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Title: Chapter 2

I was not liking Sarah there for a moment.  Now that reality has set in, I'm holding my judgment until I read the last chapter!  Would be justice if she realizes that she's always loved him too!  LOL



Author's Response:

Sweet poetic justice! I so want that to happen, but my cynical english heart is arguing the against. Don't write her off just yet, I know she's not the easiest person to like but hopefully this whole experience will mean something to both of them.

Thanks for RaRing 

 Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 19 2012 12:55 pm
Title: Chapter 2

He loves her and wants to respect that.  Now I guess Sarah just realized that he is in love with her.  I wonder how she feels about that.  Thanks



Author's Response:

....she did and she's gonna need a sec to process. Thanks for the interest

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2012 10:56 am
Title: Chapter 1

Wow a 28 year old doctor that is a virgin.  I am surprised because I am sure that there are a lot of woman that would go for him.  As Sarah does she really like him or just wants to have a booty call because she is upset about her audition.  It is amazing that she is trying to be a dancer given her medical condition.  Is that how she met the doctor?  Thanks



Author's Response:

She's a stubborn madame and yeah it was sooo a booty call...

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2012 10:35 am
Title: Chapter 2

poor Sam. Hope in the next chapter, I'm yelling, YAY SAM!



Author's Response:

I know. I'll yell with you, YAY SAM!!!

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 19 2012 09:59 am
Title: Chapter 2

Interesting chapter. I'm kind of confused though. Did sarah just realize the sam's like completely in love with her? Also Shia & Kat nice choices! Unless i get visuals or a really good desciption Kat Graham is one of my default mind images. And Shia is just one sexy man! Update soon!



Author's Response:

She sure did, and she's really old enough to know by now that sex between friends is never that simple. Yeah, Kat Graham, so bloody pretty and this story developed while I was watching transformers so it was always going to be LeBeouf. Thanks for reading.

 Reviewer: Dani Cali Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19 2012 07:49 am
Title: Chapter 2

In my humble opinion Sarah is a bitch who has no respect for others.  I hope that she grows as a human being as this story continues.  But I love Sam and his brother Max is a hot mess. Love those two, Max is hilarious!!



Author's Response:

Lolz! I wouldn't say a bitch, but she's definately self involved and a bit naive so hopefully this will be the wake up call she needs. Glad you like the brothers, and thank you for the review tis much appreciated.

 

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2012 03:08 am
Title: Chapter 1

great start



Author's Response:

Wowsers, thanks for the interest guys hoping to have the second chapter up by Sunday, its wordy. Thanks again

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 16 2012 06:10 am
Title: Chapter 1

I'm looking forward to seeing how this progresses!

 Reviewer: Dani Cali Signed [Report This]
Date: March 16 2012 05:17 am
Title: Chapter 1

Great start!

 Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 16 2012 04:12 am
Title: Chapter 1

So far so good.. Next chapter please.. :-)

 Reviewer: ReneeK Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 16 2012 02:31 am
Title: Chapter 1

Great story so far. I like everything about it and you should continue.

 Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 16 2012 01:07 am
Title: Chapter 1

I like this! Its good!

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 15 2012 11:48 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I am already in love with Dr. Sam, more please!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 15 2012 11:17 pm
Title: Chapter 1

First try you say?  I'm more than impressed!  Good job!  I want more...and soon!

 Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 15 2012 07:06 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I'm like the characters thus far. I wonder if the friendship will be able to handle sex or if  Sam will even give into her? I hope to read more soon!

 Reviewer: peach martini Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 15 2012 07:00 pm
Title: Chapter 1

This was so good. I hope there is more to their story .

 Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 15 2012 06:44 pm
Title: Chapter 1

That was great, more please....

 Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 15 2012 06:28 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I like, please update soon.

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Date: March 15 2012 06:27 pm


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