Reviews For The Better Life
Title: Chapter 16

I think Jason will finaly tell her that he in love with her too. The looks the touches the everything. These two are soul mates and belong together. Thank for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 10 2012 06:32 am

Title: Chapter 15

Eric please you are little boy Kee need a real man like Jason.  I hope she break up with eric. thank for the update.

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Date: December 10 2012 06:06 am

Title: Chapter 14

Wow that Eric guy was wrong all the way. How do you leave your girlfriend in the rain for two dam hours smh. I'm glad that Jason was there for her. Thank for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 10 2012 05:48 am

Title: Chapter 13

It something about Eric i just don't like. He seem to be shady like his sister and jason so called girlfriend. I wish these two stop playing games and be together lol. Thank for the update.

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Date: December 10 2012 05:27 am

Title: Chapter 18

Wow now after the fact that you basically disowned the girl because of her skin color you wanna get on her good side. Can't wait to see what happens!!!

Reviewer: Alixermixer Signed [Report This]
Date: December 09 2012 08:59 am

Title: Chapter 18

OHMYLANTA! This story never ceases to amaze and hold my attention.

Ugh, this is so good. People are so trashy! I can't believe her grandmother would try and pull the same stunt Alicia tried. 

And-- oh, no: Is the grandmother gonna try and set Jasmine and Jason Jameson up? He loves Keyshia!

update soon! please!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 09 2012 08:17 am

Title: Chapter 12

Wow I thought them men in the family were jerks but they have nothing on these ladies. She should listen to his aunt Jason is in love with her and hope they get back together. Thank for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 09 2012 06:04 am

Title: Chapter 11

Well jason not in jail witch is good thing lol. These two need to shut up kiss make up and just be togehter that is all. I love his aunt she cool people Thank for the update.

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Date: December 09 2012 05:48 am

Title: Chapter 10

Oooooo something tells me the games Ms. K is playing may back fire on her lol. Poor Carter is going to die so young messing with his cousin woman lol. Dad is the king of ass hole thanks for the update.

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Date: December 09 2012 05:42 am

Title: Chapter 9

Well I hope she doesn't anyone about Jason and Keesh. Something tells me one them going to break and give in and let the rules fly out the window. I can't wait to see what happen next. Lol it was funny they way she slap him lol. Thank for the update.

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Date: December 09 2012 05:24 am

Title: Chapter 8

So now he making breakfast for her dam can I have a jason lol. Her friends always wanted to be in her business smh. I wonder if she going to work at the hotel? Thank for the update

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Date: December 09 2012 05:08 am

Title: Chapter 7

Well keyshia is a nicer person then me because I wouldn't let that fake person living with me.  I hope Jason let Keyshia meet his aunt and his uncle the seem like really nice people. Thank for the update.

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Date: December 09 2012 04:54 am

Title: Chapter 6

How cute are they taking a bath eating pizza making out they fit so well together. His dad been married 7 times wow smh. I wonder what going to happen next with this couple? thanks for the update.

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Date: December 09 2012 04:43 am

Title: Chapter 5

Well Jason father is a jerk big time and glad that mean woman was fired. Now she staying at his place what next wedding bells? Thank for the update.

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Date: December 09 2012 04:31 am

Title: Chapter 4

I hope Keyshia give him a chance. He seem like amazing guy that really wants to be there for her and take care of her. I'm glad she told that faked friend off. I hope those two meet again. Thanks for the update.

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Date: December 09 2012 04:20 am

Title: Chapter 3

Nice cast pics.

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Date: December 09 2012 04:05 am

Title: Chapter 2

Well happy birthday to Keyshia she about rock jason world. Now her so call friend is going to call her i don't like her she a fake bitch in my eyes.  Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 09 2012 04:04 am

Title: Chapter 1

I can't belive her best friend would set her up. Why would she do that lie to her and dance for some horny old bastards smh. I think she need to pick better friends. I like the story so far.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 09 2012 03:49 am

Title: Chapter 18

 


 

Reviewer: Tiffany y. Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 08 2012 07:41 am

Title: Chapter 18

Great update. Look forward to the engagement and how he does it. 

Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: December 08 2012 12:37 am

Title: Chapter 18

:)

Reviewer: Avapriceless1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 07 2012 08:53 pm

Title: Chapter 17

jJason and Key are so perfect for each other.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 07 2012 06:55 pm

Title: Chapter 18

love it more soon

Reviewer: faye Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 07 2012 06:04 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Keyshia needs to dum her so-called friends. They are  hanger ons.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 07 2012 04:13 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Alicia'a a bitch. How can she do this to her friend?

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 07 2012 12:27 pm



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