Title: Chapter 13 The End of Abstinence

please update soon I love your story

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 03 2012 07:17 pm

Title: Chapter 13 The End of Abstinence

Ahhhh! That was down right the bomb on all regards.  I like the way Valrie put it for the boys on sharing there seed it was a great analogy.

Charlie is whipped and now so is Jared they can't get enough of their women I am happy that Jared made it good for Lu but like he said it is different when you're in love.

All seems to be coming together I am waiting for the other shoe to fall hope it's not a bad fall but we shall see.

Both men have told their women they are going to marry them.....A double wedding maybe???

Thank you for the update.

Happy writing.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2012 07:10 pm

Title: Chapter 13 The End of Abstinence

Absolutely LOVED the new chapter!   I've been so busy lately with school and work, but seeing your update, I just had to stop by to check it out!

Loved the Charlie and Inga reunion; super hot, as always...so Charlie's got a freaky side, huh...who would've known...lol

Love Lucinda and the new and improved Jared; they are so cute together...love that Lu is opening herself up to Jared; she deserves happiness at last.

The twins are so adorable; I can only imagine how embarrassed they must've been listening to their mom.  Glad she took the time to talk to them; they have so much potential.

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2012 04:45 pm

Title: Chapter 13 The End of Abstinence

Welcome back stranger. Thanks for that hot, and I mean hot update. Those Peterson men are wicked.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2012 04:26 pm

Title: Chapter 13 The End of Abstinence

Whoo Brenda1257 Thank Youuu for the wonderful updates whoo charlie is just mind blowing whoo go Inga!!!!! and lu and jared are so beautiful loving all the love!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2012 04:05 pm

Title: Chapter 3 Feeling the Fire

Still smiling! Good chapter!

 

Reviewer: flgurleygrl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2012 06:15 am

Title: Chapter 1 Getting to Know You

Good start. Good story.

Reviewer: flgurleygrl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 24 2012 05:10 am

Title: Chapter 12 Facing Reality

I hope Charlie and Jared decide to have a double wedding! Glad the twins wised up and left that skank hanging!  Love your stories!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2012 06:25 am

Title: Chapter 12 Facing Reality

can't wait 4 a new update, this story is great!

Reviewer: Skip2641 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2012 04:09 am

Title: Chapter 12 Facing Reality

Bowwing down to the Queen!!

OMG! BRENDA. Hot Damn!  All I can say is, 'GO TEAM CHARLIE!' 'GO. GO!'

I'm speechless, uh I mean typeless (is this even a word?).  Please, please no real conflicts I'm begging you. I'm dying over here waiting to see Jared unleash his 'Peterson obsession gene' too.  Lu, watch out now!

It's Spring, and Easter is just around the corner. Let's have everyone get their HEA. 

Thanks for another awesome and inspiring update.

 



Author's Response:

LOL.  What's life without a little conflict.  (no deaths or anything unsolvable) LOL.  I'm glad you're enjoying the story.  thanks for the review!

Reviewer: RoyalKiss Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 03 2012 02:47 pm

Title: Chapter 12 Facing Reality

Loved the update!! Wow, Charlie is determined...hope all works out well. Loving Jared and Lu.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 03 2012 06:01 am

Title: Chapter 12 Facing Reality

i was soooo tickled to see yet another update!!! sooo glad the dinner went well. hopefully valerie will warm up to inga over time and she, inga, and lu can get along well. im lovin jared more and more. soooo proud of the man hes becoming and i cant wait until lu gives him the green light. hell be even more hooked and obsessed than he already is lol!! inga is soooo pregnant!! more please!!

Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 03 2012 05:25 am

Title: Chapter 12 Facing Reality

This was a great update. I am loving this story! I hope Lucinda is able to work through whatever is holding her back. She and Jared could be so hot. Maybe even as hot as Charlie and Inga.....BOY does he know how to propose.

Thanks so much for your great work. Can't wait for your next update.

Reviewer: SuperStar2577 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 03 2012 01:09 am

Title: Chapter 12 Facing Reality

Now the twins have a girl after both of them. That girl needs more counseling to deal with issues. No way should she try to sleep with both twins at the same time. She is way to young to even think that way. I'm glad the boys realized that was wrong. I feel bad that Valerie feels that she will lose all her sons to their wives. Just because she had a bad experience doesn't mean it's true. Both the Peterson men are determine to marry their girlfriends. I like that. Also what a small world. Valerie knowing Lu's mom and have such a wonderful relationship with her. You story is so good!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 02 2012 10:10 pm

Title: Chapter 12 Facing Reality

great update

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 02 2012 10:00 pm

Title: Chapter 12 Facing Reality

thaT was soo hot, dont we all want to get proposed to like that.

Reviewer: chocolateorange Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 02 2012 07:23 pm

Title: Chapter 12 Facing Reality

Thanks for another awesome update; Inga was going to say yes whether she wanted to or not, after Charlie put it on her...lol...

I love how Jared is stepping up and finally becoming a man!  He is impressing me more and more each day.  I really wish Lu would get over whatever is holding her back and be with Jared; they'll be so good for each other...I can see them running her store together as a married couple with their brood of kids...yeah, I'm getting ahead of myself, but oh well:)

I really hope that Mama Peterson finds her own love; that will really make a huge difference once all the kids grow up and leave the house.  She's been alone for so long that it will be nice for her to finally have someone to care for and cherish her.

So glad you were able to squeeze one moire update in before the week started; much appreciated!

Have a great week; don't work too hard!

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 02 2012 06:07 pm

Title: Chapter 12 Facing Reality

I am enjoying Lucinda and Jared's story!  Almost more than Charlie and Inga.

Hopefully Valerie will continue to thaw towards Inga, I cannot wait to see Mama Valerie fall in love!  LOL...

 

 

Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02 2012 05:46 pm

Title: Chapter 12 Facing Reality

Val surprise me. She really took to Lu.

Charlie doesn't seem like the only alpha male in the household. His declaration to Lu was really something.  



Author's Response:

Knowing Lu's mother made all the difference in the world.  Lu's self worth and self esteem was at an all time low after what happened to her.  Jared is determined to make her understand that he really does care about her.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 02 2012 04:20 pm

Title: Chapter 12 Facing Reality

Loved it. Everyboy is on the way to being happy!



Author's Response:

Ha ha !  Yes, but I'm sure there will be a little more conflict along the way.  LOL

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 02 2012 02:56 pm

Title: Chapter 12 Facing Reality

Wow i am sooo happy the dinner went great Jared declaring in front of his family that lucinda is going to be his wife and Charlie doing the same with his lady love Inga just was wonderful whoo loved how jared laid it out for lucinda about his love for her whoo and damn if i didnt Loveeeee i mean loveeee Charlie proposal technique whoo the man has skillz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Love this story soooo much Thank You for the update........



Author's Response:

When love hits those Peterson men, they know it's the real deal.  Yes, Charlie knows how to keep Inga in line.  LOL

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 02 2012 01:28 pm

Title: Chapter 11 Growing Pains

Thanks for the update. Love it!!! keep them chapters coming!!!

Reviewer: Serenity Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 02 2012 02:10 am

Title: Chapter 11 Growing Pains

Great chapter! 

Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01 2012 03:28 pm

Title: Chapter 11 Growing Pains

This is really a great story. Kudos!!!

Reviewer: Sandra Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 01 2012 11:39 am

Title: Chapter 11 Growing Pains

great up date

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 01 2012 08:34 am



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