Totally hooked! Stephen is going to handcuff her to the bed when they meet up this time. Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Nicci Signed
[Report This]Date: August 08 2012 03:03 am
My initial reaction is not a favorable one in either Cara or Stephan's camp, so I'll withhold it until there is more. I will say I hope she doesn't give her babies up because she's too scared of what Stephan might say. If she tells him and he kicks her to the curb, then that's one thing, but to deny her babies their family because of what she thinks will happen; that sucks on her part.
This is going to be an emotional one.
Good stuff!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed
[Report This]Date: August 08 2012 02:25 am
Me likey!! More please. Hope she gets the courage to tell him. Hope he helps her.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: August 08 2012 01:58 am
Love this so far. I can't wait to see what happens when she is faced with telling him. Will he make things easy for her or will he punish her for leaving him in the dark for so long. Or will he think that she is lying. So many questions...not-so-patiently waiting for the next update.
Reviewer: Minerva Vesta Signed [Report This]Date: August 08 2012 12:11 am
Yay your back with another fantastic story. I am salivating. I cant wait to read more.
Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]Date: August 07 2012 11:54 pm
What can I say? Loved it! Want more of it. Glad to see you back.
Thank you for the new story. Waiting anxiously for the next update to this and all your stories.
Happy writing!
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: August 07 2012 11:53 pm
Loving it already. Brenda, I enjoy all of your stories that I have read and I think you are an amazing author. I know that this will be no different so I can't wait for more.
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 07 2012 11:42 pm
I enjoy and appreciate you sharing your stories, but it seems like every heroine you write has a self image problem based mostly on being black. I don't know that many black women who hate their bodies as much as the women you write. It just seemed to stick out after reading this first chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the observation. Cara doesn't have a self image problem as much as she believes that white men are not really attracted to black women. There are a lot of women who feel that way, though this is changing. Most women look at their figures and have things that they like and don't like. Cara has her preconceived notions which Stephan is about to blow out of the water. Thanks for your review.
Reviewer: Dee Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 07 2012 11:34 pm
Woe, great story so far
Reviewer: luv2read Signed [Report This]Date: August 07 2012 11:13 pm
Wooow your back with a new one and i must say that i am loving this whoo cant wait til she tell stephen about baby josiah and also the two new additions whoo!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: August 07 2012 10:55 pm
Very good start I can't wait to find out more. I want to read more about Cara
Reviewer: primesgirl4 Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 07 2012 10:53 pm
Brenda I love your Muse, I am glad that she bugs you because when your Muse bugs we get some great stories. I just want to know why Cara is so stupid? Having Josiah didn't seem to mature her at all as she made the same mistake and didn't tell that tasty Stephan she had had his baby. It is never alright not to tell a man that is going to be a father, unless it was rape. Stephan obviously has feelings for Cara to she is too much of little girl to stay too see where it could lead. I can't wait to read more!! Brenda you are amazing!!
Author's Response:
Cara has her own insecurities and issues. She can't beleive that Stephan really would want her. She has preconceived notions about white men and she thinks he has preconceived notions about black women. She's a country girl and no, she's not stupid, but she has already made up her mind that she could never have him. LOL His point of view is coming up by tomorrow.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 07 2012 10:38 pm
Looking forward to the next update. I feel like Mr. Gringale is going to hit the roof. I would like to have a little bit more insight about him of course.
Author's Response:
More is coming on Stephan in the next chapter. LOL He is not going to be happy with Cara.
Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]Date: August 07 2012 09:31 pm
OMG!!! This story is good. Please update soon on this one. I love all your stories, but this is definately going to be a favorite of mine. I feel bad for Cara. How is she going to do it? One child plus two more on the way? Yes, she should have told Stephen, but I understand why she didn't. Stephen is going to loose his mind when he sees Cara again since she left him after he told her she would never leave him. Poor Cara and when he finds out he has not one but three kids with her, he is going to die, lol! I am laughing my butt off right now, but it is not a laughing matter. It just seems so, unbelievable. Stephen is going to flip out and I cannot wait to see how he reacts. Please update soon!!!
Author's Response:
LOL Stephan's point of view is coming up and no he is not going to be happy with Cara. LOL Update is coming soon...most likely tomorrow!
Reviewer: oHH Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 07 2012 09:11 pm
Thanks Liz. Yes, Stephan is going to find out and he's not going to be happy.
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: August 07 2012 09:08 pm
OMG, what she should do and should have done is tell him he has child and two on the way. It's obvious, he has been thinking about her all this time, and seems to care for her. Why put the burden on her parents, let him know and help her with taking care of their babies.
Author's Response:
Yes, Cara should have told him. The next chapter will be Stephan's point of view.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 07 2012 08:52 pm
Wow poor Cara had to find the one man that the two or so times that they had sex she ended up pregnant. I hope that he isn't married or engaged. How old is he? Thanks
Author's Response:
NO, Stephan isn't married. He's a bit of a workaholic. His point of view is coming up. He's in his mid thirties. I'm going to have to find a pix of a hunk. LOL
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: August 07 2012 08:15 pm
TWICE THE FOOL is right! Boy oh Boy, I have been waiting patiently on you Ms. Brenda and BAM you slang us a banger! I'm ready for this one! Stephen is gonna act a pure damn fool and the bad thing about it...he has every right to.
Reviewer: Elizablu Signed [Report This]Date: August 07 2012 08:00 pm