Reviews For The Better Life
Title: Chapter 18

Alicia getting knocked out was way overdue and I'm glad it finally happened. I was missing this story so thanks for the update. I guess the grandmother wants to get her feelings hurt now. 

Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 07 2012 11:49 am

Title: Chapter 18

Heck yeah i enjoyed it!!! I can't wait for the next chapter! Aww i want them to get married!

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 07 2012 08:00 am

Title: Chapter 18

Time for a family reunion? Hardly!Keep stepping grandma!

Alicia is vile and I'm glad she got knocked the hell out...lol!

Nice!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 07 2012 07:45 am

Title: Chapter 18

I am sensing that Bernice is evil and I hope that Jason can stop her from hurting Keyshia.  I am so glad that she knocked the hell out of Alicia, that was wonderful.  I will have to read that again!!!

Fabulous!!!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 07 2012 07:03 am

Title: Chapter 17

That Alicia is one jealous bitch! If it wasn't for her taking her to that club that night she never would have met Jason, and all this would not be happening to her. So if Keyshia is a slut, it is because Alicia is a great teacher. I am giving you 10 stars, for the fact Jason already has a ring. 17 carats no less!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 24 2012 07:45 am

Title: Chapter 17

love it more sooooon

Reviewer: faye Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 18 2012 02:38 am

Title: Chapter 17

Now i know that Jason truly wants to do what ever it takes to keep Keyshia. And i know that nothing will stop him from wanting more than a superfical lifestyle.

Reviewer: reader101 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 17 2012 12:23 am

Title: Chapter 17

I'm so happy Keyshia and James confessed their love to each other,FINALLY! Fake friend Alicia showed her true colors,but then again she had already shown what she was all about in the beginning anyway and that wacked fake ass brother of hers are about to mess up everything.I didn't like him anyway when he left her stranded before and plus Jason was the only one for Keyshia in the first place!!!Can't wait to see what happens next...Dueces!

Reviewer: cocoablue Signed [Report This]
Date: November 13 2012 06:40 pm

Title: Chapter 17

Well apparently grimeyness runs in the family. I knew Keisha needed to beat Alicia's azz in the beginning of the story for disrespect. If a person has no respect for themselves, how can they respect others? I can't wait until everything Eric and Alicia try to do backfires on them and they're left picking their faces up off the ground. I wonder if Lauran has been reading the comments on this story because she didn't hold her tongue and I have a newfound respect for her. It needed to be said Keisha still seems to be wishy-washy because she didn't tell Eric the truth when he burst thru her door. And why didn't she ask before she opened in the first place? Especially when she's so scary about being in the public eye. It could have been anyone and unfortunately it was the wrong one. I can't wait for the update.

Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 12 2012 08:47 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Ugh! Keisha, WHY DIDN'T YOU BREAK UP WITH ERIC? Honestly, the first time he left her in the cold rain, she should have been gone-or the first time he hit her?  I had no idea that he actually hit or choke her (though I think there was an allusion to it in another chapter)...and she didn't want to break with him unless she was sure about Jason?  IS SHE NUTS? Thank goodness she came to her senses...Jason WORE HER OUT, lol.  Too bad about the fallout. I wonder if Jason's men will stop Eric and Alicia or will he sell the photo before they get a chance?  However, this plays out....it's not going to be pretty.  Jason's father hates Keisha, the media will have a field day...maybe there will be a big fallout and a potential loss of fortune? But Jason has his own money right?  Or...?  I just hope these two are strong enough....I think Jason is strong enough but Keisha...*shakes head.*

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 12 2012 03:50 pm

Title: Chapter 17

awwwwww i love them! and OMG alicia is such a bitch!! seriously though erics ass needed to get beat for hitting keyshia

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 12 2012 10:44 am

Title: Chapter 17

Great chapter. I about time those two came together...

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 12 2012 10:21 am

Title: Chapter 17

me gusta mucho. update soon

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 12 2012 07:06 am

Title: Chapter 17

Too excited about the quick update. I hope something happens to Alicia and Eric, and that the picture doesn't get out. Glad to see it looks like Jason And Keyshia may actually get to be together. I hope you update as quickly as the last time. Love this story.

Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 12 2012 06:25 am

Title: Chapter 17

I'm glad that's cleared up. Now these two can get on with it.

I really can't stand Alicia, or her loser brother. 

 

 

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 12 2012 05:13 am

Title: Chapter 17

Loved the update. She wouldn't be in this position, if she had sense enough to get with Jason in the beginning.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 12 2012 04:52 am

Title: Chapter 17

Keyisha and Jason have great chemistry even though they come from different background.  I truly have enjoyed reading your story.  Hopefully, Alicia will be put down a peg or two

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 12 2012 03:40 am

Title: Chapter 17

So Haapy!

Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: November 12 2012 03:08 am

Title: Chapter 17

Keysha is really stupid, she started dating that fool Eric know that she had feelings Jason.  Then she stayed with him even though his behavior towards her was getting abusive.  She continues to piss me off, Jason is a good man a far better man than Eric will ever be.  I can't believe the stupid shit that continues to come out of mouth.  She annoys me!!  Muy excellente!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 12 2012 02:07 am

Title: Chapter 17

nice!!!!

Reviewer: Lindy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 12 2012 02:02 am

Title: Chapter 17

Loved the update!! Eric and his sister are no good and i hope their plans backfire!!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 12 2012 01:53 am

Title: Chapter 17

Finally! Keisha was driving me crazy with her indecisiveness. I'm happy they are going to make a go of it. Let the fireworks begin with his dad.

Reviewer: Acdromance Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 12 2012 01:32 am

Title: Chapter 16

Please, please, please update soon. Just read this entire story today & I can't get enough. I love both of these characters. I got a little worried when you brought Eric into the picture. I need these two to be together. I need my own Jason Jameson. Love your writing. Please keep the story going.

Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 09 2012 11:45 pm

Title: Chapter 1

i'm ready 4 them 2 get back together.....Eric is a trip, and i don't know why she's with him!

Reviewer: Skip2641 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 02 2012 11:45 pm

Title: Chapter 16

Please let him say,"I love you," back... I don't miss her friends, but I know more drama is around the corner.

Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 02 2012 03:18 am



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