Reviews For Forget Me Not
Title: A Family Thing

Yeah!   I can't wait until those two meet back up!  

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23 2012 01:29 am

Title: A Family Thing

That was hilarious and I am so happy that bear knew that his brother had something to do with Mari's swift departure.  Love it!!!  Please let them reconnect!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 23 2012 12:59 am

Title: A Family Thing

The two brothers fighting was too much for words but I love how in the end Paul-David wanted what was right for Bear. The line of the chapter had to have been, "my brother is sprung off a piece of your sweet potato pie. " LMAO Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 22 2012 10:47 pm

Title: A Family Thing

Hm...this is all very interesting- in the case of character and background development and how it becomes entwined with Intellectual Titmouse's story. Both of you must have discussed the necessary psychology of pitting lovers from such different worlds. In these situations, race appears to be less of a hinderance than lifestyle and place of residence.

Curious to see how it works out.



Author's Response:

There's a very elaborate backstory about three brothers in the South that only makes sense in our little over taxed imaginations. Only time will tell.

Reviewer: islandlass Signed [Report This]
Date: March 22 2012 09:18 pm

Title: Music and Lyrics

This was awesome 

Reviewer: mags Signed [Report This]
Date: March 20 2012 01:34 pm

Title: Music and Lyrics

Too bad she can't snap it off.

Can't wait to see Bear's reaction to all the goings on. And yep, he's made a mighty fine impression on Miss Marisol. Still think she's carrying a little Bear. That boy was much too eager and prolly much too fertile. And I don't think they used a condom, not. one. damn. time.   So yeah, preggers.  :)

Great story, Chica.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 20 2012 12:04 pm

Title: Music and Lyrics

Good for Mari , kicking that Shaw out of her house . I loved Shaw's concern for Mari , the way he was so busy working on his next case. I do feel sad that she left Bear in the wind . Super update , I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 20 2012 05:28 am

Title: Music and Lyrics

Good update.  Poor Mari, she is in Bear withdrawl.  She needs to go and claim her man.  As for her ex what a nerve that he was sitting in her home eating, etc...At least she told him where he could take his juvenile self. Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 20 2012 01:59 am

Title: Music and Lyrics

Another great chapter. Mari misses Bear even if she aint really willing to admit it. Paul-David is an interesting creator to say the least he wants to protect his brother but I am not sure from what. And then we have Shaw who would have gotten a swiift kick to the nuts rather than his family jewels twisted. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 20 2012 01:52 am

Title: Music and Lyrics

Ouch!  Serves his ass right!  Kick him out Mari!

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 20 2012 01:49 am

Title: Music and Lyrics

Poor Mari & Bear...hate that they're apart, but you know what they say about absence and the heart:)

I can't believe the nerve of Mari's asshole ex...I guess he doesn't understand the gravity of what he did, abandoning Mari in the back of beyond where anything could've happened to her!  So glad she's done with him, as he's obviously in love with noone but himself!

Can't wait until Mari and bear meet up again!

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 20 2012 01:46 am

Title: Music and Lyrics

So Paul realized what a mistake he made, but will he tell Bear what really happened and what he said to Mari to make her leave?  I think not, Paul is nothing but a punk!!!  Shaw was just introduced and I already hate him, but hell I hated when I knew that he left her stranded in Klan Country.  Shaw is an ahole and should be beaten down like the low down dog that his truly is!!!  More please, yeah I know I'm greedy!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 20 2012 01:32 am

Title: Gone Baby Gone

I'm enjoying this story and am looking forward to the next chapter.

 

Reviewer: Dragonfly Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 18 2012 10:37 pm

Title: Gone Baby Gone

Thanks for a great update.  Mari, Mari, Mari, why did you leave Bear?  He is the best thing to happen to you.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 18 2012 04:16 pm

Title: Gone Baby Gone

Another great chapter, Paul is and bipolar ass. I mean really he calls her a slut and then gives her a ride. I am not made at Mari her need to protect herself seems to be greater then giving into her heart desires which is Bear. Looking forward to how bear reacts to Mari leaving. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 18 2012 03:50 pm

Title: Intro ~ The Hardest Part of Goodbye

Thanks for continuing the story.  I really love Bear.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 18 2012 03:09 pm

Title: Attractive Images - Your Cast

Great cast.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 18 2012 03:05 pm

Title: Gone Baby Gone

So far, I like Mari. And I actually like Paul David. Mari is in denial. The fact that Bear had persuaded her to stay says a lot. Homegirl was rearranging her life for him! She won't be able to stay away from him. Especially, if there's a little Bear in the oven.

I really want to see more of Paul David. And if he lets Bear know that he had a run-in with Mari, he might lose the family jewels. I don't think you want to miss a pissed off Bear.

Gurl, you best update soon and often. I'm really liking this one.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 18 2012 01:56 pm

Title: Gone Baby Gone

Wow!  There are some stereotypes that have to be eraticated from some people's minds.  Paul David helped Mari made her decision to leave.  I can't wait for Bear's reaction.  I hope he goes after her.  A bear in the big city....now that's a thought.  Lord, and her friends reactions when they see the big country boy...Lordy mercy!  I can't wait!

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 18 2012 01:35 pm

Title: Gone Baby Gone

YOu are right I really don't Mari or Paul they both make my teeth itch!!!  Mari makes me angry because she would rather be a ho then risk her heart and Paul is just an ass!!!  I do like that he apologized as well as stating that, "I love my brother."  I can't wait to see how these two meet up again!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 18 2012 06:55 am

Title: Gone Baby Gone

More soon... i'll hold you on that one

Reviewer: nikol Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 18 2012 06:14 am

Title: Gone Baby Gone

Excellent.

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 18 2012 05:43 am

Title: Gone Baby Gone

At the beginning I was so happy to see Paul David that I  screamed out Jax !!!. But by the end of this chapter I wanted to hurt him.I hate that Mari left but I do Trust your writing and story telling . This was a Super update . I can't wait to see what happens next . Poor Bear !

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 18 2012 05:03 am

Title: Gone Baby Gone

Wow you left one hell of a heart ache cliff hanger whoo i am loving it because hell whats a good tale without a few twist and turns!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 18 2012 04:55 am

Title: Intro ~ The Hardest Part of Goodbye

"...she had every intention of being halfway home."

The operative is is intention. Will Mari be able to leave him? I'm on pins and needles. His method of persuasion was, ahem, shall we say, very convincing. I don't see how she can leave all of that. I have to read this again. Bear is a real quick study.

And if she does leave him, will she be able to stay away? I think not.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 17 2012 07:29 am



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