Yay for the update! Absolutely loved this chapter! It was amazing, i'm so glad they're getting closer!!
Reviewer: chatty504 Signed [Report This]Date: November 01 2012 09:25 pm
About time! Jeez... these two were driving me insane with this constant back and forth! I'm happy it's out there now, Jason needs to confess his feelings for her too and Alyssa and Eric need to be out of the picture. Especially Eric, I never liked him and really hated the fact that she started something with him in the first place, plus he kinda seems like someone who wouldn't have a problem putting his grimy hands on a woman. Anyway, great job as always and looking forward to the next update :)
Reviewer: Terri Day Signed [Report This]Date: November 01 2012 06:50 pm
I think it's time he reveals himself back and her friends can come in as they try to figure out their relationship ..... Great chapter I just wished they would fight...I.e. Jason and Eric
Reviewer: Tiffany York Anonymous
[Report This]Date: November 01 2012 05:31 pm
Great update and glad that someone shared their feelings! Now can they be together and what is up with Eric. Please bring that out!
Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]Date: November 01 2012 02:02 pm
now they are getting somewhere...loved it. Thank you...
Reviewer: Lindy Signed [Report This]Date: November 01 2012 01:42 pm
let jason and keyshia work on there relatioship. and let keyshia get rid of eric . maybe she can find out that he is sleeping with one of the friends. hope that jason would be glad someone loves him for him.
Reviewer: lady tee Signed [Report This]Date: November 01 2012 12:48 pm
oo snap what jason gonna do NOW!! lol
Reviewer: esther Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 01 2012 10:27 am
bring her friends back. they need to bash eric. of course hes going to be like i love you too! hopefully they can move past this media thing and just be together! maybe theyll be together for a bit then the parents will interfere?
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: November 01 2012 08:28 am
Much better...some progression finally
Reviewer: cocoablue Signed [Report This]Date: November 01 2012 08:05 am
I think he should be gracious and say, Thank You and then he should say Keisha, I Love You Too! For once he doesn't need to be arrogant about being right. That will make her run away or clam up!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: November 01 2012 06:55 am
Bring the friends back I miss them too. I didn't care which one said it first as long as one of them did. Eric seems to be a little bit violent.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 01 2012 06:17 am
He should tell it back to her! I'm tired of these two acting like dummies dancing around each other already! She's going to have that wife-beater waiting to happen named Eric to deal with and Jason is going to have to deal with that psycho Alyssa! Geez, they know how to pick them!
Good!!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: November 01 2012 06:06 am
great update...please update soon
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: November 01 2012 05:10 am
Jason needs to tell her he loves her as well then tear that ##### up! omg this story got my mind all in the gutter I just love it so much and they have been playing cat and mouse for too damn long its time man! For the love to flow again I need to see some happiness not temporary but permanently! Please and thank you :)
Reviewer: UnderRestrains Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 01 2012 05:09 am
Jason should tell her that he loves her too since she bared her heart and soul to him. May I just add that Eric makes my teeth itch and that Jason should stomp him into the ground. I really want Keyshis to break up with that fool, he doesn't deserve her. Beat Eric down Jason, beat 'em like he stole your dollar.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 01 2012 04:30 am
who is that guy in the banner that's supoose 2 depict jason?
Reviewer: anna Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 01 2012 03:57 am
I read the authors response and it makes sense. She does not want the drama with someone famous but i so want them to confess love and work through it and be together!
Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]Date: October 29 2012 01:53 am
ugh my heart is hurting. why is she acting so damn difficult! I love it! please let them find his mom (although it would be really dramatic if his mother was actually dead)
Reviewer: babs Signed [Report This]Date: October 18 2012 06:09 am
This is still a great story. Dont be discouraged by some of the negatice reviews. I do agree with some of the sentiments. Its time for Kiesha to either grows some lady balls and be honest with herself and Jason. If his status in life is more intimidating than her love for him then she needs to cut all ties and move on with someone "safe" enough for her.In the meantime Jason needs to let his testicles drop and man up. Which is more important? Kiesha or his inheiritance and status. Either way both of them need to stop pussyfooting around. Something needs to happen and someone need to decide if love is worth it because this going around each other is getting annoying and played out.
Reviewer: Eclectic Charms Signed [Report This]Date: October 17 2012 01:34 am
Oh oh, she has some explaining to do!! Don't trust Eric either!! Where was he when she was trying to call him? Great update!!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: October 16 2012 08:17 pm
Jason should come in and kick Eric's arse. And Keisha should just be with Jason.
Reviewer: Apple Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 16 2012 08:06 pm
Uh oh!!!!!!! Update soon I can't wait to see what happens :)
Reviewer: xiaomei21 Signed [Report This]Date: October 16 2012 06:13 pm
So NOW Eric is worried about her after he left in the freezing rain....UGH. Aw @ Jason and Keisha...I see what you did there. I hope Keisha drops the loser soon...she is afraid of her feelings for Jason but she is not happy when she's not with him. And yeah Jason needs to go ahead and break up with his girlfriend but something tells me that she is going to drop him....she didn't seem too happy to show up naked at his condo only for him to turn her down because he was a having a "meeting" with his assistant. She figured it out....I'm sure. I am kind of on the fence about Jason leaving everything and starting over with Keisha. True love should prevail right? But leaving the family fortune. If he opens a new hotel (not associated with his father's hotels) in Brazil and reunites with his mother then that would be fantastic. It is not going to be easy.
Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed
[Report This]Date: October 16 2012 05:36 pm
I also have to agree that I was very disappointed with James and Keyshias' hour of "diddley squat" lol...nothing accomplished! James is so sweet and Keyshia really sort of irks me for some reason,she doesn't know what to do with a man like James and I guess their two very different worlds and backgrounds do make a big difference.Their happy ever after doesn't seem possible at this point and why do they even deal with their "significant" others when they can't either stand them or get treated like crap by them"Keyshia"!!!
Reviewer: cocoablue Signed [Report This]Date: October 16 2012 04:49 pm
She is dumb as fuck. I don't know if I can continue reason this story when it's like me 99% of the time asking myself how she could be so stupid. I wait for updates because at first something was really going on and it was good. Now it seems like you're just dragging this story out. Maybe it's been a while since the story talked about why she can't do relationships, but I believe it was resolved when he made her feel beautiful? Alright, she's beautiful. Now what? Why is she running away from Jason now? Its getting to the point when I don't even want her to be happy. If the main conflict revolved around the family's problems... Then maybe, but the whole problem with her running away from her true feelings without any true reasons behind it, doesn't make me feel good about your story. Sorry.
Author's Response:
wow, um....sorry that you didn't like it. keyshia cannot be with jason because of other things beside hiding her feelings. she doesn't want to risk falling and love and being in a relationship with someone who she knows isn't going to be endgame. like i've talked about before, she doesn't want to be famous. she wants absolutely nothing to do with that life. she doesn't want to be hated by others even if she's in a relationship with the man she loves. it's not because he makes her 'feel pretty'. i don't think she's ever had a problem with that.
she's a good person. a good realistic person. since a lot of my reviews are getting a little bad i think i'll change something up so thanks for your honesty :)
Reviewer: Maxanon Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 16 2012 12:05 pm