O-MAZING!!!! Love this story. Look forward to every update. Thank you :)
Reviewer: kaci Signed [Report This]
Date: September 27 2013 05:48 pm
So Celia has sent the article. Now she has to tell Adam and hope for the best. It's not going to be pretty.
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: September 27 2013 03:52 pm
Shaun bought this on herself... Why would she leave the email open and leave Ceclia in the apartment? She has no one to blame but herself. She had more than enough time to tell Adam but she chose to drag it out, now deal with the fall out. I want to reach around and slap the shit out of both Shaun and Ceclia. How can two smart people be so stupid.
Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 27 2013 03:05 pm
Thanks for the new chapter, but this stalling thing is getting beyond annoying. The fact that Shaun is still listening to Celia is just beyond me. How can she be so STUPID? It is not cute, it is horribly annoying. At this point I don't even dislike Celia anymore. She may be a mean girl and play stupid "games", but at least she own her shit and she is coherent in her hating. And she had a point about why Shaun had the article finished ready to be sent. And she let her computer wide open ! I mean, C'MON girl!
I think I dislike Shaun more than Celia now. She should have call Adam the next morning after her stupid run into Veronica at the magazine office (yet another very stupid idea), to tell him the true. She should have immediatly sent an email to Jackson telling him she won't do anything. And why would she have a phone conversation with him in the bathroom of the clud where Adam is having his party? No really. I understand that this writing tactic was meant to make the "reveal" more dramatic, but to me, it only made me annoyed and angry against Shaun. She is too stupid for words and I just hope Adam dump her stupid ass and move on with his life.
Reviewer: RedHobo Signed [Report This]Date: September 27 2013 02:22 pm
THIS MOTHER UGH We Called it! We all called her sketchy ass! WTF I can't somebody find Cecila before I do and rip her apart...seriously SERIOUSLY
Then we have Nasty ol Veronia... she's just all sorts of filth. She can't be touched just ew
And then My boy Adam. Dear Adam, my friend get your ass a stiff drink, sit back, and get ready for the shit to hit the fan because boy it's happening mighty fast! Shaun hurry your ass up. This matter is URGENT! Stop fooling around and opening your eyes big like some damn ass deer caught in head lights!! It's go time ACTION tell him GO GO GO F man. People be moving too slow for my liking just dammit spit it out nobody has time to be surprised anymore just go
Love it Voices! Keep it coming!
Reviewer: thincakes Signed [Report This]Date: September 27 2013 11:27 am
You ROCK!!!!
I love it when I come up wonderful, talented, up and coming, storytellers....Its like Christmas all over again and every story you put out is experiencing it all over again. looking forward to reading the completion of the story and even more so reading MORE from you. Thank you for posting on here.
Reviewer: amlaamar Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 27 2013 09:35 am
That fucking BITCH. I hope Shaun reaches inside of Celia's throat with both hands and rips her entire being into two. FUCKING.BITCH.
That scene between Adam and Shaun was hella hot, by the way. Dayum.
Reviewer: Camille Signed [Report This]Date: September 27 2013 08:20 am
The plot, the characters, the writing, just wonderful. You really made us care about these characters. I wonder what will happen when Adam learns the truth.
Reviewer: Lucky Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 27 2013 06:34 am
Celia had no damn right to do that!
And Veronica needs to go somewhere with her skank ass!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: September 27 2013 06:26 am
Love this story. So sorry it took me so long to get to it, but I'm so happy I did. Great plot idea, and development, and I'm genuinely interested in what happens next chapter after chapter. Thank you!Symph
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 27 2013 06:14 am
OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm now completely insane (trust me, still a good thing) about this friggin story!!!! Ballistic, that's what's gonna happen next!
I can only hope a pray for a few things:
a) that Celia has an aneurysm and dies [can't blame me for wishing that]
b) that Celia sent it to herself
c) that Celia modified it and has it be a happy ending article
[I think I'm hopelessly dreaming that Celia has ANY redeeming qualities in A through C above]
d) that Shaun RAPIDLY tells Adam what happened before making him completely inebriated as he is going to storm out of that house fast enough to make her head spin and I PRAY he doesn't get into a car crash for drinking and driving or anything else self-destructive (being that his ex, his dad and all else is caving in....)
e) that the editor can be reasoned with and will change the story....
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I'm freaking out for Shaun and more so for Adam as he doesn't need this garbage on his plate. Seriously. Shaun is a stupid, stupid person to even "write" the rest of the article! It's absolutely ridiculous! While Celia has access! While Celia is being a nutjob!
Man!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
VOICES: Please, please, please do not leave us (your fans and avid readers) hanging for too long with this ABSOLUTELY, COMPLETELY and UTTERLY insane cliffy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
As always, you are amazing!
~ Nim
Reviewer: Nim Manu Signed [Report This]Date: September 27 2013 06:08 am
I bet you her roommate send it that bitch.She didnt' want to see her friend happy and now she gong to lose adam over this dam it. Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: September 27 2013 05:25 am
OOOHHHH Cecelia, I am livid with her, I cannot believe she'd do that. If I was Shaun I couldn't be friends with her, especially after Shaun told her she cares about him! I am disgusted
Reviewer: chocachocacandyland Signed [Report This]Date: September 27 2013 05:23 am
Damn, Celia sent that article in for her. Why does she hate Adam? If I didn't know better I would think that she had feelings for Adam and he shot her down. Adam's father is an asshole, how could he sleep with his sons girlfriend and feel no guilt? That ho Veronica had the audacity to cry like Adam hurt her feeling when he told the truth her and his sperm donor. Shaun Adam is going to hate you and there is not way around that. You did use to keep your job, that is wrong no matter how you slice it. I don't see HEA for this story! Your muse may surprise me.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: September 27 2013 05:11 am
I HATE CELIA! I don't trust her. She likes that she is the worldly one and is jealous of Shaun. Adam is so damn sprung. She has to tell him before he finds out through someone else at least that way she can finesse it some.
Reviewer: Acdromance Signed [Report This]Date: September 27 2013 04:39 am
O...m...g
How could you leave us hanging like this! Ugh! Lol. This story is too good! I hope you update soon!
Reviewer: Justkillingtime21691 Signed [Report This]Date: September 27 2013 04:25 am
So Celia sent the email?
Why does she want to sabotage Shaun's relationship so much. Let Shaun make her own mistakes and handle Adam the way she wants to. Celia has issues here.. is it jealousy or something?
Veronica is a dirty, dirty bird! Just ewwwww!
Poor Shaun, the email's been sent, now what?
Reviewer: ladake79 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 27 2013 04:20 am
At first I liked her, I even understood why she was writing the story. Then I became frustrated with her because she was listening to her stupid friend. Now I think she wanted the story to be sent why else would you leave it there with the person that you know wants it sent. I think I'm done with the story. Thanks it was a well written story but come on no one can be that can't think of a word to describe her.
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]Date: September 27 2013 04:19 am
please update soon, i can't wait!!!!!
Reviewer: coocoojjksx345 Signed [Report This]Date: September 27 2013 04:15 am
The Celia/Shaun act came off weird to me. I don't know if I'm reading it wrong but it doesn't flow in sync with the rest of the story.
I love the response Shaun had to the girl asking for her auto. Wish she would have given her a hug or something.
The Adam/Shaun scenes were sweet as usual. Frustrating but that's the charm the story holds for me. Nobody getting any relief till the truth is out and they can do it without having issues. I'm not a fan of peope having issue-filled sex.
As for Shaun telling about her story; well, she needs to pick a side. Tell Adam; not tell Adam; tell Adam and make a plan with him against the media he so loathes. Tell Adam, leave him, do the story and have him come back to her cause he loves her or he's really just an asshole and wants to sleep with her to justify the time he's spent with her to himself(anything can happen with rockstars/ers).
Good story, still.
Reviewer: smokeymcbndit Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 19 2013 09:27 pm
*gets the extra-comfy flame-repellant chair, as hell's about to pop*
Reviewer: Leo the Yardie Chick Signed [Report This]Date: September 14 2013 11:54 pm
She needs to freaking tell adam!!!
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: September 14 2013 06:22 am
LOVe, LOVE this story! Please update soon :)
Reviewer: kaci Signed [Report This]Date: September 12 2013 07:53 pm
Introspections review summed it up for me.
The roles are reversed now. So this should be interesting from now on.
Nice!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: September 12 2013 04:28 am
Uh oh!!!
Reviewer: JB_Shawty143 Signed [Report This]Date: September 12 2013 03:55 am