Damn that is what happens when you fall in LOVE. You can lose yourself and hurt others in the process.

Thanks for the great update! Thanks for brillantly turning Adam into someone worthy of Shaun, for giving him the depth of character that makes him a very likeable character. I find it interesting how Shaun started out likeable, smart even with her plan to write that article. Now she is making so many of us frustrated and annoyed. I for one have been shouting at her and am frustrated by her continued need to seek out and follow her friend's bad advice. Thank you for finally (if not slowly) opening her eyes to the fact that their manipulations are turning her into a 'brillant monster.' Now her almost midnight act as a cyber thief! Wow! This whole thing surely is going to blow up in her face. But then again Voice you have written quite a tale so far and it would be a pleasure to see how our girl gets herself out this mess, saves the day and gets her man.

freddi

Holy smokes! Thank you for the beautiful update! Man oh man! This is about to get NUTS!!!!! I agree in part with redhobo's review; Shaun needs to come clean and right now all hell is going to break loose! What's great about this story is you cringe and squirm along with the characters. And that is truly a sign of great writing and a great story!!!!!!!!!!!! Honestly, we all wish we could look at our own lives (as we live it) in such an analytical way as you can when you READ about someone's life. If we could do that, we would avoid real-life mistakes. Right?! Well, that said...Shaun and Adam have some serious chemistry. And they will LEARN from all this. But it will not be right until they both get honest with each other fully. Adam with his previous girlfriend; Veronica (who has "something" on Shaun, sadly) and what in the HECK is she doing at COSMO anyhow?!? And he has to get straight on his judgmental attitude that was entirely expressed in his "drunken" statements in the article he did in the first place. Shaun MUST grow a spine realize she messed up and let him know - NOW. And Adam MUST by some public actions (my recommendation), rectify the statements he's made so that is settled. VOICES: This story is REALLY, REALLY great and I think you get so many reviews because we are all so INTO it! Please update again soon!!!!

Ooooh, finally the plot thickens. And I'm so happy that you addressed what Adam said in the beginning about black women. Hopefully this won't end too bad.

Shit.

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she needs to come clean, acting dumb now.

Shaun is right it's got to end but Adam will feel betrayed  and will be angry. This is going be ugly.

an update!!!! an update!!! I know you know; you write it but I have to express how joyous I am that there is an update!!!! And it was great. Goodness and blessings to the godess of storytelling for inspiring this within you and blessings upon you for keeping with it. I'm addicted so hard to this, it's a little bit scary. Please, please, pretty please update sooner? Pretty please?!!! Thank you for Shaun and Adam.

Wtf Shaun - tell him the truth! He so falling for her and he'll be so crushed when he learns the truth...and I still don't like Celia!

just a couple request um can adam have a really big dick more like eleven inches not trying to be a pervert lol and i think she shouldnt print the story and i also think this should have this story and a sequelll plus i think that this should be long thanks some ideas is an ex come back for her 

On my 6th time through this story I have noticed/wondered the following (I'm not obsessed am I?? LOLZ):

What happened to Shaun signing the confidentiality agreement? Did she refuse? How did Celia handle it so it wasn't signed. Janelle mentions that Adam never had Shaun to sign one...Did Shaun know Adam before they even met?? Shaun said Adam actually reminded her of a young boy who broke her heart when she was younger...Why does Adam hate his father? What was the story about that? What happened REALLY between Veronica and Adam? Why was Veronica trying to see him after the FIRST concert that Shaun was at? What did Veronica argue about after that show and at the bar and why did Veronica leave when Adam went to talk to Shaun, Yoshi and Noodle? Did Adam and Veronika hook up? (On the rooftop in this last chapter, Adam hesitates and hedges Shaun's question of whether or not Adam has slept with someone else since being "with" Shaun.) Why was Veronika in Sydney? And why was she crying? How come Adam got pissed off and didn't want to talk about Veronika when Shaun and Adam were in Shaun's house. [BTW Have to just say, Shaun is really unreal to think that writing a scandalous tell-all about a rock star is going to make her a legit journalist... - just sayin'] Adam can Google her, BTW... and then? Yoshi suspects Shaun... Hope he doesn't out her before she has a chance to be honest! And...maybe Celia ISN'T such an evil witch... Maybe she is applying some reverse-psychology on Shaun to get her to see she HAS fallen in love with someone... so is just YANKING Shaun's chain... [harsh way to do it but... maybe.....] Don't you think Adam has started to catch on that she must be more than just an innocent untouched and untainted model.... again... he could Google and find out and then.... And hold up... key question: why DID Adam say what he said in that article. He said he was "mostly drunk" and Janelle even pointed out that he WAS aware of what he was doing. Honestly... he has to iron out his own demons in this case too. And be straight up about them! I can see he IS falling for Shaun (and vice versa) but still.... I agree with the earlier reviewer that brought this up.... And....back to Veronica... did Adam sleep with her or someone else that refused to do the initial music video that Shaun stood in for? What did Adam call Janelle so worried about in Australia that she flew in... WHAT was his concern....? Annnnnnd.... what if her parents contact Adam and rip him a new one..... This will out Shaun even faster...

Oooh....what a delicious dilemma.

That score was supposed to be a ten! Not a four!