Reviews For Shattered
Title: Chapter 1

Its been forever! Really missing your writing and this atory! Hoping for two long happy ensing chapters!!! 

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 28 2016 09:34 am

Title: Chapter 25

Please oh please oh please oh please update this story soon!  It's amazing!!!  All your stories are freaking fantastic!!!

Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30 2015 07:48 am

Title: Chapter 25

I'm  so thankful you're pushing through your MIA muse.  I'm sticking around to the end even if we're both collecting SSI..Lol   My only request is that you give us a happy ending..This couple deserves that.

Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2014 04:49 pm

Title: Chapter 25

Very good. I like the realistic conflict in her waking up, not all roses. I feel for Gavin wanting so much from her, hopefully he can be patient with her. I also feel for Nyla she is definitely going through a lot. They both need to start being honest with each other to be able to work through this. Tina needs to leave for a while or just go stay with Trent. Great chapter!

Reviewer: shadow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2014 07:26 am

Title: Chapter 25

This was a good chapter. It was expected for her memories to be a bit fuzzy and him to have some gulity about the accident. She will remember; however, how she will handle it remains to be see. There is just too many misconceptions and miscommunications with these two. I am hoping for a happy ending. I hope your muse get's back from Bora Bora soon!

Reviewer: d3stin2l0v3 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 01 2014 02:45 am

Title: Chapter 25

I like this story.  I hope they can be happy together, but it seems like more problems are on the horizon.  Good story.

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 31 2014 09:19 am

Title: Chapter 25

I like this story and hope you finish it.

Reviewer: MrsWifeyS Signed [Report This]
Date: August 31 2014 12:03 am

Title: Chapter 1

You came back, and you came back strong. I'm glad Nyla and the baby are ok. Now, the recovery.  

Reviewer: azzure1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30 2014 10:35 am

Title: Chapter 25

I think since you are 2 chapters away from the conclusion, you will need to make it dramatic a real cliffhanger!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 30 2014 06:06 am

Title: Chapter 25

I am so happy Nyla woke up,  but her sister Tina is still a bitch!!  Trent just needs to go away, his punk ass needs to find some  business.  I will reread the chapter where Nyla got hit because I don't know why  Gavin feels guilty? 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 30 2014 03:22 am

Title: Chapter 25

I think Nyla needs to speak up and tell Gavin how she feels and he needs to so the same. Then Nyla needs to come to Grips with the pregnancy and be happy. They have had so much drama that they need happiness. Great update but still sad. 

Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29 2014 07:42 pm

Title: Chapter 25

I'm glad you're back. Nyla has long hard road ahead. I hope Gavin tells her the truth at some point so they can stop pussyfooting around!! There were a lot of typos but very good otherwise. I think I need go back and read it from the beginning. Lol

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2014 07:30 am

Title: Chapter 25

I like this chapter because it feels so realistic.  Not everything will be sunshine and roses after Nyla gets out of the coma.  It's an adjustment for her, Gavin and everyone.  Gavin needs to tell Nyla the truth about everything because she needs to recover the gaps in her story and start to fully heal both mentally and physically.  The mental gaps are gonna drive her more crazy than her physical limitations.  Nyla and Gavin relationship is already rocky with the fact that they don't communicate the way they should and they hold on to too much guilt.  They have gotten better, but they need to work on that together. 

Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2014 06:50 am

Title: Chapter 25

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: jackson1973 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2014 05:22 am

Title: Chapter 25

Yay you're back... Great update as always

Reviewer: keikei2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2014 04:18 am

Title: Chapter 25

I'm glad that she is alive and the baby is fine. Gavin fight for your family.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2014 04:17 am

Title: Chapter 23- Letting go

You interchanged Tina and Lisa a lot, but I'm still liking what I'm reading. Please post more more frequently!

Reviewer: Braided Butterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: June 21 2014 09:44 am

Title: Chapter 23- Letting go

It should be noted that regardless of the fact that you have no editor, this is still a beautiful love story. Writers block be damned!

 

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 06 2014 11:11 am

Title: Chapter 23- Letting go

Glad you're back.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 06 2014 10:16 am

Title: Chapter 23- Letting go

Even though I'm on the edge of my seating yelling at the compter asking abot what's next, you can't leave me hanging like that, I also think the way you ended the chapter was great.  It woild have been easy to let the chapter end with Nyla wake up, her and Gavin work things out by her bedside and they live happily ever after.  That would have been too predictable.  I like the way yo ended the chapter becase I feel like this opens you up to taking the story line into many different directions instead of pigeonholing you into an forgone and predictable story and ending.  I'm wating on pins & needles on the edge of my seat holding my breath to see what happens next.

 

CAN'T WAIT!!!!

Reviewer: ChocolateLovesVanilla Signed [Report This]
Date: June 03 2014 06:38 pm

Title: Chapter 23- Letting go

I hope beyond hope that Nyla and the baby pull through because Gavin will really lose it and will never be the same without them (cries)

Reviewer: keikei2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2014 07:26 pm

Title: Chapter 23- Letting go

Your story has taken an interesting turn.  You've handled Nyla's perspective beautifully.

Reviewer: pearlcat Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2014 05:17 am

Title: Chapter 23- Letting go

I'm glad this story is back. I hope Nyla and hte baby make it.

Reviewer: azzure1020 Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2014 05:01 am

Title: Chapter 23- Letting go

I am now a writer, so when i read such a great chapter i do not understand you having writers block, i can't wait to see a chapter where you mind is clear and your direction for the story is known to you. wow is all i can say. 

Reviewer: dounome Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2014 04:30 am

Title: Chapter 23- Letting go

I am so glad to see qn update of Nya and Gavin!!  She has to go back, she got a second chance ar love and family this was meant to be so quit being stupid!!  That heifer Lisa works my last nerve that asshole Trent needs an ass whopping!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2014 02:02 am



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