No words …… :)

Ohhh hooo! Happy dance for this update!

Reading it now!!

Is this story done for? Cause I really love it and I keep checking back :'(

Hello Voices. I recently reread the most recent reviews. And aside from feeling similarly in massive withdrawals as the other reviewers hint at... :) I felt enlightened by the review from jdfd. I'm wondering.... Did Celia re-write the article and THEN submit it. It's not nice either way... but that IS a possibility. If Celia went on a lamenting roll about anything - it would be a "good article" for Shaun's boss. But hopefully not giving anyone the wrong picture about Adam. I'm grasping for answers and a hopefully happily ever after as I'm so in love with this story and the characters! They are a messed up crowd in their own specific ways, but that's what makes life. And that is what makes a GREAT story - which this is. I'm hoping you don't have any life stresses or writer's block preventing you from giving us some more AWESOMENESS! Happy Holidays! ~ Nim

I read all of this story last night and this morning. 

I like Adam. I'm not so sure about Shaun. Listening to her so called friend Celia is the worst thing she could do. Adam is a jerk for saying what he did in the article but he doesn't deserve this. Adam is a lot of things but he has not purposefully misrepresented himself as Shaun has. No, she's outright lying. 

Celia is not her friend. Shaun never seems to feel good after a conversation with her. She's toxic. She and Celia are two different people so why is she listening to her? Well, some of the advice was okay (I.e. the bit about saying no). Celia isn't even married or in a serious relationship. Celia proved she wasn't a friend when she sent that email. She may have even rewrote the article.

Adam may have been okay with her writing the article if she'd told him at the beginning of their "relationship." It was exactly what he needed -- positive press from a black woman.

Hello Voices!!!!!!!!!! Please update soon! Dying for more chapters!!

On my trillionth read of this: I guess Adam does have a history (at least what his father is hinting at) with "dark skinned" people: “She likes ‘em old, you like ‘em dark… we all have our vices, son.” Does that mean Adam maybe dating someone like this at an earlier-than-famous time period?

Celia still boggles my mind: How does she try to get Shaun to get Adam to fall for her, and then get all crazy about it later.... Weird.

Shaun should just show Adam the email, NOW and explain everything and demonstrate some remorseful behavior and attempt to make it right. Even if only to be a friend. Such actions don't deserve his trust - honestly. But I love these two, so I hope she DOES try.

What's the total story with Veronica? Why does she right to cry about Adam - didn't SHE commit the sin there? That's a pretty crappy scene that went down with Veronica and his father. No wonder, no wonder! Yikes. [as I've said before]

PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE update soon!

~ Nim

Tis been a month since the last update; may we have another, please?

Wow, I just found this fic and I love it!  I can't believe Celia sent the email.  Excited to see how this one turns out, can't wait for your next update.

Oh no! Damn that Celia!

Nooooooooooooo!! Don't leave us hanging like that! This is one of the best stories I'm reading on this site, please don't make us wait too long for the next installment! Love it!

CELIA IS A BITCH!

I have GOT to say something else: As I read this chapter for the 3rd time (yes, you know me, the FANATIC), I realized something; I wonder how toxic this father has been for Adam. Maybe with the father's clearly racist views (his comment in the club) is something that has truly rubbed off on Adam - that would explain something. But that also got me wondering: if Adam HAD down that road before (earlier conflicts in racial related things). Here's why I'm thinking: a) because the comment from the father implied it being more than one instance..... - not just referring to Shaun (it seems....) and b) because there MUST be some earlier connection these two (Shaun and Adam) must have had... I mean, COULD he have known her at a younger age - is he the dead ringer of Shaun's childhood days....?????

Ohhhhhh I'm just grasping for a HEA (Happily Ever After) since it all looks entirely DISMAL right now... Seriously. And can Shaun learn to LOOK at her friggin friend Celia? And see what Celia is TRULY doing?? And Jackson for that matter? Since when is a tabloid/expose/tell-all/"how to _____" writer taken for a truly credible journalist? Which planet? Which country? Which century? Let's be real....

Now, what's up with Yoshi and Veronica hanging out or even TALKING?! I guess because Yoshi does have a BRAIN he was wondering about that note.... But, seriously... I kinda like Adam's group. They seem nice, even the crazy Noodle! But I hope nothing more sinister is going on? Or... Is Yoshi connected to Celia?! I know it's a far stretch but.... why is Celia on a vendetta to ruin Shaun or her happiness or Adam? Either she has something up with Adam herself or someone close to him.... And Yoshi has been a wild character... I just wonder..................

If Adam leaves her, I would NOT be surprised! I can't even begin to think what Shaun could possibly do to make it up to Adam. It's nice and all that she LOVES him (yes... it's got to be true by now), but people don't have such secrets and still get along well. It's going to be a tough blow to their trust factor.....

Where's Janelle when you need her? Janelle is a wonder-worker and could perhaps help salvage something here before it goes to print....?!

And I've got to tell you, Adam has EVERY friggin right to be DISGUSTED with his father and never forgive him!! What. In. The. World. Is. That?! Sleeping with your son's girlfriend?!?

The dad has got some serious demons and issues of his own to deal with - including a wife (or ex-wife) that fathered his 2 children (Adam and Katie) who is a drug addict. Maybe if he cleaned up his own life, the wife would come back to him and want to clean up hers... Just saying....

Karma is a b----!

And so is Celia (btw). I don't know if SHE deserves a happily ever after - since this game was started by Celia. And Shaun rightly or wrongly agreed to it and here is where it stands.... YIKES!!!

Man, oh man, oh man, oh man!

Update as soon as humanly possible. :D :D :D

~ Nim

Dang it!!! The suspense is killing me!!!