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Title: Chapter 14

Oh sweet kami that man is just....mmmm

 Reviewer: LetMeDream Signed [Report This]
Date: October 27 2014 09:25 pm
Title: Chapter 14

Oh sweet kami that man is just....mmmm

 Reviewer: LetMeDream Signed [Report This]
Date: October 27 2014 09:11 pm
Title: Chapter 13

Poor Agito looks like he needs to be school in the art of wooing my sexy Yoshi-sama if he blushes anymore the red might be permanent

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Date: October 27 2014 09:02 pm
Title: Chapter 11

Oooooo this is getting good look at little Agito throwing his hat in the ring

 Reviewer: LetMeDream Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 27 2014 08:32 pm
Title: Chapter 10

Whooooo Noshihide is so sexy together get her Yoshi -sama

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Date: October 27 2014 08:26 pm
Title: Chapter 9

Calm down Nia before you and Yoshi burn down the office

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Date: October 27 2014 08:19 pm
Title: Chapter 8

Yoshi-sama why are you so mean to poor grumpy Agi-kun

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Date: October 27 2014 08:14 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Is her last name James or Jone.  A bit confused.

 Reviewer: Shells Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 08 2014 05:32 am
Title: Chapter 14

She not thinking....

 Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2014 10:43 pm
Title: Chapter 14

so fuckin happy to see an update for you! i have really missed DT! i wish that you continue with this story - pleeeeease dont stop!! thanks for the update

 Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28 2014 05:28 pm
Title: Chapter 14

So much drama is on the horizon.

 Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27 2014 05:58 pm
Title: Chapter 14

I like this story.  You should add more.  I don't know if her being with Yoshi or Agito is a good idea because even though they both like her, they are also using her as a pawn in their little war; which is not cool.  Please continue this story.

 Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2014 04:34 pm
Title: Chapter 14

I just read this, LOVED IT!! I love Asian leading men. Yoshi is soon hot, I think Now should give him a chance, maybe Agito will get jealous and give her a better kiss. Thanks for sharing.

 Reviewer: shadow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2014 06:29 am
Title: Chapter 14

He antagonist relationship with Agi and she needs to not allow him to use her.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2014 03:48 am
Title: Chapter 1

The male lead is Asian,  I am already hooked!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2014 03:16 am
Title: Chapter 14

This story is interesting. Il like Nia : she is fun. But something bother me a little: it feels like Nia's character has no real self motive or will. I don't understand how it is a "progress" for her to accept Yoshi's offer : she is just putting herself into a situation she already know will be a mess. I mean, she know there is a rivalry between the two borthers, and she just agreed to play into that. Also, personal feelings aside, her boss told her he didn't want her to quit, how come she can just up and decide to cut back her hours at her firm and work part time with another? And it isn't a better or high ranking position she'll be in. Either she quit her present firm and accept a better offer from another company, or she stays there and asks for a raise or something.

 Reviewer: RedHobo Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2014 12:38 am
Title: Chapter 1

missing this story - please come back!!! don't leave this lovely story hanging!! :D

 Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 14 2013 09:34 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I am in love with this story and I hope that you update soon. The characters are so lovable and you have them developing so well. Anyways, amazing story. Update this soon, please. 

 Reviewer: Flippa Signed [Report This]
Date: November 06 2012 12:59 am
Title: Chapter 13

Really good story, I am still waiting on something but I just do not know what it is yet.

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Date: September 03 2012 06:20 am
Title: Chapter 13

Another great chapter ! You just keep out doing yourself  3 new chapters this weekend .Thank you !

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Date: September 02 2012 09:18 pm
Title: Chapter 13

Mr. H needs to relax and admit whole heartedly to his feelings for Ms Jones.  He can start by calling Ms. jones by her first name  and allowing her call him by his first name.  Nia was having a sexy before Mr. H showed up, I was hoping that it would get nasty for real.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 02 2012 08:50 pm
Title: Chapter 13

I'm glad he's moving cautiously and I don't trust Yoshi either!  I hope her boss makes the first move since she's dreaming about him.  LOL

 Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 02 2012 08:26 pm
Title: Chapter 1

this story kicks major ass!! it's funny, quirky and puts a smile on my face every time, lol! Keep it up - look forward to the next update, it's going be something else alright, lol!

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Date: September 02 2012 12:59 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Love it! Cannot wait till the next chapter!

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Date: September 02 2012 04:40 am
Title: Chapter 12

I love it Nia was having a sex dream.  Please let MR. H work real hard to win Nia.  Make her know that you care., right now she is unsure of you which all your fault of course.  Get to working!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 02 2012 01:25 am


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