Brilliant Ms. Brenda! Just Brilliant. Loved all of it.
Author's Response:
Thanks Liz. I really enjoy your stories also!
Reviewer: Elizablu Signed [Report This]Date: February 01 2013 12:21 am
That was sweet, Charles is going to the hoosegau and Charlie and Inga got married. It would be nice if Charles got shanked in prison, that would really make me happy. I hate to see this story end but it was a great ending to magnificent story. Thanks Brenda!!
Author's Response:
Thanks PM. I just want to complete all my open stories before I begin another. It has been a challenge!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: February 01 2013 12:12 am
I loved this story. But then again I love all your stories. Great job!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for all of your reviews and support!
Reviewer: Acdromance Signed [Report This]Date: February 01 2013 12:06 am
Merci Mme Brenda it was totally worth the wait. Loved it absolutely loved it waiting for more Lue and Jared.
Reviewer: Hawtgurl Signed [Report This]Date: January 31 2013 10:35 pm
Beautiful!
Reviewer: Teiga Signed [Report This]Date: January 25 2013 01:20 am
Great update! I just want to know: are we going to see some Jared and Lucinda soon? I miss them so much.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 12 2012 04:58 am
OMG! Love this story. Think Inga and Charlie are really cute together. Can't wait to see them get married. Glad that Charles wasn't able to get it up to rape her. Can't wait for update.
Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed [Report This]Date: November 11 2012 02:48 am
time for the wedding, can't wait!
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: November 07 2012 09:45 pm
One sick daddy!
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: November 07 2012 09:37 pm
Great update I hope that the most repugnate thing happens to Charlie Senior in the slammer. I love that Inga is now gung ho about getting married now. I believe that the life altering reality of almost being raped and murdered has shown her that all the things that she is worried about with Charlie is little stuff compared to what could have been. Perhaps even Charlie will see that Inga working is not the worst thing that could happen after this horrible experience. Maybe even Carlo the crime boss will have a heart and give Charlie his money back as a wedding gift for the lovely couple that would be a kick in well used backside of Charles Senior:) Can't wait for the update!
Reviewer: charly43 Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 07 2012 12:28 am
there may be a wedding after all!
update soon
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 06 2012 05:18 am
Charles is disgusting. I'm glad he didn't get the $5,000 left after the debt was paid. I hope he gets sent away for a long time. I admire Inga for wanting to go through with the wedding. I hope she can fully enjoy the festivities.
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: November 05 2012 06:54 pm
Charles needs to sleep with the fishes!
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: November 05 2012 07:54 am
I hope Inga doesn't decide to change her hair! Jared needs to back up off Mom!
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: November 05 2012 07:27 am
Damn, I was hoping that Charlie would get the chance to beat Charles. I really wanted Charlie to beat down making him black and blue and breaking his nose. I am glad that Inga is alright and is eager to get married. So awesome!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 05 2012 04:20 am
Excellent upate. I am glad Inga was found and his okay thanks to Charlie. Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: oHH Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 05 2012 04:16 am
Glad that Inga is ok and wasn't taped by that weasel. To bad Charlie Jr did shoot that parasite that is his father. Can't wait for the wedding. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: November 05 2012 03:47 am
Please update soon. I don't feel like Charles Sr. suffered. Let Carlo get his hands on the greedy bastard.
Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]Date: November 05 2012 03:33 am
Please update soon...good chapter
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: November 05 2012 02:35 am
Good... they need to move forward with their plans.
Thanks for the update cant wait until the next update
Date: November 05 2012 02:17 am
I really like Inga. She has suffered too much. Please let her be happy now.
Reviewer: ShelbyD Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 05 2012 02:15 am
Love it ! Love Charlie! He is the man!
Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]Date: November 05 2012 02:11 am
I'm glad Charlie found Inga in time, but I wish Charles had to go back to Vegas indefinitely.
Reviewer: Drea Signed [Report This]Date: November 05 2012 02:05 am
Charlie's dad is crazy. I'm happy he couldn't get to rape her.
Reviewer: nightseer Signed [Report This]Date: November 05 2012 01:57 am
Good for Valerie! She needs to see what a real man will treat her like!
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: November 03 2012 09:12 am