Title: Chapter 19 Moving Forward

Brilliant Ms. Brenda! Just Brilliant. Loved all of it.



Author's Response:

Thanks Liz.  I really enjoy your stories also!

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 01 2013 12:21 am

Title: Chapter 19 Moving Forward

That was sweet, Charles is going to the hoosegau and Charlie and Inga got married.  It would be nice if Charles got shanked in prison, that would really make me happy.  I hate to see this story end but it was a great ending to magnificent story.  Thanks Brenda!!



Author's Response:

Thanks PM.  I just want to complete all my open stories before I begin another.  It has been a challenge!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 01 2013 12:12 am

Title: Chapter 19 Moving Forward

I loved this story. But then again I love all your stories. Great job!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for all of your reviews and support!

Reviewer: Acdromance Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 01 2013 12:06 am

Title: Chapter 1 Getting to Know You

Merci Mme Brenda it was totally worth the wait. Loved it absolutely loved it waiting for more Lue and Jared.

Reviewer: Hawtgurl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 31 2013 10:35 pm

Title: Chapter 13 The End of Abstinence

Beautiful!

Reviewer: Teiga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 25 2013 01:20 am

Title: Chapter 18 Desperate Measures

Great update! I just want to know: are we going to see some Jared and Lucinda soon? I miss them so much.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 12 2012 04:58 am

Title: Chapter 1 Getting to Know You

OMG! Love this story. Think Inga and Charlie are really cute together. Can't wait to see them get married. Glad that Charles wasn't able to get it up to rape her. Can't wait for update.

Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 11 2012 02:48 am

Title: Chapter 18 Desperate Measures

time for the wedding, can't wait!

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 07 2012 09:45 pm

Title: Chapter 17 Bad Penny Turning Up

One sick daddy!

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 07 2012 09:37 pm

Title: Chapter 1 Getting to Know You

Great update I hope that the most repugnate thing happens to Charlie Senior in the slammer. I love that Inga is now gung ho about getting married now. I believe that the life altering reality of almost being raped and murdered has shown her that all the things that she is worried about with Charlie is little stuff compared to what could have been. Perhaps even Charlie will see that Inga working is not the worst thing that could happen after this horrible experience. Maybe even Carlo the crime boss will have a heart and give Charlie his money back as a wedding gift for the lovely couple that would be a kick in well used backside of Charles Senior:) Can't wait for the update!

Reviewer: charly43 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 07 2012 12:28 am

Title: Chapter 18 Desperate Measures

there may be a wedding after all! 

update soon

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 06 2012 05:18 am

Title: Chapter 18 Desperate Measures

Charles is disgusting. I'm glad he didn't get the $5,000 left after the debt was paid. I hope he gets sent away  for a long time. I admire Inga for wanting to go through with the wedding. I hope she can fully enjoy the festivities.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 05 2012 06:54 pm

Title: Chapter 16 Feeding the Obsession

Charles needs to sleep with the fishes!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 05 2012 07:54 am

Title: Chapter 15 An Obsession Called Inga

I hope Inga doesn't decide to change her hair!  Jared needs to back up off Mom!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 05 2012 07:27 am

Title: Chapter 18 Desperate Measures

Damn, I was hoping that Charlie would get the chance to beat Charles.  I really wanted Charlie to beat down making him black and blue and breaking his nose.  I am glad that Inga is alright and is eager to get married.  So awesome!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 05 2012 04:20 am

Title: Chapter 18 Desperate Measures

Excellent upate. I am glad Inga was found and his okay thanks to Charlie. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: oHH Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 05 2012 04:16 am

Title: Chapter 18 Desperate Measures

Glad that Inga is ok and wasn't taped by that weasel. To bad Charlie Jr did shoot that parasite that is his father. Can't wait for the wedding. Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 05 2012 03:47 am

Title: Chapter 18 Desperate Measures

Please update soon. I don't feel like Charles Sr. suffered. Let Carlo get his hands on the greedy bastard.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 05 2012 03:33 am

Title: Chapter 18 Desperate Measures

Please update soon...good chapter

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 05 2012 02:35 am

Title: Chapter 18 Desperate Measures

Good... they need to move forward with their plans.

Thanks for the update cant wait until the next update

Reviewer: mustang_writer Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 05 2012 02:17 am

Title: Chapter 1 Getting to Know You

I really like Inga.  She has suffered too much.  Please let her be happy now.

Reviewer: ShelbyD Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 05 2012 02:15 am

Title: Chapter 18 Desperate Measures

Love it ! Love Charlie! He is the man!

Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: November 05 2012 02:11 am

Title: Chapter 18 Desperate Measures

I'm glad Charlie found Inga in time, but I wish Charles had to go back to Vegas indefinitely.

Reviewer: Drea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 05 2012 02:05 am

Title: Chapter 18 Desperate Measures

Charlie's dad is crazy. I'm happy he couldn't get to rape her.

Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 05 2012 01:57 am

Title: Chapter 14 Blame it on the Rain

Good for Valerie! She needs to see what a real man will treat her like!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 03 2012 09:12 am



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