Great update!
I hope after seeing Cara's discomfort and after Josef's announcement that Anja doesn't go overboard with the wedding reception. I know we haven't seen the last of Douglas or Cecily so I can't wait for the craziness I know the wedding is going to bring.
Please update soon.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous
[Report This]Date: September 12 2012 04:23 am
I love this story. Like all of your stories, I was instantly addicted. I have to say I love how both sets of parents are standing up for Cara and Stephan and aren't letting anyone disrespect them or their choices.
I can't wait for the wedding......judging from the engagement party, everyone is in for some wild times.
Please update soon
Reviewer: SuperStar2577 Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 06 2012 12:52 am
Hi, Hope you a productive weekend and your internet is sorted. As I said this is a wonderfuk story. Is it completed no. I would like to complete it before I travel -NK
Author's Response:
I don't think that's going to happen, but I'm working on it.
Reviewer: NK Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 03 2012 08:25 am
I can't wait for the wedding! Do we know what Cara is having? Boys? Girls? Both?
Reviewer: flgurleygrl Signed [Report This]Date: September 01 2012 06:39 am
My favorite part of this chapter was when Stephan told thay bitch Gena that when kissed his lips that she kisdef Cara's ass. I hollered, you had me rolling. I guess Fawn never heard of the adage, that if you can't say something nice don't say anything at all. Brenda, you are an amazing writer, thanks for sharing your talent!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: September 01 2012 06:36 am
Wow, four characters in one story that make my teeth itch ! Uncle Douglas, Ceciliy, Fawn and Gena git on my last half of nerve. Can you Uncle Dougie a heart attack? How about giving Gena an STD? Just like McDonal's, I'm loving it!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: September 01 2012 06:20 am
I laugh so hard after reading this....Go and brush your teeth, your breath smells like a$$ lol.Stephen parents are too funny. First his mom see him having oral sex, now the daddy over hear him saying that he just got finish eating a$$. This story so good, I read it like five times already and you not even finish writing it lol.Looking forward to he next update.
Reviewer: meko1975 Signed [Report This]Date: September 01 2012 06:01 am
Hot Damn!!!!! Go Stephen! Go Stephen!!!
Reviewer: LadyeT Signed [Report This]Date: September 01 2012 05:12 am
Loved the update. Glad to see how the families are supporting each other.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: September 01 2012 04:04 am
Great update and thank you for doing this even without Internet at home! Love this story!
Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]Date: September 01 2012 03:42 am
First....“Slide up here and let Papa show you”.....haha, Cecil, you frisky rascal!
Second....I really don't appreciate how they (Douglas, Gena, Fawn Cecily) keep talking about Cara in relations to her virginity and privates like that. It's rolling off the tongues of these tactless, base, vulgar nasty people, too easily.
Third...“Now enjoy your breakfast, check out of your rooms and enjoy the rest of your life." Could not have said it better myself. That's right, kick rocks!
Good stuff!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: September 01 2012 01:46 am
love it. Please update soon
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: August 31 2012 11:37 pm
There sure was a lot of drama in this chapter. Stephan's family is just ridiculous! I'm glad Josef made that annoucement at the farewell breakfast! Still I know Uncle Douglas has more trouble planned. Jerk!
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed
[Report This]Date: August 31 2012 11:20 pm
I was LMAO off at Josef telling people if they didn't get an invitation to the wedding that means that they aren't invited. Enjoy your breakfast, check ouyt of your rooms and enjoy the rest of your life...I guess he is to through with these folks. I hope Uncle doesn't get an invite. I was alsl LMAO when Stephen told Gena that he just kissed Cara's ass because he had his tongue all up her ass or something lile that. Brenda you have the best lines in putting people in their place. It was nice to see Cecil and Joanne being amorous. Thanks for a great update.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: August 31 2012 10:52 pm
Hee Hee! Nice!
Reviewer: urtrippin2 Signed [Report This]Date: August 31 2012 10:21 pm
Thanks for a great update. It seems that Stephen is a little upset with Cara. Which is surprising. He knew that she was a sheltered young woman not used to dealing with the likes of Gena and his cousin. I was totally flabergasted at Uncle D being so inappropriate with Joanne. I am surprised that Cecile didn't put a cap in that old man's behind. The idiot. He was rude and someone needs to take him to task for being disrespectful.
Author's Response:
Stephen was more upset with himself than Cara. He was afraid that after dealing with his backstabbing family members and then the ex showing up, that she would run. He still is feeling a little insecure about their age difference, not so much of her lack of knowledge, which is why they had the 'talk'
Thanks for the review. No internet yet at home. I'm at work so I don't think I'll be updating until next week. We'll see.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: August 31 2012 08:55 pm
Wow!!! Josef annoucement was straight to the point so hopefully it mean Douglas, Fawn, Aunt Cecily and the rest of the backstabbers. I can't for the next chapter. Hope your internet is back working, but hey I'll wait.
Reviewer: skriver Signed [Report This]Date: August 31 2012 08:12 pm
LOVED IT I AM GLAD THAT YOU GOT RID OF GENA NOW GET RID OF DOUGLAS AND I THINK THAT EVERTHINHG WILL BE OKAY. AND THAT THEY HAD THE TALK ABOUT HIS NEEDS.
I GIVE THIS A 5 STAR
Reviewer: lady tee Signed [Report This]Date: August 31 2012 07:40 pm
Josef is my kind of man! Straight to the point, let them know where you stand and if you don't like it blame yourself!!!!! LMBO
Reviewer: Luv2Read Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 31 2012 07:23 pm
Stephan's family is strait gansta. As for Cecily and Kristen aren't they too old for fighting? And Uncle Doug, why is he all up in Stephan business?
I can't wait for the wedding to happen. There is sure to be a lot of sparks.
Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]Date: August 31 2012 06:59 pm
I love Cara even though she was/is a bit naive she holds her own and loves her man the good, bad and indifferent.
Cecil and Jo-Jo still geting it in where it fit in you go.
Anja is so happy that Josiah is feeling her now but he is one stubborn little one and when he has his mind made up it's hell to try and get him to change it....Hmmmm I wonder who he gets that from.
Douglas needs to croke like the frog he is. Fawn better wake up and smell the beans like Gena did or she is going to be outsourced where her cousin is concerned.
Great update. Thank you so much for sharing....
Happy writing
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: August 31 2012 06:58 pm
I love his mom and dad. You had me LMAO at the kissing the ass comment. Stephan likes to play rough. This ia an awful family, I'm glad his mom and dad made the decision to exclude anyone that does not want to see this couple be happy. This was an awesome update.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: August 31 2012 06:29 pm
I like Josef! That's right, let them know up front they won't be invited! Ass-Face Gwen won't be getting an invite and I hope Douglas and Fawn don't get one!
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: August 31 2012 06:28 pm
I will be away for a month, that means that I will miss my daily fix of VC, especially you-not happy.
Reviewer: NK Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 31 2012 01:51 pm
What is up with Stephan after he and Cara have sex? He seems mad at her but he should understand that she's inexperienced in serious, adult relationships and she was just jealous! I think his character is being insensitive. He just plays with her ass for the first time after she says she wants something special and he just picks up his clothes and leaves the room? No reassuring cuddles? No sweet kiss on the forehead or something? Dude, Stephan, the girl is a nervous wreck right now; she's preggers, she's never been surrounded by extravagant displays of wealth, and she just got mindfucked by your evil family members and your tactless ex! This couple needs some dialogue rather than just good sex.
Oh, wait. I guess that's been the theme of this entire story. Clever, clever, Brenda...
Author's Response:
Cara has her insecurities and Stephan has his. She has taken flight twice and he was afraid that after the Gena incident, she would withdraw from him. He's upset with himself, not Cara that the incident happened. Remember he left her at the table to handle some business only to come back and find that the vultures had decended on her.
There will be more talking between the two (more sex too) LOL
Thanks for the wonderful review.
Reviewer: tens Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 31 2012 06:52 am