Title: Don't Mess With Mellie

Mellie Mel is the real OG.

Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28 2012 05:20 am

Title: Don't Mess With Mellie

Damn I may need to watch this show. 

Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2012 05:57 am

Title: Don't Mess With Mellie

Mellie is very ambitious. I was stunned by her confrontation with Fitz and Olivia. I guess she really doesn't care what they do as long as they don't disrupt her life. I can see Mellie saying something like this. Thanks                       

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 16 2012 12:09 pm

Title: Don't Mess With Mellie

Oh wow this is so good. I'm growing fond of your stories based off of scandal! Love it! 

Reviewer: Megan Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 16 2012 12:17 am

Title: Don't Mess With Mellie

Scandal!!! Love this show!!

Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 15 2012 08:25 pm

Title: Don't Mess With Mellie

Damn it , Ms.Brenda you hit the nail on the head with this story . I love Mellie she knows how to play the perfect game of Washington wife. This story was Brilliant . I'm so stalking /obsessed with Scandal . I mean to the point of watching all of the episodes on Youtube and ABC.com. Thanks so much for writing this story . I hope to see more soon ! : )

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 15 2012 06:53 pm

Title: Don't Mess With Mellie

Mellie is one cool customer; when she came up with the fake miscarriage, I knew there was not much this woman wouldn't to to achieve/retain her position as First Lady...

Love the way you captured the essence of her and her stone-cold relationship with Mr President.

This show is totally my new guilty pleasure and I am addicted...lol...

Thanks for this one-shot to help tide me over until Thursday!

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 15 2012 03:45 pm

Title: Don't Mess With Mellie

Like I said before, Mellie is one scary woman.  i like this take, but Mellie is wrong about Fitz in bed, he seems to do very well with Olivia guess he needed the swirl to make it less 'vanilla'--

thanks for the fix!

Reviewer: mya Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 15 2012 02:48 pm

Title: Don't Mess With Mellie

Mellie's got some nerve. She got Mr. Literacy and she's complaining about Fitz extra activities. She's one cold witch. She reminds me of mommy dearest. Her children are to be seen and not heard. And Fitz is just another object to use at will.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 15 2012 01:23 pm

Title: Don't Mess With Mellie

Mellie's got some nerve. She got Mr. Literacy and she's complaining about Fitz extra activities. She's one cold witch. She reminds me of mommy dearest. Her children are to be seen and not heard. And Fitz is just another object to use at will.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 15 2012 01:20 pm

Title: Don't Mess With Mellie

damn brenda!!!! that was on point sister!!!!!!! i could sooooo see this happening for real!!! cant wait to find out!!! i have to confess i hope she tries to help fix things like she did when she invented her miscarriage even though that was a horrible dispicable thing to pretend it worked. can you please do another fitz and liv one shot? PPPLLLEEEAAASSSEEE?????????



Author's Response:

LOL!!!  I would like to do another Fitz and Olivia, I'm just not sure which direction to go after that hot episode on Thursday.  We'll see!

Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 15 2012 12:34 pm



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