Reviews For To Love the Devil
Title: Houdini

Thanks for the update! I like Jacqueline's spirit.

Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 25 2012 03:26 am

Title: Houdini

James is more wrong than tits on a bull!!!  James may be crazy but damn he's fine!!  Although I will have to reread this story from the begining because I have forgotten how the characters go to this point. 

Fabulous!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 25 2012 03:19 am

Title: Help!

hahaha, great update! damn, she nearly escaped but then James came and ended the fun! oh well i look LIKE ALWAYS to more and hope the bee stung isn't serious...

thank for the update, BJR!!

Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 24 2012 09:06 pm

Title: Help!

I am cracking up.  Good update!!!!  The sayin is, "come hell or high water".

Reviewer: kimyso Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 23 2012 08:43 pm

Title: Help!

This chapter is hilarious...eager foe more!!!

Reviewer: cocoablue Signed [Report This]
Date: October 18 2012 10:01 pm

Title: Help!

That had me cracking up, Jacqueling was whopping Ace's and his crew asses.  That scene with the bee was funny too.  James now realizes that Jacqueline isn't a push over and that she is willing to fight to get away from him.  Most excellent!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 15 2012 04:50 am

Title: Help!

That was too funny!! She almost got away but James put a stop to that! Hope that bee sting doesn't turn out to be more serious!! Can't wait to read the next update.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 15 2012 04:47 am

Title: Help!

lol...I wish it was a little longer.  However, I enjoyed the update.  I hate when a women do not have backbone or to needy

 

Great Job

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 15 2012 03:14 am

Title: Miss Independent

I kinda like this, I don't like the title tho, please continue!

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: October 14 2012 09:46 am

Title: Miss Independent

OMG I LOVED THIS CHAPTER SOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH please please pleaseeeee continue for the sake of all humanity. I hate Katherine and Jackline needs to watch her back her momma dirty.

Reviewer: MissOctober Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 09 2012 11:15 pm

Title: Miss Independent

Good chapter

Reviewer: SeriouslyMe Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 09 2012 11:13 pm

Title: Miss Independent

great update! intense and i like that Jackie is feisty - wow, this is ging to be something else, alright! like always look forward to more - thanks!

Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2012 09:40 am

Title: Miss Independent

Loved the update!! More please. Wonder what plans James has for her?

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2012 01:31 am

Title: Miss Independent

Great update, but what is seventeen hundred thousand dollars...? I was trying to make sense of it in my head...does he mean 170,000? One hundred seventy thousand?



Author's Response:

Sorry about that a big mistake on my part it's been fixed

Reviewer: JB Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 07 2012 02:33 pm

Title: Cast

I really like the concept/plot line of your story and I think it is very interesting. I'd like to read more but all the grammatical errors made it very hard to get through the past 2 chapters, and I don't think I'd be able to get through the rest of the story if those mistakes are not fixed. I'm only saying this to help, because I don't want to stop reading your story, but please find a beta or someone to edit it. 



Author's Response:

I'm going to fix that today thanks for pointing them out I hope that you still read the story

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 07 2012 10:52 am

Title: Cast

Hi, I just started reading and love your story. One thing though. 1700 hundred thousand dollars?  I think that's a typo? Or a million dollars. 

Reviewer: Patience Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 07 2012 07:18 am

Title: Miss Independent

Good update . I feel so bad for Jacqueline . What a bitch of a mother she has . Can't wait to see what happens next .

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 07 2012 05:40 am

Title: Miss Independent

great update...more please

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 07 2012 05:05 am

Title: Miss Independent

Thanks for updating. 

 

You need to watch your tenses because it gets very confusing. A good beta could you smooth out the kinks and make the story flow better.  

 

Poor Jack, I'm happy she's not a wilting flower. 

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]
Date: October 07 2012 04:24 am

Title: Miss Independent

Please kill Katherine, she doesn't deserve to live she sold her only child to get out of debt and to continue to live.  Now James and Ace are kidnapping Jacqueline, man I am wondering what he has planned for her? C-I-L-L Katherine!!  I want her going to hell in gasoline draws wearing a pork chop necklace for the hounds of hell!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 07 2012 02:09 am

Title: Miss Independent

Wow , that's crazy to sell your daughter because you are jealous of her youth. Great start I can't wait for an update.

Reviewer: luv2read Signed [Report This]
Date: October 07 2012 02:06 am

Title: Miss Independent

This story has been very interesting from the start!!!

Reviewer: cocoablue Signed [Report This]
Date: October 07 2012 01:22 am

Title: A Price to Pay

great start can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!

Reviewer: cdy1216 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2012 02:47 am

Title: Cast

yup, i'm intrgued and look forward to "mother dearest" slow and (very) painful demise - what she did is not okay no matter how much you hate your own flesh and blood (...!!) so i look forward to Kat's downfall *toothy grin* but other than thanking you for the new story, i was wonder happened to the sequel of Tiger Lily? are you going to wait until your current stories are done or?

 



Author's Response:

I'm working on the sequal as we speak

Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2012 09:34 pm

Title: A Price to Pay

Yes, me likey.  More Please.

Reviewer: kimyso Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2012 05:38 am



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