jason is rather weak..during the first few chapters he was this amazing guy but now he is becoming more like his father..its almost as if he is ashamed of having known keisha..its kind of understandable y keisha would feel insecure about jasons family coz they are obviously racist..jasons turning out to be a puppet of his family's wishes i thought he would at least try to fight for her....its good that keisha decided to date eric that should teach jason a lesson....
Reviewer: shehara Signed
[Report This]Date: September 04 2012 09:44 pm
Again I am not happy with the way this is going. I understand this is a story but I really like Jason and Keyshia together so please tell me I will be some pull itch them. I want Jason to go for it itch Keyshia. This is really bothering me.
Author's Response:
sorry sharise for the disappointment :(
bright times are on the horizon. i promise!
Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]Date: September 04 2012 12:29 pm
Wow, things have really gone in a tailspin. Wonder if Keyshia and Jason will find their way back to each other?
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: September 04 2012 08:24 am
These two need to stop playing because this is just ridiculous!
And I ask again....is Keyshia bipolar?! What is her problem with Jason, really? Because I really she's the one with it.
Author's Response:
i think everyone's just a little confused. she doesn't have a problem with him. she's just really hesistant about being with him because she's afraid of what people might think, also she doesn't want anything having to do with being famous.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: September 04 2012 04:45 am
great post can't wait for the next update!!!!
Reviewer: cdy1216 Signed
[Report This]Date: September 04 2012 03:43 am
Oh man! Nooooo! Jason and Keyshia must be together! :(
Reviewer: Megan Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 04 2012 03:42 am
They both need to grow up, stop all this silliness. They both want to be together, yet neither will mke the move back to the other. I guess misery loves company!
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: September 04 2012 03:36 am
Like the update but not happy the direction this is going. I ant them together! P,ease make something happen!
Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]Date: September 04 2012 03:25 am
I seriously think they're being silly. Like I missed something. Maybe it goes deeper than boss/employee and she doesn't feel good enough? But he made his feelings clear...I just think I need more from her, like an explanation for what really happened. I just can't understand...
Great update I love Jason even though he's being childish too.
Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed [Report This]Date: September 04 2012 02:57 am
I am on pins and needles waiting for these to get back on the right track.
Reviewer: Acdromance Signed [Report This]Date: September 04 2012 02:25 am
Those two are so stupid, Jason is in love with Keysia but dating that ho. Keysia is about to start seeing that fine man Eric but she's going to hurt him becuae she can't love him back. When are those two going to wake up and smell the cafe latte? Great update. More please!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: September 04 2012 02:12 am
Ms. Katherine is great, Ms. Mary is a trip, but honest. I am glad Keyshia was able to pull her out of those dull ass clothes she had been wearing all those years and helped her get her hair styled differently. Too bad she had to tell her the unadulterated truth about jason's family. But I like her honesty. Anna, I just wanted to slap the shit out of her but changed my mind because she is what she is a 13 year old brat....but I believe in time she and Keyshia will become great friends. Too bad jason is stuck in that crazy ass family....and the truth be known Jason should not be the heir to the throne, because he is not 100% white, his momma is brazilian. So in all actuality Carter should be the heir. But Jack the Ass will not let that happen! Good story keep up the good work I am putting this on my tracking list!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: September 02 2012 06:01 pm
Yeah, Lauren is beginning to sound like Alicia....she may have to get rid of her before too much longer...to bad though! Jason is too much he bought the girl a car...not just any car...a mercedes, now how in the hell is she going to explain it to nosey ass Alicia without sounding crazy? He should have bought her a used toyota corrolla or camry that would have made better sense....but rich people do not think in practical ways like us poor people!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 02 2012 04:05 pm
Damn, there is nothing like a drunk rich white woman, making a pass at the person least interestedin them....the step son! I hope Jason has enoug time to explain and Keyshia has enough patience to allow him the needed time to open up to her about his like.
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 02 2012 08:27 am
When will the stupid racism end? I am glad blondie bitch got fired. And what is up with dear old dad and his problem with black women? Or women of color period......A racist statement if I ever heard one...keep the white race 100% white?
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 02 2012 08:03 am
Wow, to be wanted by a man like that would be heavenly! You Go Keyshia! I hopes she does the right thing, before she does the wrong thing like listen to one of her so-called friends and end up in another VIP Night club, but this time with a not so nice clientel!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 02 2012 07:41 am
Wow a very sexy cast of characters! Good choice!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 02 2012 07:20 am
Happy Birthday Keyshia! Wow, what a way to start off your birthday. But I hope it ends better. I think this story has lots of potential! I hope it keeps getting better and better. I will give you a 9 for the kiss!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 02 2012 07:19 am
Wow, what a complicated relationship!! Looks like Jack has everyone under his thumb and making all miserable. He needs a reality check! Hope Jason and Keyshia can make it work.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: August 30 2012 02:21 am
Keyshia is missing out on a strong, loving, and sexy man because she doesn't want to date her boss. That man wants to take care of you. Get a different job and keep Jason as your man. Keyshia has too much pride and it's getting in the way! I like Aunt Kat and Anna is a typical teenage girl, nosy!
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: August 28 2012 04:27 am
Sometimes I wonder if Keyshia is bipolar! She breaks off the relationship because she doesn't want to complcate things by working for a man -her boyfriend - that she's alrrady sleeping with, yet she has no problem in asking him to help undress her for bed??? What does she want? But before that she gets weird because as she woke up from a nap laying on top of him. Really, Keyshia? And why would she blush because Carter looked at her weird? Grow up girl!
Good stuff!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: August 27 2012 06:03 am
I'm so excited!!! I want Aunt Kat , Mary and Anna to defend her to the rest of the family. I think they should go back to NY after the get together is over and start to hang out together more. Then some drama needs to happen. A deranged fan needs to come into play or something. The result of such a scare only draws Keyshia and Jake closer together eventually getting back together. Keyshia should be reluctant throughout this process though. Maybe we can have her go on some dates and have some fun watching Jake stalk them or something? Anywho I'm excited to see what happens next.
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: August 27 2012 01:35 am
If Jason even touches another woman besides Keyshia, well hell won't be the only place people will fear.
LOL, kidding...kinda.
But seriously, I just want them together again.
And it needs more sizzling romance.
And some more Carter, because I like seeing Jason jealous :D
Reviewer: Emy Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 27 2012 01:26 am
Wonderful update. Maybe Aunt Mary will be a little nicer from now on, I doubt. Anna being young will warm up to her much better. It's time for them to say forgoet about it and take their chances with a relationship. He should have made and saved up more than enough money to still be filthy rich, and find his mom in the process.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: August 26 2012 10:17 pm
Why kiss the cousin, after knowing exactly what he wanted from her. I'm so confused, with bothof them now and they still want to be boss and employee.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: August 26 2012 09:45 pm