The hell is wrong with Charles?! I'm waiting for Charlie to kill him so they can be dead and not have to worry about him turning up around every corner.
Reviewer: AP Anonymous
[Report This]Date: October 31 2012 07:33 pm
You are just pure evil, how dare you leave us on such an intense cliff hanger. you must update soon, we need to find out what happens next.
Reviewer: chocolateorange Signed [Report This]Date: October 31 2012 06:57 am
Such a sick bastard
Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed [Report This]Date: October 30 2012 10:55 am
Omg Charlie is going to kill his father!!!! Please update
Reviewer: xiaomei21 Signed [Report This]Date: October 28 2012 11:52 pm
Ugh.... why can't Charles Sr. just die?
Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]Date: October 28 2012 08:26 am
Oh, my god! Why? Why not just finish the chapter? You are so cruel, Brenda! So cruel!
Reviewer: tens Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 28 2012 06:48 am
Charlie Senior is such a turd! I hate him and just when I think the booty warrior can't get any lower he finds a lower level of hell to nestle himself into. Damn! I don't know what you have planned for his retribution but whatever it is will be too good for his sorry ass. Great chapter, I can't wait to read more. Thanks
Author's Response:
No retribution for Charles....I'm working on the update.
Reviewer: charly43 Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 28 2012 03:45 am
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Oh my gosh, that man is twisted! Thanks for the update Brenda, I've been missing this story!
Reviewer: chatty504 Signed [Report This]Date: October 28 2012 01:27 am
Please update soon!!
Reviewer: mustang_writer Signed
[Report This]Date: October 28 2012 12:38 am
The chapter heading was do spot in, that asswipe Charles Peterson is back He kidnapped Igna and is going to use her to get money out ofChalie. I hope that the police him, I mean riddle him with bullit holes! Make him look like swiss cheese an leave his body for the animals. Cor me happy that Charlie figured out that it waa fake text so glad that Sr. is dumber than,a box of rocks. ,Charlie to the rescue!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 28 2012 12:33 am
OMG I can't believe that sick Nf kidnapped Inga. And then tried to rape her. Thank goodness Charlie still had those survelience cameras and knows what his father did. I hope Charlie gets ti Inga in time. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: October 28 2012 12:19 am
Charlie is so old fashion. He wants to pay off Inga's debt and she doesn't want him to? WOW!!! As for Charles, Sr. I hope the people from Vegas finds his trifiling ass and drag him back to Vegas before he does something stoopid. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: October 28 2012 12:05 am
Inca and Charlie are so good for each other. As for Jared he is living his life why can't he be happy that his mother has the opportunity to be with a nice man. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: October 28 2012 12:00 am
Good for Valerie moving on. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: October 27 2012 11:57 pm
Charlie is going to whup..that..ass
That man is one sick puppy. I'm on pins and needles right now. Great job, Chica.
Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 27 2012 11:37 pm
Charles has sunk even deeper in his s*@t I can't even say I'm surprised by his action he is like a coach row h no matter how hard u try to get rid of him he keeps coming back. Well he won't be returning from this f-up that's for sure. U just don't know the relief that came over me when he couldn't get it up.
At first Charlie had thought the worse that Intact had left him I'm pleased that he took a 2nd look and found the errors. I also luv that he had cameras on the house and has a good eye and mind to figure out where she is.
Val gave Charles too much credit when she said he was sick he is way pass sick in ways I can't describe I hope this is the last we ever see of his ads.
Ms B as always that u for the great update.
More plz. Happy writing!
[Report This]Date: October 27 2012 11:24 pm
Its time to stop playing around with Charles now. Put him away!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: October 27 2012 11:18 pm
WOW! I guess he would do just about anything 2 hurt his family! I know Charlie will get there soon, i'm so glad that he didn't rape Inga!
Great update can't wait 4 the next one!
Reviewer: Skip2641 Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 27 2012 10:36 pm
Oh! I can't wait for Charles to finally get what is coming to him. He should have been put away a long time ago. He is a waste of space.
Author's Response:
Its coming....and soon!
Reviewer: Drea Signed [Report This]Date: October 27 2012 10:29 pm
Wow Charles is a terrible excuse for a human being. I can not wait to read about the confrontation between him and Charlie because I know Charlie is going to rip him apart!
Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 27 2012 10:26 pm
I love the update...Senior needs a good ole A**kicking or the lose of his manhood
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: October 27 2012 09:47 pm
Am I the only one hoping that Charlie shoots this bastard? I've had just about enough of him & he just won't go away, he needs to die. What kind of man does the things he's done to his family? I'm happy he couldn't get it up, now he can't taint Inga's body with his filthy own. Anyway, please update soon... I'm dying to see the outcome.
Reviewer: Terri Day Signed [Report This]Date: October 27 2012 09:24 pm
More please....
Reviewer: nightseer Signed [Report This]Date: October 27 2012 08:55 pm
WHAT! Please updates soon! I love this story! I want CharLie to kill him!
Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]Date: October 27 2012 08:16 pm
OMG! My face is the face of tina?!?!?!?! OMG! OMG! OMG! No freaking way. hahah this is AWESOME! In case you are in doubt, my name is Grace Onuoha, look me up on facebook. DAMNNNNNN! I actually have a story on here too. OMG!
Author's Response:
Talk about coincidence! LOL I wanted a sweet no-nonsense friend-to-the-end pix for Tina. I guess you look like a true blue friend. LOL More of her is coming up too. I'm glad you like the story.
Reviewer: petrominah Signed [Report This]Date: September 22 2012 07:35 am