Reviews For Twice The Fool
Title: Chapter 8 Handling Uncle Douglas

Thank you for the update! I love them together! I understand you are having problems with your Internet but thanks for doing this on the sly!



Author's Response:

Verizon says they will be out Wed.  So I will have to continue to sneak at work until then.  LOL

Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28 2012 12:00 am

Title: Chapter 8 Handling Uncle Douglas

I don't like Uncle Douglas, does he wear a white sheet in his spare time?  Nothing like some before dinner nookie, alright now Stephan.    Cara showed some back bone, color me surprised.  Brenda I am glad to see this update of this story, you are awesome!



Author's Response:

Cara is learning to stand up for herself.  LOL

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 27 2012 11:54 pm

Title: Chapter 8 Handling Uncle Douglas

Let it go Douglas, because no one is listening too you! Yay, for Cara speaking up for herself, loved how she told his old butt off.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 27 2012 09:44 pm

Title: Chapter 8 Handling Uncle Douglas

Go Cara! this young lady has a backbone that thought did not exist...great job

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 27 2012 08:17 pm

Title: Chapter 1 Why Do Fools Fall in Love?

You never know, the uncle might not be a problem at all. Once he meets Cara and sees their son, he may fall in love with them. Let's give him a chance. 

Reviewer: flgurleygrl Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18 2012 03:14 pm

Title: Chapter 7 Let No Man Put Asunder

There's always one in the bunch! Hope Cecil doesn't have to bring out his gun!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 17 2012 09:21 am

Title: Chapter 6 What God has joined together...

Anja's just doing what mothers do, taking over the wedding planning but let's wait for her to meet Joanne! 

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 17 2012 08:55 am

Title: Chapter 5 The Visit

Cara go ahead and marry that man!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 17 2012 08:29 am

Title: Chapter 7 Let No Man Put Asunder

Loved the update but hope uncle Douglas doesn't upset the apple cart!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 17 2012 05:32 am

Title: Chapter 1 Why Do Fools Fall in Love?

I meant choose fight instead of "not" to choose...sorry...

Reviewer: attheritz Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17 2012 05:07 am

Title: Chapter 7 Let No Man Put Asunder

Brenda...so sorry I haven't been able to leave as many reviews as I would like...but I'm back to work now and can only read/review in the late night after I finish my work...but as usual...this story is superb...love that Cara and Stephan have fallen in love...but...you know there is always a but in there...why do old cranky cudmudgeons like to throw salt in the game...instead of sitting his old, cranky decrepit behind somewhere in a nursing home chilling and trying to get right before he meets his maker...old Douglas is after some mischief...I knew everything was going along too swimmingly well...just waiting for you to throw the monkey wrench in there...I hope Cara has matured enough not to choose fight instead of flight once again when old Doug comes after her...this time she has three babies to think of and a father and grandparents who love his/their children/grandchildren very much...she wouldn't think to hurt Stephan like this again...or would she...I hope I'm wrong...but Cara makes ME jittery...wish she'd develop a bit more self-esteem...and if she does run again...don't think Stephan would be so easy to forgive...

Can't wait for more...this story rocks!!!!

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 17 2012 05:05 am

Title: Chapter 7 Let No Man Put Asunder

There always has to be an idiot trying to mess things up. Thanks for a great update.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 17 2012 03:44 am

Title: Chapter 7 Let No Man Put Asunder

Ok bring on the drama! But i hope it ends well! I want to see them happy 

Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: August 16 2012 11:58 pm

Title: Chapter 7 Let No Man Put Asunder

Uncle Doug is a hot mess. I hope he does'nt scare off Cara. Cara is way too senative. As for Anja, she needs to calm down.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2012 11:00 pm

Title: Chapter 7 Let No Man Put Asunder

I understand the uncles point of view but he's a jackass.

Reviewer: luv2read Signed [Report This]
Date: August 16 2012 09:57 pm

Title: Chapter 7 Let No Man Put Asunder

I laughed through this whole chapter. I'm glad Cara is so easy going because most brides to be wouldn't want someone else to have so much control. Uncle Douglas needs to mind his own business. He is already plotting to start trouble.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 16 2012 08:25 pm

Title: Chapter 7 Let No Man Put Asunder

I love the update...There has to be one that thinks they no everything

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2012 06:46 pm

Title: Chapter 7 Let No Man Put Asunder

How bout we uninvite Douglas to the wedding. lol

Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2012 05:47 pm

Title: Chapter 7 Let No Man Put Asunder

There's always 1 in the bunch.

Thamk u Ms. B 4 the update.

Waiting 4 more

Happy writing!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2012 05:05 pm

Title: Chapter 7 Let No Man Put Asunder

Drama from the old Uncle huh? I bet Stephan will put him in his place.

Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2012 04:22 pm

Title: Chapter 6 What God has joined together...

I love Anja! She likes to meddle but in a good way. Cara and Stephen are  perfect for each other. I like that Cara doesn't realize the effect she has on Stephen. Stephen is so hungry for Cara he can barely wait. This will help keep their relationship strong!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 16 2012 04:20 pm

Title: Chapter 7 Let No Man Put Asunder

I knew things were going just to smooth....i wonder if the uncle is going 2 make Cara change her mind about marrying into Stephan's family!

Great new story, but i miss Charlie & Enga! lol

Reviewer: Skip2641 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2012 04:13 pm

Title: Chapter 6 What God has joined together...

Thanks for a great update.  The grandparents should get along fine.  

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2012 02:10 am

Title: Chapter 4 A Meeting of the Minds

i am loving this story! especially Anja. She really cracks me up. Also cecil and Joanna.

Reviewer: chinna Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 14 2012 07:43 am

Title: Chapter 6 What God has joined together...

Thank you so much for the good/quick update. Really look forward to reading each chapter. 

Reviewer: flgurleygrl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2012 05:58 am



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