Reviews For The Better Life
Title: Chapter 15

she's sickening now, Jason needs to fall in love with Al and move on 

Reviewer: dounome Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 16 2012 09:35 am

Title: Chapter 15

I want to hit Eric with a frying pan sooo bad!!! I cant believe him.

Key and Jay need to sort this out now, for real.

 

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 16 2012 07:18 am

Title: Chapter 15

I want Eric to storm the Office and go after Jason! Make a scene then Jason will be forced to admit he wants Keyshia in front of everyone and then they can be together!

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 16 2012 05:06 am

Title: Chapter 15

Jason needs to put his foot dwn with his family. I'm sure he has enough cash to live comfy without their money dictating his life. Keisha boyfriend is about to go ham but for some reason I think he is shady. I can't wait for them to drop their significant others. 

 

Reviewer: Acdromance Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 16 2012 04:54 am

Title: Chapter 15

good update

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 16 2012 04:48 am

Title: Chapter 15

Why oh why is she running away now? Did him saying the almost I love you frighten her? I'm confused, and Eric needs to let her go.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 16 2012 04:34 am

Title: Chapter 15

I want Keisha to stop being stupid and give her relationship with Jason a chance.  He can hire bodyguards to protect her.  I so want her to get rid of Eric I really don't appreciate him putting his hands on her.  Great update!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 16 2012 04:17 am

Title: Chapter 14

Loved this chapter, please update soon...

Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 04 2012 06:56 am

Title: Chapter 14

I am in LOVEEEE!! with this story1!pls dont leave us hanging...keep it up!! Great job!

Reviewer: a466 Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 28 2012 11:37 pm

Title: Chapter 14

Okaaaaay, I'm liking where this is headed now.
Hopefully you keep it this interesting for a while :D

Reviewer: Emy Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 18 2012 02:33 am

Title: Chapter 14

I wish they would get back together already! Nice chapter!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 14 2012 11:06 pm

Title: Chapter 14

Jason should just go ahead and breakup with Alyssa...like what is the point of stringing her along for months?  Looks like she already got the hint though and I do believe she is going to break up with him since he won't do it. 

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 14 2012 06:44 am

Title: Chapter 14

Interesting update. Jason needs to man up and decide who he wants. I agree with Keyshia, I don't know if Eric is being upfront with her. Can't wait until the next update!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 14 2012 06:25 am

Title: Chapter 14

When is Jason going to tell his dad to kiss his ass?  He has his own money doesn't he?  If that is the case then he doesn't need his dad.  Alyssa works my last nerve please get rid of her with a quickness.  Great update, Keysha you know that you love Jason he just needs to man up when it comes to his sperm donor.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 14 2012 03:48 am

Title: Chapter 14

Keyshia really has put herself -and Jason- through nonsense for no good reason that I can see. What has this accomplished her? Did she think that she couldn't be his assistant in day and his woman at night? As his assistant she practically runs his life; both personal and professional, at times. What is the difference in this case?

Good stuff!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 14 2012 03:19 am

Title: Chapter 14

Thank you. I know it will take time but I hope they are going in a good direction. I am glad that Jason is being honest and please let Keyshia be honest about her feelings. Let the love flow!

Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: September 14 2012 12:22 am

Title: Chapter 14

OMG its getting good they just need to get together already goshhhhhhh

Reviewer: UnderRestrains Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 14 2012 12:04 am

Title: Chapter 14

They need to get this relationship together, and I know Eric is cheating already!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 14 2012 12:01 am

Title: Chapter 1

Great update, can't wait 2 C what happens next!

Reviewer: Skip2641 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2012 08:32 pm

Title: Chapter 14

Love this story can't wait for the next update!!!!!!

Reviewer: cdy1216 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2012 06:40 pm

Title: Chapter 14

Please let these two, say exactly what's on their minds, like they love each other. I'm not buying Eric's story either.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2012 06:20 pm

Title: Chapter 14

Thank you for this update but now I am anxiously waiting the next update. I love your writing and I know that there converstaion will be open and honest that will probably end in some hot steamy lovings but I will take whatever to give.

Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2012 06:14 pm

Title: Chapter 14

GRR!!! I hate cliffhangers! I can't wait for the next update! Finally things are going the way i want for these two!

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2012 05:59 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I agree with Shelly Keyshia is really confused.  Pick what you want girl and go for it.  It's like you are taking wha is available when it is available.  DO BETTER!  As for Jason GROW SOME BALLS!!!!  Awesome writing hope the next chapter is up soon. 

Reviewer: Carmel Beauty Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2012 11:55 pm

Title: Chapter 13

Is Keyshia serious! Why is she moping like she wasn't the one who broke up with him.  How exactly was Jason supposed to fall in love with her when she wasn't even really comfortable dating him...then she kisses his cousin.  I am confused royally by her.  She's doesn't want to date him yet she's upset when he dates someone else.  Really! The girl needs to get a grip.

Reviewer: shellyme Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05 2012 12:31 am



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