Title: Chapter 10

Glad to see that Richard and Shonti are starting to get along.

Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 20 2012 03:27 am

Title: Chapter 10

Shonti is still working my last nerve.  But I am curious as to why Joseph didn't try to get in touch with Shonti especially after her father went to jail?  I love Richard, I'll take him Shonti if you don't want him.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 20 2012 12:41 am

Title: Chapter 10

Nice chapter. They are actually getting along.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 19 2012 11:20 pm

Title: Chapter 10

nICE UPDATE.

Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 19 2012 06:12 pm

Title: Chapter 9

I feel some bonding here!  Great update!

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 14 2012 07:49 pm

Title: Chapter 9

I know that Shonti didn't know her grandfather but she seems to be very bitter towards him.  The story that Richard told about his dad beating up his friend Trevor and his father was very sad.  Hopefully in time Shonti will stop being so bitter.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 14 2012 03:56 pm

Title: Chapter 9

wow grandfather was sure a good man to all and can understand where she coming from. It kind hard to hear stories how this man was such good man and all these things when you never know the man but i think in the end she will be closer to her grandfather. thank for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 14 2012 08:43 am

Title: Chapter 9

She needs to learn about her grandpa from that sexy man. Why is she so against learning anything about him.

Reviewer: Bella Rosa Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 14 2012 06:01 am

Title: Chapter 9

Thanks for the update.... Shonti is still working my nerves, she had a HUGE CHIP on her shoulders, hopefully Richard can tear her walls down.

Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 14 2012 04:45 am

Title: Chapter 9

Shonti even when you're showing some human emotion you still have bitch tendencies.  Did Joseph leave any letters for her?  What about the journals, has she read any of those?  Shonti you are not really trying, you are making my teeth itch!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 14 2012 04:01 am

Title: Chapter 8

Good chapter...but I have to agree with others, she is really becoming annoying. She really needs a personality check. If she is that miserable, she needs to just leave. Let's face it, does she really plan to stay there???

Reviewer: VAL1 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 10 2012 12:57 am

Title: Chapter 8

Lol, they are both embarassed. Why? They're both grown and wanted it. I'm sad that Shonti didn't get to meet Joseph.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 09 2012 10:57 pm

Title: Chapter 8

I'm wondering why Shonti doesn't have a real conversation with Richard about her grandfather. She seems annoyed when people talk about him, yet she never really tries to get answers about him. I just wish she'd stooped being a twit all the time!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 08 2012 10:21 pm

Title: Chapter 8

Thanks for a great update.  Shonti is learning a lot about her grandfather.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 08 2012 08:06 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Alrighty then....thanks for a great update.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 08 2012 07:46 pm

Title: Chapter 8

Shonti needs to realize how much she likes Richard!

Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 08 2012 07:24 pm

Title: Chapter 8

yep, it'll happen again. :)

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 08 2012 06:10 pm

Title: Chapter 8

I knew that Shonti was going to bury her head in the sand.  I am really not liking Shonti right, Richard has been nothing but kind to her.  Your grandfather cared about Richard and Richard cared about your grandfather.  I wonder is that her problem, that her grandfather cared for someone that wasn't her?  I am hoping to see some growth in Shonti's character to make her more likable.  Great update.  More please!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 08 2012 06:04 pm

Title: Cast Pics

LOl Shonti is feeling all some kind of way, but has to admit that the sex was great.  She know that she'll want him again.  LOL

 

I think that the two of them will need to get to know each other better now and the next time will be real love making and not quick fucking.  I think that the two of them already have feelings for each other but they are all mixed up right now and the quick sex just cnfused them more.  LOL

Loved the update.  What will Richard think when he sees her in that dress?

 

 

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 08 2012 01:45 pm

Title: Chapter 8

wow so she catches him looking at picture like he a horny teen lol. It crazy but sweet I think her realy like her because he doesn't seem the type to sleep with a women with out having feelings for her. Like the story thank for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 08 2012 10:01 am

Title: Chapter 7

I really like this story and I can't wait for your next update!

Reviewer: SoccergirlBianca Signed [Report This]
Date: July 08 2012 03:18 am

Title: Chapter 7

Great now that they got the "fucking" out of the way, hopefully Sonti's attitude will somewhat change for the better. Wishful thinking, right... Maybe Richard will have to tap that ass some more before she "leaves"....

Reviewer: VAL1 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 04 2012 07:13 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Well, hot damn.

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: July 04 2012 06:56 am

Title: Chapter 7

Hot chapter. I knew they be good together. Let's have more of that sexiness!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2012 09:34 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Wow!  I loved this.  How are they going to feel when they get back?  Hmmm I bet they'll want to do it again against their better judgment.  LOL...Also, no protection.  Hmmmm

Boy I'd love to see where you take this ditty.

More Please!

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 03 2012 07:29 pm



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