Title: Chapter 2 Change of Plans

This story is sooo good More please

Reviewer: Hanna Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 20 2012 11:46 pm

Title: Chapter 9 New Experiences

Great update Brenda!!

Reviewer: BritneyKai Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 20 2012 10:20 pm

Title: Chapter 9 New Experiences

Loved the update!

Is it just me, or is Jared well on his way to becoming a man???  Better late than never!  Loved the way he stood up for Lucinda in the restaurant; that was so awesome!  I hate the fact that Lu's self-esteem is so low, but I know if there's anyone that can help her repair it, it's Jared...love these two!

Now on to the main event...Charlie put a hurting on Inga...he heeee...love how the student became the master over the course of the night!  I love it that the next day Charlie was feeling on top of the world, while Inga could only just manage to drag herself out of bed, then fall right back into it (snickers evilly), chug some pain pills and fall right back to sleep...

It's always such a bonus to see an update of this story, now I can get back to work...you're inspiring me to be a better employee...lol...



Author's Response:

Thanks Amie:  LOL Inga been wanting it and now she has it...so she better be careful what she asks for cuz now that Charlie's had it, he'll want it all the time.  LOL.  I'm glad you can get some work done.  I've got to be dedicated for the rest of the week so I can't promise any more updates before the weekend.

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 20 2012 09:47 pm

Title: Chapter 9 New Experiences

It must be something in the water because those Peterson brothers are smoking HOT.

Charlie sure laid it down. I half expected Inga the break into an aria. Me thinks Inga's spung.

As for Jared, I appreciate the he's becoming a gentleman. When he took up for Lu, my respect for him grew.  I also like that he made Lu feel special and that she matter.  



Author's Response:

Jared has never had anyone who treated him as good as Lu.  He's sprung andhe knows it.  LOL.

 More is coming in a few days...

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 20 2012 09:36 pm

Title: Chapter 9 New Experiences

Oh my gosh you delivered i mean inga and charlie was mind blowing i was like damnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!! ooooh and jared putting that no account for a man crayton in his place i just love the more mature jared it is soooo wonderful and i mean he did a little claiming on his own to his woman lucinda whoo i just love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hey Hershey.  She wanted it, now she got it but can she handle it?  Hmmm.  I think Inga's going to start ducking Charlie a little bit.  LOL

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 20 2012 08:54 pm

Title: Chapter 9 New Experiences

Yayyy!

I get so happy when I see that this is updated!

Reviewer: Jamilla Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 20 2012 08:14 pm

Title: Chapter 1 Getting to Know You

Oh man, between Jermaine, Chuck P Snr and Mrs Holgroom I was like Charlie just stay a virgin hun, its not even worth it. Buuuuuuut...She said she loves him, *cue Snoopy happy dance* Its your first time Charlie Brown!

Don't even worry about where you left it, my deviant mind can take it from here...

Reviewer: annie_jl Signed [Report This]
Date: March 20 2012 06:34 pm

Title: Chapter 8 A Man Coming into His Own

umm yeah, story interruptus. But looking forward to the Education of Charlie.

Charlie took some of Jared's words to heart. Jared had a very interesting perspective regarding their growing up years. It always fascinates me how two people can experience the same events and come away with different perceptions of what happened. Reality is subjective.

But there is no doubt that Charles, Sr is a bastid. Devoid of any human decency whatsoever. Makes me wonder why the hell Valerie hasn't divorced his no account butt.

So, hope you update soon, Chica.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 20 2012 12:17 pm

Title: Chapter 8 A Man Coming into His Own

Great update. Please don't make us wait for more.

Reviewer: SuperStar2577 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 20 2012 02:27 am

Title: Chapter 8 A Man Coming into His Own

Sooo, just getting to read this update; unfortunately work was really busy today, so no time to read earlier...lol...

Loved it, as always; you never disappoint!

I can't believe that ass Charles Snr. actually has the nerve to press charges against poor Jared, but I know my dear Brenda will NOT let them stick!  The New Yorkers really need to catch up with the scum-bag SOON and take care of him once & for all, so that we can all have peace.

So glad that the brothers got to finally have a good chat and get some things off their chests...maybe they'll both understand each other a little better and become closer after this...

So the moment of truth is almost upon us, huh...maybe I should go to confession tonight...lol...can't wait for the good lovin to begin:)

More, please:)

Signed, Your Dear Buddy Olivia Twist...

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 20 2012 02:04 am

Title: Chapter 8 A Man Coming into His Own

I dispise Charles Peterson Sr., and I am waiting for him to die!!    Poor Jared, was just protecting his brothers and his sperm donor is skating right along.  I hate Charles Peterson Sr.!!!  I am glad that Charlie broke down like that Inga it forced to her admit her love for him and I am happy that Inga thought about him and his true feelings instead of just thinking about sex.  Inga has grown!! Great update Brenda, you are s awesome!!!



Author's Response:

Well Charles Peterson, Jr. (Charlie is Charles III) is about to get what's coming tohim.  Charlie is getting what's coming to him too and poor Jared is going to have to work for his a little bit longer.  LOL

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 20 2012 01:37 am

Title: Chapter 8 A Man Coming into His Own

Me and the Muse need to have a talk! 

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 20 2012 01:36 am

Title: Chapter 8 A Man Coming into His Own

Here I am in the middle of Magic Kingdom making the kids wait whie I read and write this review...and you stop here???? That is mean as hell!!! Lmao! Can't wait for an update!

Author's Response:

Artamiss!  You better pay attention to those kids!  LOL.  I'm hating on you a little bit cuz I'm at work.

More is coming!

Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2012 09:46 pm

Title: Chapter 8 A Man Coming into His Own

Ok....the brothers finally have their truce. I could go on to rebut some of what Jared has said, but I'll let it be for the sake of reconciliation...lol. I need to move on as well...lol! He still needs to get the hell up out of Lucinda's place though. That's just wrong.

Inga and Charlie...ok...its going to happen.



Author's Response:

Go on and say all you want to say.  LOL  The brothers just heard each other's perspective on things.  As for Lucinda, don't you worry.  She don't really want him to go, cuz she do like him, but she aint no fool.  He's going to have to work harder to get her than he has any other girl.  LOL

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2012 09:41 pm

Title: Chapter 8 A Man Coming into His Own

Yup...she's being horrible! 

Great chapter tho!

I'm glad Jared and Charlie have an understanding :)

Reviewer: Jamilla Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2012 08:24 pm

Title: Chapter 8 A Man Coming into His Own

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

OH.MY.GAWD! THEY'RE GONNA GET IT ON! YESSSSSSSSS! I'm not even mad at you for cutting it short! I'm just happy their finally gonna do the nasty! lol 



Author's Response:

Yes, hot naked virgin sex is coming up probably tomorrow?  Hmmm Is virgin sex an oxymoron?

Reviewer: Dani Cali Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19 2012 07:35 pm

Title: Chapter 8 A Man Coming into His Own

I didn't like they way Charlie was made to look like he had done something wrong in how how tried to take care of his family. Mom was still there even if she was in denial all of those years, yet good ole Charlie has to apologize to his brother about not understanding all of these years what he was going through. I would have like to hear Jared give him more of an I'm sorry too, instead of talking about him still having the V on his chest.

Yeah, to the both of them finally getting their feelings out in the open, time for for some hot sex. Great update!



Author's Response:

Charlie has nothing to be ashamed about.  Both he and Jared were airing what was on their minds and it really kinda brought them closer together.  Jared knows that he was a pain in the butt!  LOL Charlie is just glad to see his brother finally grow up a little.  Jared knows that his brother cares about him, which made him happy. 

More is coming...

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2012 06:52 pm

Title: Chapter 8 A Man Coming into His Own

oh my the worst possible place to leave a simmering cliff hanger whoo inga finally bared the truth of her love for charlie oh my i am soooo happy!!!,,,, ok now that sorry sob getting off free then pressing charges on jared really mad me angry but i got a feeling that the slimey slug is getting whats coming to him very very soon i just feel it!!!! loved the new grown jared now he needs these bogus charges off him asap also loving the budding romance between him and lucinda even if she dont beleive it i know that theirs romance between the two whoo i just love this story sooo much Yock Rock!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Sorry Hershey, but more is coming.  Charlie is going to get what's coming to him.  Hee hee and so will Inga.

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2012 06:42 pm

Title: Chapter 8 A Man Coming into His Own

You are evil. These cliffhangers are killing me.

Charles, Charles, Charles... is one lucky old dog.  The bad guys need to stop extending him time and just break his legs.



Author's Response:

LOL Charles can run but he can't hide.   

I know, the muse is evil, but I guarantee you that hot lovn is coming up...

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2012 06:39 pm

Title: Chapter 8 A Man Coming into His Own

MRS BRENDA!!! NOW U KNOW THAT U ARE WRONG FOR THAT!!! GOT MY HOPES UP...READY FOR SOME HOT ACTION...(bad brenda...bad brenda...)



Author's Response:

I know...I tried to reason with that muse, but you Liz know how that is.  I can promise you though that the next chapter will pick up where I left off.  Hee hee!

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2012 06:30 pm

Title: Chapter 7 Confessions and Repercussions

Late start reading! Wow, what a loser dad is! Good for Jared saving his brothers and I hope he is changing for the good! Loving this story just like your other ones! Hope Charlie puts Inga out of her misery soon!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2012 12:02 pm

Title: Chapter 7 Confessions and Repercussions

Ms. Brenda, you have really outdone yourself. that was great.

Reviewer: readywonder Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 19 2012 07:37 am

Title: Chapter 7 Confessions and Repercussions

please give us more, do not stop.   luv the story

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2012 03:48 am

Title: Chapter 3 Feeling the Fire

bring it on....continue the great story

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2012 01:49 am

Title: Chapter 1 Getting to Know You

wow...great beginning

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2012 12:51 am



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