Reviews For Twice The Fool
Title: Chapter 9 In Enemy Territory

It's time for Cara to find her backbone. Fawn, Douglas and Cecily would be disinvited from the wedding, and any other close family functions that they wished for me and my children to attend. How dare the former two invite an uninvited guest, let alone an old flame, to a sit down dinner without the permission of the host? All three went around mouthing their displeasure about the guests of honor to all and sundry. Cecily judged Cara without anything more than a "hello." Then father and daughter insulted Cara to her face?! Also, that ridiculous old fool, Douglas, is handing out insults to Cara's parents, suggesting that her mother is a loose woman who would cheat on her husband, and challenging her father to do anything about it. There is no doubt about it. They wouldn't be family after today.



Author's Response:

Cara's mother didn't want a scene to be caused at her daughter's engagement party which is why she and Cecil held back a bit.  She did get him straight on the dance floor and cut the dance short.  (Notice that Douglas didn't accompany her back to the table and while Gena and Fawn were bothering Cara, Josef was over at Douglas' table chastising him about his behavior).  They were trying to keep things on the DL and handle Douglas in the background.  Cecil left so that he wouldn't have to choke Douglas.  Joanne left because Douglas literally gave her a headache with his attentions.

 

Thanks for the review.  Cara is "womaning up", but it was a bit too much thrown at her all at once.  The statement from Gena really threw her for a loop.  She's not used to people talking like that.  It's not over with yet.  More is coming at the 'morning after' breakfast.  LOL

Drama, Drama, Drama! 

 

 

Reviewer: It's time for the smack down. Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 31 2012 06:07 am

Title: Chapter 9 In Enemy Territory

That was excellent! I really like Stephan!  I really hate Douglas and those other fools!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 31 2012 06:01 am

Title: Chapter 9 In Enemy Territory

Well that is one way to be put in your place.

Reviewer: Acdromance Signed [Report This]
Date: August 31 2012 03:57 am

Title: Chapter 9 In Enemy Territory

You know, Douglas is just pissing me off now. I'm looking at this joker on the one hand, insulting Cara about her looks, the hue of her skin, and insinuating she's some loose woman who is trapping his nephew; while on the other hand, openly lusting after this same "scheming" woman's mother himself, in front of her husband and child. So the question begs to be aske; what "values" is he displaying with this behavior? How does he think that what he's doing is somehow better?

And another thing, what's up with Joanne? She's just sitting there like a bump on a log with Douglas acting like this in front of her family? She's not stupid, his intent is clear and they all know it. After all, he's hardly making a secret of it. She doesn't have to fight Cecil's battles for him as the man, but I'd definitely let Douglas know that his opinion of not only her daughter, but his loosebehavior, dont line up, and is not appreciated. And she doesn't have to go off or get in the gutter either; just be classy and intelligent in her responses and reactions about it. I really expected her to call him out some on it because Douglas is the worst kind of hypocrite!

And poor Cara; I don't know why Anja put on this big production, and who for? Stephan and Cara didn't really want or need all of that. And yes, Cara agreed, but only because Anja was speeding headlong into it. With those "family" members all in one place, on her all at once, its just something she could have eased into with the marriage itself. Just because of who Cara is, Anja maybe should have kept it smaller. Having said that, I think Cara should have stayed there with Stephan, if for no other reason that to show them they didn't hit a nerve, even if they had. Never let them see you sweat! I hope these little run-ins will make Cara stronger each time.

Good stuff!

 

 



Author's Response:

Anja is a bit out of control, however in her defense she had the best of intentions.  She has been wanting her only child to get married for years and now that it's a reality, she's a bit excited.  She will not tolerate anyone talking bad about her new 'daughter' though.  She was ready to bitch slap her own sister.  LOL

Joanne did handle Douglas quietly.  She didn't want a scene caused drawing attention to them.  Cecil got his point across and Joanne was more direct with Douglas once they got on the dance floor.  The dance was short and she came back to the table alone. Josef knew something was up and confronted his uncle.  That was when Fawn and Gena swooped in.  LOL

Douglas (like some older senior folks) thinks that age has given him license to do and say whatever he pleases.  Stephan is fed up and so is Josef.  More is coming at the Morning after breakfast.  LOL

thanks always for you in depth reviews, Flikchick. 

 

 

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 31 2012 01:34 am

Title: Chapter 1 Why Do Fools Fall in Love?

I love your stories. I usually wait until they are complete before reading. But this story has peaked my interest and I have reluctantly statred reading it even though it is not completed.

I am travelling to asia next week, to a remote part where there is no internet service. is there any way you can complete this story this weekend for my sake? please respond.

NK



Author's Response:

I doubt if I can complete it this weekend, because my internet is down at home.  Verizon was supposed to c ome outWed. but I'm still waiting....  I guess I have to blame Isaac.

Now I can only update at work and while I can sneak some in, I do have to do what I'm paid to do.  LOL

So, all I can do is offer to mail it to you by snail mail if you like it that much. How long will you be away?   LOL  Email me @

Preacharomantic@gmail.com  with your address.    Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: NK Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 31 2012 12:12 am

Title: Chapter 9 In Enemy Territory

I feel so badly for them. 

Reviewer: flgurleygrl Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30 2012 09:32 pm

Title: Chapter 8 Handling Uncle Douglas

Thanks for a good update.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 30 2012 09:26 pm

Title: Chapter 9 In Enemy Territory

Fab chapter and forget the hags for trying to make Cara uncomfortable! Stephan gave her something unique alright lol!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 30 2012 09:17 pm

Title: Chapter 9 In Enemy Territory

Love the update! I hope you get your Internet back soon and please update soon!

Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30 2012 07:26 pm

Title: Chapter 9 In Enemy Territory

Oh oh!! I see Douglas and family were up to no good. Poor Cara!! Stephen really gave her something unique BUT was that a good or bad thing for them as a couple??!! He sounded upset with her!! Can't wait for the next update!!

Author's Response:

He wasn't upset with her, he was upset with himself.  He had no idea that he'd be blindsided by his uncle and cousin and that most of all, Gena would say such a thing to Cara and give her that visual.  He is already a bit insecure because Cara has ran from him twice.  He was worried that after Gena's statement that the'd have a major setback in their relationship.  He wanted her to understand that she is unique because he wants her and only her to become his wife.  Yes, a lot of his extended family members are up to no good, but he's determined that no one is going to separate him and Cara.  Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 30 2012 07:17 pm

Title: Chapter 1 Why Do Fools Fall in Love?

WELL I'LL BE DOGGONE IF THAT WASN' T THE DAMNEST I EVER READ!!! BRAVO BRENDA!

Reviewer: Buddha Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 30 2012 06:54 pm

Title: Chapter 1 Why Do Fools Fall in Love?

Great update!   Douglas is so creepy and inappropriate.  Gena is just embarrassing and Fawn is a jackass.  What a lovely family.

 

 

Reviewer: Nodrivel Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 30 2012 05:00 pm

Title: Chapter 9 In Enemy Territory

Wow! really nice update.

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 30 2012 03:55 pm

Title: Chapter 9 In Enemy Territory

Damn, I love Stephan. Take that Gena, or not since Cara just took it. Douglas is an old coot, I know he does not think he has a chance in hell of getting with Joanne,unless he wants a bullet in his a**. I was so pleased that Anja spoke up for her future daughter n law. Awesome update!

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 30 2012 02:53 pm

Title: Chapter 9 In Enemy Territory

Great update. Love the ininteraction between Cara and Stephen. As for the nay-sayers, true love always win in the end.

I feel your pain as it relates to the internet. I just received my new laptap and I can't get accesss to the internet. My wireless router is set up for WEP but new taptop is configured for WPA. Now my cousin and I have to setup for WPA this weekend. My only saving grace is that I have my Nook and that has access to the internet.

 

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 30 2012 02:46 pm

Title: Chapter 8 Handling Uncle Douglas

I really like this story.  I look forward to more.

Nyeesha

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 29 2012 09:56 am

Title: Chapter 8 Handling Uncle Douglas

I'm happy that Cara stood up to Uncle Douglas. He's a grade A racist asshole and even though he grew up during a time when that was prevalent, that time is no more. Unfortunately, living in the south especially, I know that's still true for alot of people.

Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2012 07:03 am

Title: Chapter 8 Handling Uncle Douglas

Loved the update. Hopefully uncle Douglas will come around and stop with his small minded ways of thinking. Loving Cara and Stephan!!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2012 06:55 am

Title: Chapter 1 Why Do Fools Fall in Love?

Thanks 4 the update, i can't wait 4 the wedding!

Reviewer: Skip2641 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2012 01:35 am

Title: Chapter 8 Handling Uncle Douglas

Great read

Reviewer: xiaomei21 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28 2012 08:31 am

Title: Chapter 8 Handling Uncle Douglas

Uninvite Douglas' ass from the wedding!  I wish Cara told Cecil what that asshole said!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 28 2012 04:58 am

Title: Chapter 8 Handling Uncle Douglas

Josef told Douglas exactly right. Let it go! Why does Douglas care so much. He's just an uncle. Good chapter!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 28 2012 03:47 am

Title: Chapter 8 Handling Uncle Douglas

That whole comparison with Cara and her mother was completely uncalled for, to me. What does tearing Cara down amd presenting Joanne as the "acceptable" type is...ughh! Douglas is a jerk! 

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28 2012 02:17 am

Title: Chapter 8 Handling Uncle Douglas

Hahahaha "Rutted like deers" The uncle is a strange one hating the daughter but loving the mother! I'm suprised he didn't give more of a fight, but then again we have more chapters to come ahaha! It would be nice to see Josiah interact with his anja they'd be realyly cute!

Reviewer: chatty504 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28 2012 01:29 am

Title: Chapter 8 Handling Uncle Douglas

Thanks for the update. I hope your landline gets fixed soon.

Any way Uncle Doug is wacked. He needs to mind his own business and stop being judmental. The Nightingales maybe poor simple folks but they have good hearts.

Author's Response:

Thanks!  My son hooked my phone up to my computer for me to check in but I have to watch my gbites so that I don't go over and my cell phone bill skyrockets.  Most of my replys will be from work.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 28 2012 01:11 am



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