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Title: Chapter 1

Talk about crap friends....

 Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 08 2015 08:16 pm
Title: Chapter 21-Part2

Really good story off to sleep now so I can get up and go to work in 4 hours.

 Reviewer: d3stin2l0v3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 27 2014 08:15 am
Title: Chapter 21-Part2

Great story, it took me on a nice trip I am glad I read it. Thank you for putting pen to paper...in this case fingers to keyboard and giving me the opportunity to read your story. By the way I will read your next story also!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 08 2013 03:02 pm
Title: Chapter 21-Part2

love it!!

 Reviewer: IRJunkie Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08 2013 06:10 am
Title: Chapter 1

Ugh I freaking love this story!!! I'm pretty sure I check the site four times a day looking for updates lol you are awesome!!

 Reviewer: Kiki88 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 28 2013 06:32 am
Title: Chapter 21-Part2

Great Story!!!! I read the whole story in about 30 hours because I only stopped reading to cook, use the bathroom and sleep!!!  Can't wait to read the next story hopefully you can't keep us updated on Jack and Allie too!!!



Author's Response:

THANKS!! wow! you're great. amazing!

i'm glad that i could hold your attention for that long lol

and i'm thinking of doing a little short story on the two of them :)

 Reviewer: BossLady Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 25 2013 04:41 am
Title: Chapter 21-Part2

u rock love it

 Reviewer: faye Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 25 2013 01:33 am
Title: Chapter 21-Part2

well done.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 24 2013 02:44 am
Title: Chapter 21-Part2

Thank you for a lovely ending. I truly enjoyed the chemistry between this couple as well as the trials that they went through to get o their happy ending.



Author's Response:

thank you so much! i love getting reviews from other authors :D not that i don't equally enjoy all of my other reviews lol

it was a rough ride, but now it's over :( so sad

 Reviewer: Acdromance Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2013 02:35 am
Title: Chapter 21-Part2

Luv'd it!  Gj:)

 Reviewer: Avapriceless1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2013 09:08 pm
Title: Chapter 21-Part2

Great story. Sorry to see it end but all good things must come to it.

 Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2013 04:41 pm
Title: Chapter 21-Part2

Lovely ending. I love stories that have happy endings.  Not sure how I feel about Jack's redemption but I do believe that he realizes his mistakes.  Shame that it too over 20 years to come to terms with it and actually attempt to do something about it. 

I'm curious. Can you tell me who the model is that you used for Jason's picture? He's gorgeous.



Author's Response:

Jack is  a character that I've been struggling with since I created him. My mind takes control and I just write down whatever I'm thinking. Not everyone deserves a 2nd chance, but like i said...it's weird what love does to a person.

And the model's name is bernardo velasco. found him on tumblr lol he's sooo fine!

 Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2013 03:08 pm
Title: Chapter 21-Part2

It would be great if you can do Jack and Alessandra! Past and present!!! But I loved your story!



Author's Response:

Hm...never thought about doing a seperate story for them but now I'm honestly considering it haha

It would be short...but hm. yeah. i'll think about it!

Thank you so much for reading! :D

 Reviewer: Daddyprincess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2013 01:44 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Wow nice! Thank you for a great read, I loved the twists and turns. I got frustrated sometimes with the couple's decisions but they finally got here. I'm looking forward to your other stories.



Author's Response:

thank you thank you thank you! I got frustrated as well and I was the one writing the story lol

i'm looking forward to getting my other ones out there :)

 Reviewer: Lindy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2013 09:59 am
Title: Chapter 21-Part2

fantastic ending, however I would of loved to know what Keyshia kin folks thought about the relationship



Author's Response:

you know what? after i published this chapter, i kicked myself because i totally forgot to add what happened to them and auntie kat and some of the other family members.

i'm about to sound sarcastic and i swear i'm not trying to be..

BUT it's totally okay if you make up your own ending for them. As long as it's not happy haha jk

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2013 08:21 am
Title: Chapter 21-Part2

BEAUTIFUL!



Author's Response:

aw, thanks! :)

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2013 07:50 am
Title: Chapter 21-Part2

Yayyyyy!!!! I loved it! Beautiful job tying up the loose ends.

Excellent!



Author's Response:

thanks! means a lot of because i honestly tried so hard haha turns out i forgot to talk about a few people

you're lovely for sticking through til the end :)

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2013 06:34 am
Title: Chapter 21-Part2

I can't wait to read the squeal love the story. Life threw them bumps in the road but they kept  each other back. I'm so glad they are married and happy. Thank for the update.



Author's Response:

yayayay! i have somebody committed to read lol this is great

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2013 05:20 am
Title: Chapter 21-Part2

That was awesome!!  I am so glad that Jack woke up!!



Author's Response:

thanks pmgayles for sticking through!!

i'm glad he woke up as well. let's hope alessandra doesn't forgive him TOO quickly!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2013 04:44 am
Title: Chapter 21-Part2

such an epic ending to an epic story, thanks for the ride.



Author's Response:

epic???

has it reached that status? lol thanks for staying throughout this thing. it got rough and you continued to read. awesome! :)

 Reviewer: reader101 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2013 04:31 am
Title: Chapter 21-Part2

Great udpate!!! I loved this story. I would love a story between Jack and Alessandra, please..



Author's Response:

thanks!! we'll see about that. i'm already thinking about how i'm gonna write it lol :)

 Reviewer: Tina Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2013 03:43 am
Title: Chapter 21-Part 1

Keep up the good work & update soon..please.

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Date: April 17 2013 02:44 am
Title: Chapter 21-Part 1

Fantastic this story is awesome

 Reviewer: sweetrst1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2013 03:23 pm
Title: Chapter 21-Part 1

i cant wait on the end ive been following your story for some time now...its soooo good

 Reviewer: tiffany york Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 14 2013 11:12 pm
Title: Chapter 21-Part 1

My only comment is, I wish this story wasn't about to end so soon! This is a great story from the first sentence to the last! Whatever you write from this point on I will read.

I will be a fan for life! 



Author's Response:

awwww!! you're a sweetheart! thank you so much

i feel so honored :)) this gives me so much motivation!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 13 2013 01:15 pm


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