Wow I really do love this..I can't wait for a new up-date
Reviewer: bebe2pink Signed [Report This]Date: March 13 2013 01:38 pm
Great update, I can't wait for more..
Update Soon!!





Date: March 13 2013 11:33 am
Finally. Break threw. :). Please update soon
Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]Date: March 13 2013 11:29 am
I absolutely love this story, please please update soon. Jacqueline and James are good strong characters and they belong together...
Please do give up on this story, you have a strong following
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Date: March 13 2013 09:14 am
He shouldn't have kept her against her will..
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Date: January 23 2013 01:34 pm
Damn, Evil James got her again.
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Date: January 23 2013 08:21 am
I love your story, why I do love alpha male's I am patiently waiting for an update and more story line, its that good!!!
Alex
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Date: January 23 2013 06:43 am
Very good update. I wish that we could read more of Katherine thoughts and what she will do next.
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Date: January 23 2013 05:39 am
I like this story, but I feel like it's missing something. I didn't see many grammatical errs and your writing style is just fine, but it's missing that exra something that makes it great. It has wonderful potential. I hope James doesn't rape her or do anything harmful, if he does can you add a warning in the chapter please?
Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed

Date: January 23 2013 05:26 am
I love the story line....but it could use some editing.
Reviewer: Ldp Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 23 2013 04:49 am
What a bastard James is!! Her mother was the problem and he's taking it out her her. Furthermore he got all his money back!! Hope Jacqueline escapes and gets the best of him. HE needs a reality check!!
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Date: January 23 2013 03:14 am
I like Jacqueline, she is totally her own woman and she is a strong black woman with a brain.
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Date: January 23 2013 02:53 am
Happy to see an update. I feel like this isn't the end of us seeing Katherine though. She's just crazy enough to try to pull something else. The one word sparring between James & Jack was cute. I hope you can update again soon.
Reviewer: AP Anonymous




Date: January 13 2013 07:53 pm
lol great chapter
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: January 11 2013 01:32 am
Jacqueline will get him when he least expect it in the heart.
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Date: January 10 2013 02:17 pm
please, please, update soon I absolutely love these two character with their strong personality
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Date: January 10 2013 06:33 am
I want her to be so stubborn that she would rather die, not willing to cave into James needs. Hopefully she will improve into a tougher person quick.
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Date: January 07 2013 12:46 am
James is so wrong for making her hold it that long. I don't think that she should make it easy for him at all! Her mother is such a bitch for doing that to her! MOre please!
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: November 26 2012 10:34 pm
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Date: November 26 2012 01:55 am
Nice update, can't wait for more
Reviewer: luv2read Signed [Report This]Date: November 26 2012 12:34 am
Enjoying this so far....can't wait to read more:-)
Reviewer: kwajeraspen Signed [Report This]Date: November 25 2012 03:30 pm
Just started this story today - good premise; however, the grammatical errors are distracting. Please clean them up so that one can concentrate on the story - I will continue to read.
Reviewer: katie Signed [Report This]Date: November 25 2012 02:28 pm
Jacqueline rocks!!! Lol...loved the update. more please and Thank you.
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Date: November 25 2012 11:41 am
hahaha, this chapter made me laugh - wow, Jack is going to butt heads with James at every chance she gets - he better be prepared! thanks for the update!
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: November 25 2012 10:05 am
Just when it was getting good
Reviewer: kimyso Signed [Report This]Date: November 25 2012 05:51 am