oh no are the twins and their father involved with Ana's fathers death? it did say he was killed in a hit gone wrong...? i hope im wrong
Reviewer: Sunny Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 14 2012 11:54 pm
Very interesting story. More please!
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: April 12 2012 10:02 pm
If she is to be apart of this life, she has to be able to defend herself.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: April 11 2012 02:50 pm
aww this chapter was a tease - where's the rest? lol! thanks for the appetiser ;)
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: April 11 2012 08:54 am
Hi ! I really like your story! But, can you please put the russian translations into () ? Indeed, it completely breaks the motion when you're deep into your reading and have to refer to the end of the chapter if you can't guess the meaning while reading. Thanx
Reviewer: Peanut Signed [Report This]Date: April 11 2012 04:58 am
Good, golly miss Molly that was good!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 11 2012 04:23 am
i'm liking this story alot!! there are some mad strong characters in it. Ana has now met John and there were instant sparks which will be very hard to ignore but then there's Misha - looord, i'm glad i'm not Ana, lol!
thanks for the update! keep it coming!
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: April 07 2012 11:29 am
John sounds really sexy. Ana and John have some serious chemistry already. The twins are all business. Nice chapter.
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: April 06 2012 11:07 pm
thanks for the update. I thought the cop was going to hide his identity from her, but it looks like he doesn't know who she is.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: April 06 2012 03:09 pm
i know that it is only the 2nd chapter but i'm really liking this story
Reviewer: keikei2 Signed [Report This]Date: April 06 2012 12:22 pm
love the story. now all we need is a little mocha chai and some nazi zombies ;)
Reviewer: Kitty killer Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 06 2012 09:03 am
Good 1st chapter. I very interested in what happens next.
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: April 05 2012 09:23 pm
Me likey!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 05 2012 05:29 am
Great start. I hope there will be more . :D
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 04 2012 06:25 pm
I like it. A little surprised she is with one of the brothers though. I thought their relationship would have been more of a big brother/little sister one, since they watched over her as a child. I take it Nikolai doesn't know or if he does he hasn't said anything yet.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: April 04 2012 05:03 pm
i can not wait for chapter two, this is a great story
Reviewer: layla Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 04 2012 04:53 pm