp on their women. Its only amount time before we hear wedding bells.

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 27 2012 12:00 am


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