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Title: VII

I'm definitely a fan of this story and this last chapter had me needing Thor too.

 Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 18 2012 06:44 am
Title: VII

Love it, you stayed on point and brought clarity to the character.  Great Job

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 18 2012 04:34 am
Title: VI

I love the flow of the this chapter and I beginning to love character...Thor seems a little into himself but I think you fix that flow as time gos on

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 18 2012 04:28 am
Title: VII

Well Damn, that was hot!! I have this picture of Chris Hemsworth in my mind as I am reading this.  I need a fan!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 18 2012 02:51 am
Title: VII

Love Thor...fighting for supremacy with superman right now...but anyhow ..great story love it . wait for next update

 Reviewer: africanblossom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 18 2012 01:29 am
Title: VII

Love Thor...fighting for supremacy with superman right now...but anyhow ..great story love it . wait for next update

 Reviewer: africanblossom Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18 2012 01:28 am
Title: VI

Thor Nerd on Board,  let the fun begin. I won't ruin it for everyone 

 Reviewer: luv2read Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17 2012 11:48 pm
Title: VII

all i can say is damn  damn and thats just foreplay

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Date: August 17 2012 11:11 pm
Title: V

I am really enjoying this story you created. Curious to see how Ava's night with Thor goes.

 Reviewer: preppychick890 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 17 2012 06:44 pm
Title: I

i'm loving this story, im sure loki has something to do with ava arriving on their planet and loki isn't the only person ava has to worry about... can't wait to read more.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 17 2012 01:08 am
Title: V

I love it, I need more! please update soon! ahhhh!!

 Reviewer: marls Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 16 2012 11:20 pm
Title: V

girl! this agreat story.  I can picture each of the characters in my head while I am ready your story.  Great Job

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2012 11:06 pm
Title: V

I  for one am glad that you are a love story through a child's eye as you are a child.  Yes I know that that you are teenager but you're not an adult.  I like that you are taking your time in telling this story. I also like how you give character discriptions and relationship at the end of each chapter.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2012 10:57 pm
Title: V

yes girl spend the night with chris hemsworth uhh i mean thor you know he's a good man or god go get him girl

 Reviewer: jadadominique Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2012 10:56 pm
Title: IV

Ava is in like Flynn, the momma likes her.  At least the step-momma.  I just hope that Loki get is comeuppance that is due to him before the end of this lovely story.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2012 10:50 pm
Title: V

Loved loved loved this chapter. Thor may be getting some competition. I loved the interaction between Ava and Thor. I can't believe you stopped their please update ASAP

 Reviewer: foxyprime Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2012 10:40 pm
Title: IV

Very good chapter, I loved how she interacted with Thor. I am glad to see Thors mom help and get her dressed. I loved the talk she had with his mother. please update asap

 Reviewer: foxyprime Signed [Report This]
Date: August 16 2012 09:22 pm
Title: III

I am not confused, I love the start of your story and this chapter.  Please update soon

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2012 08:40 pm
Title: III

Me likey!! More please.Interesting story so far.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2012 05:21 am
Title: III

Very good start, I hope to read more about Ava and Thor. I knew Loki was bad. I hope someone protects Ava. please update ASAP

 Reviewer: foxyprime Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2012 02:22 am
Title: III

I love Thor,  since I'm into Thor I know the characters and there ways, I'm loving the story.

 Reviewer: luv2read Signed [Report This]
Date: August 16 2012 02:14 am
Title: III

I already know that Loki is bad news,  I can't wait to find why Loki brought Ava to Asgard.  I love comic book superheros!!  I am wondering how he thinks bringing Ava and Thor together will make him a king?  Loki is loco and needs some medication.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2012 02:07 am
Title: III

Love Thor, hope Ava ends up with him

 Reviewer: Raynee Signed [Report This]
Date: August 16 2012 02:07 am
Title: II

I love Thor is so hot!!  Loki is so jealous of Thor, it's your own that you aren't half the God that Thor is.  Beat him the until the white meat shows Thor!!  More please!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2012 12:56 am
Title: I

please continue i love thor and loki but loki is the man let her end up with him

 Reviewer: jadadominique Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2012 12:02 am


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