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Title: Chapter 1 Why Do Fools Fall in Love?

love it. i love this story so much. can we get many more chapters. thank you.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 16 2012 06:08 am

Title: Chapter 11 The Persistent Fool

Cara should tell Stephen and the whole family what happened. Perhaps then the old S.O.B. won't be able to come to the wedding. I say able because he sure wasn't invited and if he gets his a@# tuned up he'll be to sore to come. Thanks for a great chapter and I can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Charly43 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2012 02:38 am

Title: Chapter 11 The Persistent Fool

Nice.  Now perhaps Douglas will open his eyes and let Stephen and Cara marry in peace.

Nyeesha

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 15 2012 05:42 pm

Title: Chapter 11 The Persistent Fool

Loved the update but uncle Douglas needs to learn when to leave things alone!! He's a trouble maker!!! Glad all left and gave them some space, he needed it. It was too many cooks in that kitchen!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 14 2012 07:09 am

Title: Chapter 11 The Persistent Fool

So....let me get this straight: Douglas just shows up to Cara's home, upset her to the point of premature labor, almost kill her getting her to the hospital then has the nerve to fix his mouth to demand Stephan detail his car?! WOW.....he is beyond words.

I love that Cara stood her ground and let Douglas know she is not to be messed with.

I understand Stephan being upset over missing the birth, but I do give him credit for walking away venting on his own. He got to name the babies and he is going to be able to take part in all of the other moments he missed with Josiah. I hope Josiah doesn't feel left out when they bring the babies home. Now, I just need Stephen to rip Douglas a new one and then completely focus on the wedding and family.

Reviewer: SuperStar2577 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 14 2012 03:11 am

Title: Chapter 11 The Persistent Fool

Is Cara gonna blow the whistle on Douglas? Is it wrong of me to want someone to whip his ass?

Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 14 2012 12:24 am

Title: Chapter 11 The Persistent Fool

The babies are here yeah and love their names and who they're named after.

Douglas may as well forget about that detail and anything else when Stephan finds out that he is the reason that Cara when into labor so early...with Stephan being so upset with not being there when the girls were born he was way occupied to ask again why he was there.  So when all cools down in his head and he has a chance to rest Douglas may as well hang his ass to dry.  Fawn already told him to back off b/c it was not going to turn out well for him but did he listen nope.

With knowing Stephan I understand his reaction wholeheartedly and I love how he handled it instead of going off in the hospital he walked away.  I hope Cara understands how he feels if he tell her

Thank you so much for the update it was wonderful like always.

More please,

Happy writing

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2012 08:35 pm

Title: Chapter 11 The Persistent Fool

Thanks for a great update.  Douglas is a meddling old man. I hope that he will be more civil to Cara now that he had to participate in the birth of the twins by driving Cara to the hospital.  I was surprised that Stephen was so upset about missing the birt of the twins.  I like their names.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2012 01:34 pm

Title: Chapter 11 The Persistent Fool

great update...I cannot wait unit great uncle get his just due

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2012 09:21 am

Title: Chapter 11 The Persistent Fool

I got a little emotional myself right along with Stephan. I understand why he reacted that way. It may seem a little irrational, but I totally get it. I thought the same thing. Brenda, why would your muse choose to do that to Stephan? That's a shame! Cara robbed him of Josiah's birth, and that hurt him, so I was really hoping he would have that with these babies. If he'd had that at least, I dont think this would have affected like it did. Now it just adds up to zero. He got to name them, but it's not the same. He's missed all of his kids births! Both families were all gushing and holding them and he felt like an outsider. Even Douglas was there and that was really hard for me to take; considering how he feels about Cara. He, especially, didn't deserve that honor! I just feel so bad for Stephan.

This was bittersweet for me.

Good stuff!

 

 

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2012 09:04 am

Title: Chapter 11 The Persistent Fool

Ohmigod, someone needs to rip Douglas a new one.  This is someone's fault.  It's all HIS fault. 

Reviewer: tens Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 13 2012 08:42 am

Title: Chapter 11 The Persistent Fool

I tell you what, I would kick his old wrinkled ass. Stephan is going to lose his f'in mind when he finds out that his uncle was probably responsible for Cara's premature labor. And who the hell said that he couldn't stop that bastid from coming into the Church? That's what security is for. Girl, you realy got my blood boiling. Good Job!!!

Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2012 06:20 am

Title: Chapter 11 The Persistent Fool

Oh, wonderful! The babies are here! That old coot just couldn't stay out of their business. The babies might not have come so early if he hadidn't upset Cara.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 13 2012 06:05 am

Title: Chapter 11 The Persistent Fool

Great update. This is a beautiful story,I love how strong Cara has become. I bet the uncle of will think twice before meddling in folks business now he see Cara isn't just some country girl with no sense. I can't hardly wait until Stephan get a hold of his uncle. Didn't the old fool realize he was putting Cara and great great nieces in damage by up setting her while she was so late in her pregnancy,glad everything turn out alright. Kinda sad Stephan wasn't able to see the birth of his daughter, but happy that Cara was make him realize it wasn't his fault. Those two bring out the best of each others.Looking forward for the next update.

Reviewer: meko1975 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2012 05:50 am

Title: Chapter 11 The Persistent Fool

another i can't wait for Stephan to find out what his uncle told Cara

Reviewer: tcarey Signed [Report This]
Date: September 13 2012 05:12 am

Title: Chapter 1 Why Do Fools Fall in Love?

Wow! Wow! This story caught me off guard. I enjoyed

Reviewer: Bigsix Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 13 2012 05:02 am

Title: Chapter 1 Why Do Fools Fall in Love?

You captured Stephan's emotions perfectly.  Great chapter!

Reviewer: ShelbyD Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 13 2012 04:40 am

Title: Chapter 11 The Persistent Fool

Uncle Doug continues to be a handful. First he shows up at Cara's house and procedes to unleash Stephan's private business. Then he has the nerve to expect Stephan to detail his car, after he may have cause Cara to go into premature labor.

My thoughts personally as that the ole codger can clean the car his damn self. Futhermore he should stay away from the wedding. I think now would be a perfect time for him to visit Germany with his daughter.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2012 02:09 am

Title: Chapter 11 The Persistent Fool

Omg!!! The girls came early... I can not stand Uncle Douglas... I hope things get better for this new.family..

Reviewer: mustang_writer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2012 01:09 am

Title: Chapter 11 The Persistent Fool

I love this story

Reviewer: Acdromance Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 13 2012 01:01 am

Title: Chapter 11 The Persistent Fool

I like those names as well, but boy did I think that Stephan was going to blow a gasket.  That Douglas is a pain in the ass and should be put in a home so that he will stay out of his nephews business. I am so proud of Cara for tell that old codger to mind his own business. She has come along way, Stephan is good for her.  He's made her grow up in a lot of ways.  Great chapter.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2012 12:47 am

Title: Chapter 11 The Persistent Fool

Great update and I hope it is smooth sailing from here until the wedding! I love this story!

Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: September 13 2012 12:39 am

Title: Chapter 11 The Persistent Fool

hurray let get to the end and the wedding. and what are you going to do with the uncle .

i loved it

Reviewer: lady tee Signed [Report This]
Date: September 13 2012 12:12 am

Title: Chapter 11 The Persistent Fool

Would somone PLEASE dump some horse tranquilizers into Douglas' Metamucil? That racist, fetishizing* crank has worn the daylights of out his welcome. He needs to exit, stage left!

 

*Don't think I missed his lecherous yearnings for Cara's mother. Nasty ol' fart.

Reviewer: Leo the Yardie Chick Signed [Report This]
Date: September 12 2012 11:32 pm

Title: Chapter 11 The Persistent Fool

I felt so bad for him missing out on the birth of his babies, all because of his no good Uncle. He'd clean that car himself. Love the names he gave the  girls. I hope she tells him what went on with Uncle Douglas. Wonderful update.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 12 2012 11:28 pm



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