Title: X

I love this story so far. It is my favorite from those I've read for this challenge. Don't keep me waiting long for an update.

Reviewer: Acdromance Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 22 2012 05:23 am

Title: X

Ava, why are you so trusting, I think Thor would know Amora better than you so you should heed his advise and let him deal with the decietful heifer.  But no, you have to try to handle it on your own, so dumb!!  And after such good loving.  I have a bad feeling about her going for a walk.  More please!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2012 05:13 am

Title: X

Why does she feel like she knows more than Thor does? And why didn't she tell him about the dream?

Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2012 05:08 am

Title: I

that dream was soo weird i wondering whats the meaing behind and if that was some kind of warning, why isn't she listening to thor about staying away from amora i guess she'll learn the hard way.....great update i loved it 

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2012 05:03 am

Title: X

she just dosenot listen thor"s gonna be really mad

Reviewer: jadaominique Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2012 03:36 am

Title: X

great chapter :D

Reviewer: mfoto22 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2012 02:17 am

Title: IX

Whew the lovemaking was hot!! Thumbs up.

Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2012 01:17 am

Title: IX

hopefully loki's plan backfires and amora changes her mind and doesn't go through with it, there is something special about ava that no one knows about, i hope find out what that is....great update can't wait to read more 

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2012 09:29 am

Title: IX

I love how Thor appreciates and takes care of her. I kew somthing was not right about Amora. Please update soon.

Reviewer: ellenangel69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2012 09:20 am

Title: VIII

I love the way Thor cares for Ava, but not having the details of the last chapter's cliffhanger was a letdown.  I hope we get farther past PG-13 in the next chapter...

Reviewer: tens Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 20 2012 08:40 am

Title: IX

I love this story, the more I read the more feel what you are getting to us as reader.

 

Great Job

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2012 06:22 am

Title: IX

great chapter :D

Reviewer: mfoto22 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 20 2012 05:32 am

Title: IX

well worth the wait keep it coming was loki spying on them

Reviewer: jadaominique Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2012 03:36 am

Title: IX

Oh my I loved loved the sexiness of this chapter. Thor was so sweet and demanding at the same time. Ava and Thor ====HOTTTTTTTTT.
GREAT CHAPTER PLEASE UPDATE ASAP

Reviewer: foxyprime Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2012 03:34 am

Title: VIII

Yay another great chapter loe dom Thor I belive he is right there is just something not right about that woman. Now if Ava will lesten to Thor is another story. Can't wair for more.

Reviewer: ellenangel69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 19 2012 11:23 am

Title: VIII

Ava you don't know anything about this Amora, why are you implicitly trusting that blonde haired ho>=?  Let Thor deal with Amora he knows her better than you every would so let him handle it please.  I am so loving this story.  More please!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 19 2012 05:40 am

Title: I

This is fantastic! I love Loki!

Reviewer: DarkDecember Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 19 2012 05:17 am

Title: VIII

oh wow ava should've listen to the guard because it seems like she's forgetting where she is and amora is TROUBLE and ava should relaize that really can't trust anyone besides thor and frigga....great update i can't wait to read more

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 19 2012 04:08 am

Title: VIII

Ava has already started acting foolishly. From venturing into unknown woods in the middle of a battle to being ready to cosign for someone she doesn't know in an unknown land, she's being pretty stupid. I hope that she does heed Thor's warning and stay out of trouble.

Reviewer: AP Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 19 2012 03:56 am

Title: VIII

Oh the bath scene was sweet. o love how protective Thor is of Ava. I am glad that Thor and Ava talked and Ava listened even if she did not understand. please please more updates

Reviewer: foxyprime Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 19 2012 02:57 am

Title: VII

ava needs to be more cautious when she around these people and remember that she's in another world, i understand she's lonely when thor is not around be she can't befriend people immediately...great update

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 18 2012 11:59 pm

Title: VII

Once again you left me hanging. I loved loved loved this chapter. I am glad to see Thor taking care of Ava. I hope Thor wakes up and sees all the enemies he has. I hated how Sif acted but glad Thor came back for Ava. please another update ASAP

Reviewer: foxyprime Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 18 2012 09:11 am

Title: VII

Once again you left me hanging. I loved loved loved this chapter. I am glad to see Thor taking care of Ava. I hope Thor wakes up and sees all the enemies he has. I hated how Sif acted but glad Thor came back for Ava. please another update ASAP

Reviewer: foxyprime Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 18 2012 09:11 am

Title: VII

Once again you left me hanging. I loved loved loved this chapter. I am glad to see Thor taking care of Ava. I hope Thor wakes up and sees all the enemies he has. I hated how Sif acted but glad Thor came back for Ava. please another update ASAP

Reviewer: foxyprime Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 18 2012 09:11 am

Title: VII

Yes I have been wanting a IR Thor fic for while. Great storyline I can't wait to see what Thor has instore next for Lady Ava

Reviewer: ellenangel69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 18 2012 09:03 am



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